Madness!

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Madness!

Postby Tortos on January 25th, 2012, 12:19 am

Guys CS iis no longer being worked on so i dont really know how to take it down sooooo.... Heres a worm __________
Last edited by Tortos on March 16th, 2012, 4:35 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Alakai

Postby Ghost on February 10th, 2012, 5:22 am

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Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. I have found a few issues with your Character Sheet. Don’t worry. A lot of people make mistakes when they create their Character Sheet.

Wind Eagles are extremely intelligent. They are treated like people. You make yours sound like a pet. Furthermore, it sounds as if your PC bonded with his eagle as a child. I don’t think this is realistic.

Please read up on the Lore of Wind Reach and the Wind Eagles to get a better understanding of them. Please also talk to a Storyteller of Wind Reach about the Wind Eagle. You need DS permission for one.

You have too many skillpoints. As an Inarta you get the standard 50 skill points and a 10 point bonus (in Falconry, Bow or Glassblowing), for a total of 60 skill points.

“Lore of Taming Eagles” is not an acceptable lore, especially if you mean Wind Eagles. Taming is a skill. “Lore of Using Oak Weapons” is not acceptable either. Using weapons is a skill as well. Read this page to get a better understanding of what a lore is.

Also keep in mind that travelling is dangerous. The grasslands aren’t really a safe place. Your Wind Eagle would also unbond with you if you left Wind Reach for a longer amount of time.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.

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