Orik Kragen

[Orik Kragen]

Physical Description Name: Orik Kragen Race: Human Age: 19 Birthday:19th day of spring 494 AV Character Concept Height- 6’1 Weight- 168 lbs Skin Color - White Hair Color- White Hair Style- Short Cropped Eye Color- Brown Body Build- Lean/Muscular Birthplace: Region- Sylira City- South of Syliras Interests: Poisons. Blades Archery Throwing weapons Reading Strengths: Cunning Wide Knowledge of Poisons Smart Carefree attitude Weakness: Stubborn Doesn’t listen well Hard of hearing. Character History Orrin is rather odd, and always has been, from the first days he could walk he has always been drawn towards death. When he was young he enjoyed hunting just to watch various animals die. Orrin was raised on a small farm just inside the Mythran Outpost, by his farther and mother. Raised much like other children, he was schooled the best his parents could, and was taught early in life about plants and toxins or cures that they held. Orrin tested many of these on animals he would capture and on rare occasions would cure them. He spent most of his child hood in this fashion. Up until he was 18 he was happy and content killing off animals and the like, testing his poisons and what not. It wasn't until his parents were killed by travelers that robbed afterwards. Orrin was off hunting while this went on. Orrin returned to the house set on fire and men fleeing. Enraged Orrin rushed in the house, and grabbed his father bow. After seeing his parents had already perished, he ran outside grabbed a horse and took off after the two that had committed the crimes against his family. Around two mile up the road Orrin caught them, After releasing an arrow into the back of one killing him before hitting the ground, he stuck the others horse in the right flank, causing him to rear and drop the other man, luckily breaking the mans leg. Orrin spent the next two days administering his various poisons to the man. Possessions 1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included) 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap) Food for a week 1 eating knife Flint & Steel Heirloom: Inarta Short Bow- His fathers Favorite Weapon, Orik Claimed it as his own upon his fathers death. 100 Gold Mizas Housing: 1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a riding horse, a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags Horse: Ravok Bloodbane 16hh Color- Black/ White Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages Common Skills: Skill EXP Total Proficiency Weapon (Ranged/ Short Bow (15 sp) (15Rb) 30 100 Competent Weapon (One Handed/ Dagger) 15(sp) 100 Novice Poison 15(sp) 100 Novice Weapon (Throwing Knives) 5 (Sp) 100 novice Fluent Language: Common Recommended Lores: Lore of Poison- Close call Lore of Killing Thread List

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed   History Orrin was raised on a small farm out the edge of the Suvan Sea, by his farther and mother. There are no farms that cities do not control. The closest thing to what you are looking for are the Syliran Fields and your PC and his family would've lived inside the Mythran Outpost. Also he saw a man fleeing towards Sunberth? Sunberth is extremely far away from Syliras and many Sylirans would be lucky to know that Sunberth exists.   Possessions It is fine that your Bow is of Inartan make, but you need to specify what type of bow it is. Is it a Shortbow, Longbow, Crossbow? This link may help http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Price_list#Medium_2   Skills Weapon (Ranged/bow) needs to be adjusted to a specific type of Bow. Weapon: Shortbow is an example.   Lore Your Lore of Poison needs to be made more specific, tailored to a specific type of poison. Lore of Poisons: Bloodroot is an example. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd

[Orik Kragen]

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