[Flashback] Dire Straits

A fierce storm blows an Eypharian trading ship off its trading route, to unknown shores full of unpredictable perils.

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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

[Flashback] Dire Straits

Postby Subira on January 8th, 2012, 4:05 am

Season of Winter, Day 18, 506 AV

Whenever Subira found herself in a difficult or desperate situation, where the odds seemed stacked against her and hope alone could not sustain her, she would think about the first moment she ever laid eyes on her ship, that moment of piercing happiness and joy. Fresh-painted and gleaming with spotless white canvas and polished wood, the small khnor seemed as light and graceful as a bird. It was an apt comparison, for the words Sweet Lark had just been painted in great black letters across her slim golden-yellow hull, and the shape of a bird in flight had been sculpted above the curving prow. With her sleek, flowing lines and her white sails spread like wings, she looked built for flying rather than sailing. Beside Subira, some of the crew were already making bawdy jests about the whores at the Pillars of Dust, which were also called larks, and predicting that manning the Lark's oars would be as sweet as spreading a woman's legs.

Subira never heard a word they said. Standing on the docks, drinking in the sight of the Lark, she thought the ship was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. The thought that it was hers to pilot, hers to guide from port to port, left her trembling with delight. Even the memory of that moment still filled her with happiness and love, warming her, overflowing her heart, and giving her the strength to go on.

And now, in the present day, she sorely needed that strength, for her situation was dreadful indeed. Her beloved Lark lay awkwardly on her side upon the shore, looking as helpess as a broken-winged bird. Splintery timbers jutted from the ship like broken bones, and the mast was snapped in half. The terrible jagged breach across her keel gaped wide, as though ready to shout accusations of incompetence and failure to its navigator.

Small wonder that she took refuge in her memories.

She still couldn't quite believe how quickly it had all happened. It was only the third day of the Sweet Lark's winter run to Abura, the last she would make this year. The sea had been grey and choppy all morning, and neither Subira or the captain could get the measure of the wind, which seemed to come from everywhere all at once. She had never seen the sea in such a mood, so erratic and wild. Gloomy dark clouds scudded before the pale sun, as sly and shifty as shadows on an Ahnatep night.

Around late afternoon, a chilling, ice-cold rain began to fall in a slanting curtain, soaking the decks and stinging her face. As they sailed on, the winds grew stronger, churning the sullen sea and rocking the ship from side to side. Then, as they crested a frothing wave, a fierce gale blustered in from the east and hurled towers of spume across the ships. The prow began to swing with increasing velocity as the wind bore down on the small khnor, and soon they were broadside to the sea and the gale. All heads turned toward the quarterdeck as the whole ship shuddered and the mast swayed ominously in its bed.

For an instant, Subira could only gape at the unexpected, unbelievable storm that had arisen so abruptly from the swirling winds and waves. Then she rang the bell violently and found her voice. "All hands on deck!" she hollered. "All hands on deck!"
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[Flashback] Dire Straits

Postby Subira on January 9th, 2012, 9:23 pm

Mixed with the gale, Subira's cry and the ringing of the bell brought the crew pounding out of their cabins. Beside her, the captain of the Lark was shouting orders to sailors as they emerged one by one, straining to make himself heard above the pelting rain. If Subira had had time for pride, she would have felt a warm surge of it as she watched some of the sailors rushing to adjust the khnor's single sail and others grappling with the rain-slickened rigging, while the oarsmen slipped belowdecks to lend their strength in the fight against the pitching waves. The Souths trained their sailors to be as tough, daring, and disciplined as themselves, and it was a fine thing indeed to see the crew working smoothly together, with every man knowing his job and doing it well.

But Subira had no time for anything but fierce concentration as she unknotted the protective lashing from the wheel's spokes, braced herself, and swung the wheel hard to starboard. They had to follow their course and fight their way through the storm, not get blown away toward unknown waters. The Lark's hold held valuable sheaves of wadj and rare dyes and gems bound for Abura, and she wasn't about to let this storm ruin her cargo or the House's profits.

The gale from the east struck once more, slamming a mighty fist into the ship's side. Subira could have sworn that she felt the ship buckling beneath her feet. Behind her, she could hear sailors and oarsmen uttering fervent prayers to Laviku and Zulrav like curses as the ropes were strained to their limits and the foaming waves rose higher and higher, threatening to engulf the deck. The chants of the oarmaster echoed raggedly, trying to keep pace with the erratic waves.

Half-blinded by the lashing rain, Subira wrapped all four arms around the wheel. Dimly, she sensed the captain hanging on beside her, trying to help. They gasped as one when the skies above muttered with thunder.

"I smelled no storm today," the captain shouted to her, "did you?"

Subira winced and shook her head. Her training had taught her to navigate by the stars when they were visible and by touch, taste, and scent when not, but all her senses had failed her today. She had never guessed the sea and wind could turn so fierce so quickly.

"I've never seen a storm arise this suddenly, even in winter," she shouted back. "But we can outrun the worst of the storm and ride it out, if we can just turn the ship."

Freeing one hand to brush away the hair plastered in his eyes, while gripping the wheel firmly with the other five, the captain regarded her with faint doubt. "Are you sure? Should we not turn back?"

"No," Subira answered sharply. "We keep going. We've been through storms before."

The captain hesitated, then nodded. "All right, then, pilot."

At that moment, the ship lurched in a sudden squall and the oarmaster's beat was thrown off-stroke. The ship rolled dizzyingly to one side, and for a sickening moment, five of the Lark's oars pulled at air instead of water. Both Subira and the captain found themselves clinging to the wheel for dear life. Screams rang from behind them as sailors struggled to keep their feet or catch onto part of the ship before they fell over the side.

Then the ship righted herself, and they could hear the entire crew breathe freely again. Glancing behind her, Subira watched as some of the sailors untangled themselves from the rigging. A shout from below made the captain and Subira whirl around in disbelief, unable to believe their ears.

"The oarmaster's gone! Swept off the ship!" someone cried, and in a moment, several others took up the shout. "Two of the oarsmen as well!"

For a moment, the captain and Subira stared at each other, dumbfounded. "All right," the captain finally said. "I'll go below and lead the chant. I've rowed on a khnor before. Pilot, you stay here. Take the helm."

He stood unsteadily and descended from the quarterdeck to take the oarmaster's place. A moment later, the captain's strong, resonant baritone voice rang throughout the ship, taking up the rhythmic chant that gave the oarsmen pace and strength. Slowly, but with growing vigor, the oars on either side of the Lark began dipping steadily into the foaming water again, laboriously impelling the khnor forward.

Mighty Laviku, cradle us gently in your hand! Subira prayed urgently.

Alone at the helm, she clapped a hand over her eyes when a blinding flash of lightning brightened the skies, showing the dark underbellies of the clouds above and the frothing white crests of the sea. For a moment, she wondered if she had decided rightly over the ship's course. Doubts did a sailor no good in the midst of a storm, though, for once made, the decision could not be unmade ever again. In the space of a heartbeat, she had elected to keep going, and the captain had not gainsaid her choice. That was all there was to it. The death of the oarmaster and the two oarsmen troubled her, though; they would not be easy to replace.

Thunder rumbled in her ears. Almost immediately, another bolt of lightning lanced across the sky, making Subira duck reflexively. Then she heard another sailor cry out, his voice unstrung with fear. The two words made her scramble to her feet and peer ahead beyond the ship, into the storm.

"Reef ahead!"
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Postby Subira on January 14th, 2012, 10:49 pm

At that moment, the Sweet Lark's sail bellied full of wind, and Subira found herself regretting her overconfident decision to continue sailing straight through the storm. Looking beyond the prow, she could see the curving black reef about two hundred yards ahead, its rocky claws jutting upward above the water's surface. The gale must have blown them farther off course than Subira could have imagined, for she had been sailing the Abura route for years and had no memory of this fearsome, maw-like reef. If they continued going at their present speed, those jagged rock spines would tear through the hull like fine wadj.

An incoherent cry escaped her lips before she could restrain it, followed by an immediate, hot surge of shame. A lady of the Souths did not show fear, particularly not before her crew. All they should ever see from her was competence and resolve. She drew herself up to her full height and turned around to issue orders to her sailors.

"Get that sail down!" she shouted at full volume, pointing with her top right hand for emphasis. "Lower it, now! And raise the storm tops'l!"

The sailors scrambled to obey her commands, clambering across the pitching decks and climbing onto the rigging to unfasten knots and cables. The main sail was lowered and the tops'l raised in its place. Stripped free, the sail snapped and buckled like a maddened desert cow as the wind caught it, and the mast, already bending under the gale's onslaught, snapped in two. Screams raked the air, followed by harsh sounds of axes and knives slicing the ropes that bound the mast, cutting the now-useless wooden beam adrift. Two men were unable to untangle themselves from the rigging before the mast was cast overboard, and they cried out helplessly as the waves swallowed them and the mast and ushered them into Laviku's watery grave.

At the wheel, Subira could not spare even a moment for grief, as she exerted her strength into turning the ship hard to port. Her heart sat in her throat as she watched the distance between the Lark and the reef growing smaller and smaller. Despite all their efforts, the sea bore them inexorably forward, toward destruction.

"Turn, you filthy whore, turn!" she swore, pushing all her weight into the wheel. Behind her, she could hear the captain's voice exhorting the oarsmen with much the same sweet invectives: "Come on, you bastards, you foysha! Puuuuull!"

Taking their strength from him, the rowers dipped their oars into the sea, but still the ship made no way. The wind and the waves still dragged her forward. The rain slashed at their faces and columns of salt spray spilled onto the deck, the water feeling bitingly cold to their desert-bred skin. Subira shivered and sneezed violently as the foaming sea flooded aboard the ship. An equally chilling gust sent the Lark swerving, and the wheel spun out of her hands. With all four hands, she grabbed for it, a wheel spoke cutting into one palm, and set her course again, but the ship continued to lurch and twist drunkenly, barely heeding the crew's combined efforts to turn her away from the reef.

In the sudden glare of lightning, Subira could see the encroaching reef, frighteningly nearer now. Rocky outcrops lay in wait ahead and to starboard. The other sailors saw it too, and groans and curses filled the air. One sailor broke down and moaned, "We're not going to make it, we're not going to make it," and the sharp clap of thunder seemed to echo his words.

We will make it! We have to make it Subira resolved. Though the reef loomed unavoidably before them, there were gaps here and there in the rocks.

As lightning split the dark skies again, she saw a break in the reef, directly ahead of the Lark. The wheel and the helm were hers alone, and Subira committed the ship to it. The gale blew harder now and the sea raged around them. She had no other choice but to try and make it, or die smashed upon the rocks.

"Hang on! Hang on, if you love your lives!" she shouted. "And pray!"

Clinging to the wheel, she felt as though her muscles had tied themselves into knots from the strain. A great wave towered above the ship like a wall of grey water and crashed onto the decks with an impact like the rumble of the thunder. With sickening slowness, the ship nosed into the narrow gulch through the reef that she had spotted. The break seemed to get smaller and narrower the closer they came, its sides looking less clear and discernible than they had only a moment ago when she'd made her decision.

And then Subira realized that what she had thought was a pathway through was in fact a darker patch on the reef and that the "sides" were lined with jutting spikes. It was not their escape that she had seen. It was their doom.

With a cry of horror, she grabbed the wheel. But it was too late.

The entire ship shuddered and wailed shrilly in torment as her keel scraped against the razor-sharp reef below. Then, with a mighty groan, the timbers burst apart and seawater flooded in, dragging the bow of the ship downward into the sea. The ship reeled forward, and her crew screamed in terror as they came free of their lashings and tumbled into the triumphant waves. More rocks scraped at the ship's sides and found more weaknesses, punching holes through which water geysered through like unexpected springs in the desert.

Numbed by the chaos and ruin she had just caused, Subira sank bonelessly to the decks. Tears prickled her eyes, blinding her with their fiery, fierce sting.

I've killed us, she thought dully. It's all over now.

Above the din of the storm and the groaning of the ship's timbers, she heard a single voice raised like a trumpet: the captain's, loud and valiant and, for all its raggedness, still commanding. "We're not dead yet! Come on, you sons of chupras! Stand here gaping and the sea will have us! We have to make landfall!" He took a deep breath and loosed it in a defiant roar. "GO!"
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Postby Subira on February 17th, 2012, 9:24 pm

Roused from her stunned stupor by the captain's raised voice, Subira dazedly climbed to her feet upon the pitching, spray-soaked deck and grabbed at a slick, wind-whipped rope for support. She wavered like a drunken woman as the prow of the ship dipped and bobbed, driven forward by the wind and the sea across the rock spines of the reef. The sound of the sharp rocks grinding through the hull timbers filled her ears, her entire world. Surely the ship would capsize, and everyone on it would be swallowed by the waves and the storm, never again to sail the sea or to see Ahnatep again.

Then the captain was bellowing in her ear, his insistent voice drowning out the sounds of the crunching wood. "Pilot! Get to the oars!" he shouted, his face only a few inches from hers. "Keep the ship moving! We'll be battered to pieces if we stay here. We've got to make landfall!"

"I...I..." The first words that came to mind were, I was the one who got us into this mess. I piloted the ship into the reef. How can you possibly expect me to get us out of it? How can I be trusted?

But the long years of discipline learned at her uncle Harpenres' side suppressed her instinctive panicked reaction and made her shout, simply, "Yes, sir!"

More than anything, Subira wanted to redeem herself after her disastrous mistake. Her mind was a blank, except for the overwhelming feeling of failure and the desire to save her endangered ship, and the captain's order filled her with purpose. She scrambled and slipped along the tilting deck until she reached one of the rowers' benches and secured herself there. As she took hold of a long oar, she could hear the captain bawling loudly to the crew as they descended into the ship's hold, bullying, cursing, and encouraging them by turns, telling them to use the pitch stored in barrels, the spare planks, and even the wadj intended for trade to mend the hull. Like the other sailors, Subira took heart from his example and raised her ragged, hoarse voice to restart the rowers' beat.

The waves and collision had taken some oarsmen with them, and others were struggling to fill the empty places. Beating time with one foot, she called out, "One-two-one-two!" as loudly as she could, trying to hearten the rowers.

Her shoulders burned as she pulled the massive, heavy oar backward and pushed it with all her might. The other rowers noticed. Some of them, even in the midst of disaster and despite the respect owed to noble-born sailors and to ranking officers, couldn't help laughing aloud. Subira smiled at the sound, a grim smile, cheered by the sound even though her arms and shoulders ached with effort.

"Hey, pilot! You're doing it all wrong!" one of the rowers shouted.

"Then why," Subira panted, "why don't you...get back...to your places...and show me...how it's done?"

Below the deck, she could hear the sounds of cloth ripping and hammers banging, replacing the painfully slow grind of the timbers being crushed against the reef. Subira could feel the Lark sinking lower and lower into the water, and she ground her teeth together in fury. Again, she gasped out, "Come on, then! Why...don't you show me...how it's done? Come on...help me...pull!"

Whether driven by her exhortations or the necessity of saving their lives, the rowers finally roused and took hold of their respective oars. They bent their weight into the oars and Subira watched them out of the corner of her eye, matching her stroke to imitate their more practiced, steady rowing methods. She restarted the beat and others took up the chant, trying to get order out of chaos. They could all feel the ship no longer sinking into the sea and guessed that somehow the captain and his crewmen must have patched up the breach, stopping water from flowing into the hold and dragging them under the waves. A few brave sailors rushed up and down the stairs, carrying two or three buckets each in their multiple arms and bailing the sea water over the sides.

Still, the Lark was on the rocks, the wind and water battering inexorably at her. The oars dipped and pulled in growing unison, but still the ship could make no way. If they could not regain control, the ship would be dashed upon the rocks again and whatever the captain had improvised to mend the hull breach would be torn apart, dooming them all.

"Come on, you foyshas! Pulllll!" Subira shouted again, stamping her foot on the deck to keep time.

The rowers took their strength from her and from the captain belowdecks, his roaring voice audible above the raging surf, slashing rain, and howling winds. They threw all their strength into the oars, their arms and shoulders manipulating the oars with the skill and dexterity that only a many-armed Eypharian could bring to the task. At last, Subira could sense the ship moving perceptibly away from the reef and making headway into the sea. Everyone cried out when the side of the ship brushed against an outcrop of rocks, but the rocks crumbled and the hull timbers held safe.

"Hold your course!" the captain shouted, his dark head emerging from below decks. "I smell land ahead of us."

Subira sniffed, but all she got was a nose full of rain and salt wind. Land could be many miles away, too far for their tiring rowers and mast-less ship to reach in time. Yet, she held her tongue and kept rowing, her strokes growing smoother and easier, though her shoulders ached and burned. The captain himself took the oarmaster's place and chanted for them, turning now and then to judge their course.

And then, slowly, the waters seemed to grow a little calmer the farther they came, the gale a little less fierce and farther away. Rain fell no less heavily, but everyone on the ship could feel the storm dropping back behind them. The ship's captain rose to his feet and stumbled toward the prow, fastening his safety line to the wheel and shielding his eyes as he peered into the grey distance.

At first, none of them could understand his words, muffled as they were by the rain and his excitement. But he repeated it again and again, and gradually jubilation and relief spread among their ranks. The rowers dipped and pulled their oars with renewed energy as hope illuminated their dark, tired faces.

"What did he say?" Subira panted, almost at the limits of her strength. She sagged at her oar, wincing to feel the blisters breaking and bleeding against the smooth-grained wood.

"Shore!" the rower behind her replied joyously. "The shore! It's not far!"

"Just one more push!" another cried out hoarsely. "We can make it!"

The cry rang through the rowers, and Subira took it up. "One more push! Onward to land! Just one more push!"

Somehow, they had made it through the storm and the reef. Somehow, despite Subira's terrible mistake in judgment, they had all survived.
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Postby Subira on March 5th, 2012, 7:07 pm

More blisters formed on Subira's palms, calloused from hours gripping a ship's wheel or a rope but still softer than the hands of the older, more experienced khnor rowers, and her shoulders ached from hours of plying her oars. Beside her and behind her, though, the other rowers labored in silence, fighting the waves and their own failing bodies without protest. Their stolid endurance made Subira ashamed that she wanted to complain about how her hands hurt or how every muscle in her body throbbed and burned with exertion. She was a pearl of the Souths, a daughter of nobility, and groaning about her blisters would ill become her.

Instead, she too labored in silence, and the Lark fled from the storm, slowly sinking deeper and deeper into the water as whatever the captain had improvised to mend the hull breach gradually gave way. They were in calmer waters now, though, with the gale blowing overhead rather than directly at them, and the tempest was far out to sea in their wake. The rain had let up enough that they could all see the dark smudge of coast on the horizon creeping closer with every stroke of the oars. As the ship limped closer, every sailor could peer over the side and make out the outline of vast, rolling grasslands spreading out to meet the sea. A groan of dismay ran through the sailors when they drew close enough to see the jagged rocks lining the shore.

Unbidden, the captain scrambled to his feet and rushed to the helm, gazing toward the shore. Drained of energy, drained of strength and confidence, Subira simply toiled over her oars, too enervated to even cast them aside. Even if she were not exhausted in mind and body, with the memory of the reef scraping their hull weighing on her soul and dragging heavily at her limbs, scudding clouds hid the sun from sight, and her maps and sea manuals were all below-decks, no doubt washed away or ruined by the seawater that had flooded into the breach. Subira had no advice that she could offer to him to guide the ship to safe harbor along these unfamiliar shores.

Thin, raucous cries intruded on the splashing of the waves and the whistling of the wind. As every face turned toward land, they could see in the distance a flock of seagulls circling and skirling above a small bay bounded by a crescent of sandy beach and a slope of golden-green grassland. It was far from an ideal harbor, but for a khnor with a snapped mast and a ruptured hull, it would have to do.

Ragged and cracking, the captain's voice shouted orders to make for the gulls and the beach. The oars faltered more than once, but every time the Lark tilted and sank deeper into the water, the rowers' pace picked up gamely. Feeling lightheaded with hope and tiredness, Subira stamped the rhythm with her foot again.

Veritably inching its way forward, the ship slid through waters that turned increasingly still and shallow as they neared the shore, lightening in hue from deep blue-grey to a clear periwinkle-blue. Some rowers fainted at their posts and Subira's hands were bleeding freely, forcing her to wrap them with linen torn from her dress before she could continue rowing. Only the captain, at the bow of the ship, remained stalwart and steadfast, almost willing the ship to make it to shore. Whenever her resolve weakened, Subira found herself looking to him, and every stolen glance sent new waves of strength through her aching body.

Beyond him, she could see only flat grassland stretching as far as her eye could see, looking almost as endless as the sea behind her. Dizzily, she found herself reminded of the desert. She wondered if these grasslands could be half as implacable and hostile as those burning, golden sands beyond Ahnatep.

At long, long last, they entered the shallower waters of the bay. Subira winced when she heard the ship run aground in the shallow water, even though she knew the sand would give way where the reef had not. Leaving the bow, the captain shouted further orders. Sailors scrambled to their feet, stretching out stiff limbs and hurrying to lower ropes for disembarking.

As soon as she had swung down the ropes, grimacing every time her blistered hands touched the rough hemp, she waded through the sand to investigate the extent of the Lark's damage. On the captain's orders, the sailors slowly and gently lowered the ship to its side once everyone was ashore. Subira fell to her knees in despair and tears stung her eyes when she saw the jagged, gaping breach across the keel and the splintery timbers jutting from the ship like bones. To her dizzy eyes, she imagined that breach opening like a maw to shout accusations at her for tearing and piercing it open with her incompetence. Around her, the other sailors had also sunk into the sand, bone-weary from their exertions.

Still facing the evidence of her own failure, Subira's eyes slid closed just as theirs did and she, along with the entire crew, fell into a deep, exhausted slumber. They had made it this far, and they were still alive. Surely, after the catastrophe with the reef, the worst was behind them now, for nothing could possibly be more terrible than that.

A scant few minutes later -- or so it seemed to her sleep-starved senses -- she awoke to the sharp prick of a spear pressed against her cheek.

The touch made Subira's eyes fly open in alarm. Her entire body felt stiff and sore, her eyes were bleary, and there was dried blood on her palms. Even muzzy with sleep, though, she could not fail to count at least a dozen two-armed barbarians on horseback or foot surrounding the group of exhausted, almost comatose Eypharians. Several of them had nocked arrows to their bows and were aiming it directly at them, while others brandished spears or swords. They did not look very friendly.

The worst isn't behind us, Subira thought wearily. It's still happening right now.
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Postby Subira on March 30th, 2012, 11:55 pm

From her sound sleep, Subira came awake all at once under the distrustful, fanatical gazes of the spear- and bow-wielding barbarians staring down at her prostrate crew. Only with an intense effort of will did the navigator prevent herself from screaming and compose herself into the poised relaxation befitting an Eypharian noble. It took all her strength, though, not to rail at the gods and the cruel irony of a fate that permitted her crew to survive a storm at sea and a razor-sharp reef, only to deliver them unto the untender mercies of cowhide-clad barbarians. The impression that these barbarians would casually run Subira through the heart if she made any wrong movement did help a little in that regard.

Out of the corner of her eye, she saw the Lark's captain struggling to his feet, despite the shivers and coughs that wracked his body. His pleated linen kilt and wide silk sash were in sorry condition now, yet when he rose to his full height, Subira thought he still managed to look grander and more imposing than the fiercest of the barbarians confronting them. Emulating his example, Subira raised her chin and pushed the spear point away from her cheek with as much haughtiness as she could summon. She too climbed to her feet, turning her back on the wreck of the Lark lying on the beach.

The captain opened his mouth, but before he could say anything, Subira drew herself up to her full height and spoke first.

"Who dares steal upon us like thieves in the night?" she demanded.

The sound of her voice, harsh and raspy, made her cringe inside and also caused ripples of consternation and surprise among the assembled horsemen. Even with their primitive tattoos obscuring their features, she could discern their eyes widening in confusion and their brows furrowing with puzzlement. Subira realized she had spoken in Arumenic, which of course these savages lacked the wit to understand. They leaned their heads and gabbled in their barbarian language, hand signals passing between them in a way that reminded her of the gestures of Semhu dance or the complex modes of High Arumenic, but with far less grace and eloquence.

She frowned in irritation. If these grassland natives spoke no civilized language, how could she and the crew get through to them? How were they supposed to persuade them not to kill them?

Watching their hands and thinking about High Arumenic again, Subira wondered if she could manage to communicate with them through gestures instead of words. The grasslands were close enough to the desert that perhaps there might be some overlap between the rich, layered intricacies of High Arumenic and the shallower, more limited gestures these humans were making to each other with only their two arms. Forcing her tired mind into activity, she tried hard to remember all the stylized gestures that her comportment tutors had so painstakingly hammered into her.

After a moment's pause, she wordlessly formed a questioning mode: "What do you want with us?"

As she'd intended, the tattooed horsemen' eyes went immediately to her hands. Unfortunately, their expressions of confusion didn't lessen one whit. She tried again, spreading her upper hands wide and pointing with her lower hands from the horsemen to her crew. "What is your business with us?" They merely gabbled in their barbarian language, which she understood no more than they had understood Arumenic.

Impatiently, Subira stamped forward and planted all four hands on her hips. "Is there anything I can do to make you understand me?" she flared in annoyance.

The horsemen's eyes narrowed at her outburst, and their reaction was immediate. Before she could blink, one of the spear-wielders swung his long weapon out so that the leaf-pointed tip was positioned directly over her heart. Subira froze, stunned by the speed and skill with which he'd handled the long spear. As casually as though he were waving away a fly, the spear-wielder pulled the tip back and then extended it forward again to one side, jabbing the sharp point into her upper left arm. A trickle of blood poured down her arm, and Subira cried out in pain.

As the spear-wielder withdrew his spear slightly, she pressed her hand over the wound and staggered backward. Broad grins brightened the faces of several horsemen, their teeth startlingly white against their tattooed faces, and some even laughed softly. Subira raised her chin defiantly, gritting her teeth against the pain. Immediately, half a dozen bows were leveled at her, the arrows nocked and ready, and several spears swiveled toward her like a thicket bristling with metal points.

Behind her, she heard the captain clear his throat. Immediately, several horsemen glanced toward him, though none of them lowered their weapons away from Subira.

"Pilot," he said quietly in Arumenic, his voice carrying to her ears and no farther, "tend to your arm. Let me handle this."

Raising his voice, he walked fearlessly toward the thicket of spear points, carefully positioning himself so that he was standing in a protective position relative to Subira without being exactly in front of her. A dozen pairs of horsemen's eyes flicked toward him. Rather than being discomfited by his attention, the captain merely cleared his throat again and addressed them, not in Arumenic or gestures, but in another language, one that Subira barely recognized.

It's…Common, she realized slowly. He's…speaking Common to them. And…they're listening.
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[Flashback] Dire Straits

Postby Subira on April 12th, 2012, 5:36 pm

Subira's skin prickled fearfully with every halting, fumbling word that the Lark's courageous captain exchanged with the grinning, spear-wielding horsemen of the grasslands, anticipating the cut of sharp steel into her flesh. From the murmurs and gasps behind her, she had no doubt that the slowly reviving ship's crew felt the same about their predicament. Remembering how she had felt when she first awoke to the prod of a spearhead against her cheek, Subira could easily imagine their dismay at being in danger once more even after reaching dry land. After being harried by wind and waves to within an inch of their lives, having their lives threatened by angry horsemen hardly seemed fair.

Against this weary, sore, and hungry crew, the horsemen clearly held the upper hand, and they knew it. Subira wondered bitterly if the only reason they were holding back for now was simply because they were curious about the ship full of many-armed sailors that had unexpectedly landed on their shores. The horsemen could kill them at any time they wished; they could certainly afford to spend a minute or two asking who the Eypharians were and why they were here, before spitting them on their long spears. It was not a pleasant thought.

If their appearance had given the horsemen pause, then the Eypharian captain must have taken them aback with his poise and dignity in the face of death. Where Subira had been brash and arrogant with the barbarians, the captain was direct yet courteous, his voice as even and modulated as if he were at court. Though he shivered with cold, his face showed no fear and his words never faltered.

Subira's Common was patchy, as she'd reckoned the study of tongues less important than the mastery of navigation, so she could only partially understand what the captain was saying. It helped that he was choosing his words carefully and using simple language to convey his meaning.

"Our ship," he was telling the horsemen, "was going from one place to another. From our," here he said a word that Subira guessed must mean 'native' or 'home,' "city to another city on an island, far from here. It was not our," and here the captain croaked out a word that Subira didn't recognize, "to intrude on your land at all. We were thro- no, blown off course...do you understand 'off course'? I mean away from where we want to be...by a storm at sea."

He waved all six hands from side to side to illustrate the fierce winds and made a 'boom' noise in place of thunder. The horsemen blinked and some of them twitched involuntarily at the sound. Subira could swear, though, that some were nodding thoughtfully at him.

The captain resumed speaking in slow, careful Common. "It was never our," and he used that croaking word again, which Subira supposed must stand for 'intention' or 'purpose,' "to stay in your land or to hunt the creatures that are yours. We are tired and hurt, and our ship is..." He gestured wordlessly for a moment with three hands, clearly seeking the right description. "Wingless," the captain said at last.

Subira gawked at his choice of words, but to her astonishment, the horsemen glanced over toward the snapped mast with its dangling sails and actually grunted in agreement. She opened her mouth to speak, but then closed it. The captain was making good headway on his own through these murky waters of diplomacy; he didn't need her to chart the way.

"We only seek to go home," the captain told them, hugging his arms around his body. "If you spare our lives, we will not finger...no, linger long in your land. We will mend our ship and leave." He took a deep breath and then said, "If you wish, you may have our cargo, what is left of it, as a...a token of our thanks. We are not ungenerous. We know you only mean to protect your home. Let us show that we mean no threat to you and have no wish to take what belongs to you."

Gasps and murmurs of surprise arose from the Lark's crew at this unprecedented offer, but the captain held fast.

"Give us but a day," he appealed. "If we have not mended our ship and left in a day, then you are free to kill us. Watch and guard us all day if you wish, to make sure we do not harm anything. Let your horses..." No horseman himself, the captain's brow furrowed momentarily. "Feed on the grass and rest," he said at last. "You will see that we only care about healing...uh, fixing our ship and going home. We will leave in a day and never return to these shores."

He gave his most persuasive smile. "Please, grant us a day to heal and leave. If we are not gone, or if we do anything but fix our ship, our lives will be yours. When we leave, our cargo is yours, if you wish it. I ask only for a little time, my ship, and the lives of my crew. Nothing more."

When he fell silent, the horsemen turned to each other and leaned in their heads, actually considering the captain's offer from what the astonished Subira could see. Words and gestures flickered between them, reminding her anew of High Arumenic. She marveled at the captain's patience and tried to stem her own anxiety by concentrating on the wound on her arm. Though it had stopped bleeding, it still felt raw and painful and needed bandaging. Moving with exaggerated slowness, for fear of provoking yet another spear-wielder to stab her, Subira carefully tore off a strip of linen from the armhole of her robe and knotted it two-handed around her upper left arm. She had just finished when one of the horsemen, a white-haired elder from the look of him, cleared his throat and addressed the Eypharian captain.

"Not one day," the elder said in curiously accented Common.

Horrified groans and sighs came from the assembled crew. He's going to kill us, Subira thought.

The elder went on, raising a hand to forestall the Eypharian captain. "One day is too long. We will give you until..." He pointed skyward. "Until the sun has set and the moon has risen to his highest point. If you are still here after then, then we will kill you. Is this agreed?"

Subira stifled a gasp of protest. From the angle of the sun, it was already late afternoon. Was a few hours enough time to repair the hull and make the Lark sea-worthy again?

The captain bowed deeply to the elder, and she realized that a few hours would have to be enough. "It is agreed."
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[Flashback] Dire Straits

Postby Subira on October 8th, 2012, 7:50 pm

For the first time, Subira found herself wishing she'd paid more attention to her father and older brother when they got into one of their endless, wearisome, and unbelievably comprehensive discussions about shipbuilding and engineering. At the time, just listening to them for ten minutes could put her to sleep; they weren't exciting subjects, after all, not like navigation or astronomy. Now, though, Subira was willing to admit that maybe she should have tried to listen anyway. Shipbuilding wasn't the glamorous subject in the world by any means, but clearly it had its uses.

She gritted her teeth and tried to think about happier moments, about the joy and love she had felt when she'd first set eyes on the freshly built Lark. It would never look that new and beautiful again, she thought ruefully, opening her eyes to behold the sea-tossed ruin that the ship had become. If they all worked as hard as they could, though, they could bring her back to the docks of Ahnatep, where she could be refitted and restored to her full glory.

If they could patch her up in time…

Glancing up at the sky one more time, Subira rushed forward, anxious to assist with the repairs. A group of older, experienced crew members with knowledge of shipwrighting had already gathered around the captain, explaining heatedly that they needed more time.

"There's no way we can get a new mast by sundown," the oldest oarsman kept insisting. "With the way this one got snapped in half, we'd have to chop down a whole new tree and lop off its branches before we could have a new mast. And if you haven't noticed…"

The muscular old oarsman gestured at the endless acres of yellowing grassland around them.

"There aren't exactly a lot of trees here, yes, I know," the captain finished the sentence impatiently. "Unfortunately, there are a lot of wild and angry horsemen here, all of whom would like nothing better than to skewer us on those long spears of theirs. We're lucky that they agreed to let us live until sundown at all. They look even less civilized than the Chaktawe and a lot more vicious."

He let out a rasping cough. "Getting a new mast is out of the question, then. We can't afford to take the time to look for stray trees in this wilderness. Can we get home without a mast and sail?"

"Without a mast and sail!" the oarsman spluttered. "We'd be better off swimming! There's no way we can get home without a sail!"

"Actually," Subira broke in unexpectedly, "there might be."

As all eyes turned toward her, some disbelieving, some hoping against hope, she plunged on, "If we've been blown north as it seems, and if the maps in the cartographer's chamber at home are correct, then we may be able to limp home by rowing. The currents along the coast tend to run south-southwest in the wintertime. If we ride the currents, we should make it back to Ahnatep in about four or five days."

Low, thoughtful murmurs greeted her words, the expressions on the crew's faces slowly lightening into something like relief, or at least resignation.

In a gentle, but grave voice punctuated by another scratchy cough, the captain asked, "And what about shoals and reefs? What if we run into one of those again?"

Subira flushed hotly, averting her face from him. "The coast should be relatively clear of those," she told him, "and at the rate we would be traveling, we should easily be able to see and avoid any reefs before they'd be a danger to us."

Out of the corner of her eye, she saw the captain nodding and quietly absorbing her words. On the other side of him, some of the oarsmen protested that the Lark was primarily a sailing ship, with its ten auxiliary oars only to be used briefly in times of no wind. One crew member gave her a poisonous glance and rose onto his tiptoes to whisper into the captain's ear, no doubt to argue against her.

Subira twisted her head and quelled him with a harsh glare of her own. She had erred most grievously, but she was still the ship's navigator and a daughter of the South Winds, and she had bled for this ship just like he had. He had no right to whisper insults against her. The crew member subsided, without the captain even noticing the exchange.

At length, the captain took a deep breath and began snapping out orders.

"All right! It seems we'll have no sail to get us home, so let us make use of what we do have," he called out in his powerful voice, broken only slightly by another rough cough. "Take what's left of the mast and make planks of it as best you can, to seal up the breach in the hull. The rest of you, break up some of the barrels and heat them. Collect the pitch and tar to hold the planking in place. Go!"

United by his decisiveness, the crew hurried to obey his orders, salvaging blades and axes to chop apart the remains of the mast in a wild storm of flying wood chips. Others hurried to improvise resin from the wooden barrels that held their formerly precious cargo of wadj and dyes. At first, the horsemen of the grasslands murmured to see the sailors lighting fires along the shoreline, but in time they leaned forward in curiosity to watch as Subira and her fellow sailors rendered a crude, resinous tar from the barrel wood. With infinite care, they collected the tar and carried it toward the gaping hole in the hull, where the captain led them in nailing and binding the splintery new planks in place and plastering them liberally with waterproof tar.

It was hot, tedious, and messy work, and Subira's arms and shoulders were aching long before the last barrels were rendered. The wound on her arm smarted fiercely in the heat, and she had to stop twice to tear fresh strips of linen from her sheath dress and bind the wound again. Despite his racking cough, the captain seemed to be everywhere and threw himself into the difficult labour of repairing the ship.

As the sun descended in the sky, the breach in the hull was gradually closed, plank by plank, inch by inch. The more tired they grew, the more feverishly they worked, for they knew that time was slipping past. The memory of the spear's sharp point sinking into her arm made Subira wield the bucket of tar with furious, frenzied strength as she poured the sticky, boiling resin over every inch of plank.

The sky was just beginning to turn purple as the crew fanned the last of the tar dry and began hauling the ship upright, back into the water. True to his word, the captain delivered the bales of undamaged wadj and bundles of fine dyes to the white-haired elder himself. Low grumbles and snickers echoed from the wild horsemen's ranks as the Lark slowly and inexorably slid back into the water.

"Laviku be blessed," Subira gasped, staring back at the horsemen on the shore and pressing one hand to her arm, "we did it. We're not dead. We made it."

Beside her, the captain fell into a furious coughing fit as they watched the horsemen turn away with almost perfect unity and careless grace. She turned to him.

"Go below," she said softly. "That cough sounds terrible, and you'll only sicken if you stay out in the open air any longer."

"No," the captain gasped, "I have to get us home."

"We'll get home," she reassured him. "You got us this far. You kept us alive longer than we should have. Now we just have to let the sea take us home. Go below. We'll call for you the moment we need you."

As the captain reluctantly went to rest below, Subira took the oarmaster's place and began calling out a slow, but steady beat to the exhausted crew. The currents that she had predicted would be there had already taken hold of the ship and were propelling her southward, back toward Ahnatep. Their water and stores would last them perhaps five days, just barely long enough for them to return to the city in time. Despite all that she knew would await her -- the condemnations for her mistake, the humiliation, and the disappointment of her family -- going home was all that Subira wanted now.

They would make it. They had to. And then…she would face whatever she had to face, when the time came.
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[Flashback] Dire Straits

Postby Gossamer on October 28th, 2012, 2:31 pm

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Character: Subira
Experience: +3 Observation, +2 Sailing, +1 Navigation, +1 Bodybuilding
+2 Bodybuilding, +2 Leadership

Lore: Storms Come Up Fast, Destroying The Lark On A Reef, Being Told Politely By A Drykas To Shut Up, Miraculously Repairing a Sunken Ship

Additional Note: Interesting thread. I wish I could have given you more sailing XP but you didn’t give a lot of detail about how you were sailing. Instead you simply stated you were and turned the wheel a lot. Navigation involves a lot of detail that was lacking as well so that’s why you received only a single XP in it. I also felt it was a bit off that a ships captain would defer to a novice sailors advice and then abandon the helm to her – with only a small amount of points in sailing – to go lead a chant.

And so you crashed and destroyed the ship. Not surprising. The captain was stupid trusting your PC and acting as he did.

I gave you bodybuilding for the Rowing. You got Leadership for calling orders. I also noted you had no lore of Suvan Currents or Suvan Reefs yet you piped up knowing about them. I suspect you should add to your lores by learning some of these things IC so you can back them by Lores in the future.

I found parts of this thread unrealistic too. Your Hull Breach, for example, can’t be fixed while a ship is in the water. Pitch won’t ‘reglue’ planks to the hull while applied underwater. You guys never said what you did to get the Lark out of the water after you said it sank deeper and deeper in… meaning the below decks were flooding.

All and all I felt confused by this thread and felt it was a bit unrealistic. However, your writing was nice and the scene was easy to picture.
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