(Flashback) Arrival

Kehor's trip to Alvadas

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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

(Flashback) Arrival

Postby Kehor Kev on March 5th, 2012, 12:15 am

Kehor is lost, not knowing the time, land, season, or year. On he traveled hunting as a wolf, climbing trees as a man to sleep. For a year he did this, from 511 AV to 512 AV. That was until found the wolf pack of the north of Alvadas.

At first, he was cautions and frightened. He followed the back from afar, staying hidden, hiding behind trees, staying in the dark. Then he got the courage to transform into a wolf and join. At first, they rejected him, shunned him, ignored him. That is until the pack leader came up and "inspected" him.

It saw the armband that was pressed high on the foreleg. The leader gave a earsplitting cry and they all charged Kehor. Away he ran, knowing his life depended on him finding a town. The chase seemed like it took hours, jumping over logs, ducking under branched, leaping left and right around trees.

On and on until he saw Alvadas's large stone wall. Putting on a quick burst of speed, he ran, faster then he had ever before. The pack left at the sight of the town.

Just before arriving at the city, Kehor just barely escapes an arrow that would have killed him. He was very tired so he could not run from the guards shooting at him. As fast as he could, he transformed, back into human. At the end of the change he faints from sheer exhaustion, just as an arrow buries itself and inch from his head.

When the city guards saw him transform, they stopped firing and open the gate to get him and revive him from the run.
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(Flashback) Arrival

Postby Fallacy on March 11th, 2012, 9:39 pm

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Hello and welcome to Mizahar and Alvadas. You did not get any lore or XP because there are some slight inaccuracies in your post, but it was a great first try and I know it can be a lot to take in sometimes.

Firstly, Im not completely convinced that animals would act like that towards a kelivc. Sure they will be protective of their pack, but they wouldn’t just attack because of a band around the animals leg.

There are no ‘guards’ persay in Alvadas. The city of Illusions have the Womiyu. The Womiyu have better things to do than hang around the parameter of Alvadas shooting arrows from atop the wall (the poorly built wall at that). I would suggest reading the Alvadas lore to really get a feel of the city. It can be found in the link above, or linked below my signature. If you have ANY questions please don’t hesitate to PM me.

Thirdly there is no timestamp on your post. We need to know when this event happened. Here is a link to time, and it has links to other important information. Please explore and follow and read :)

Any questions or concerns about the rewards gained please send a PM :)


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