Saeriel

[Saeriel]

Saeriel (Pronounced Sair-eel) Disclaimer: Neither the Image here or the Avatar are mine. They are courtesy of Alessandra Casiraghi, posting under Gilliann on DeviantArt Race: Human Age : 23, Born in the Spring 489 A.V. Gender: Female Hair: Long and Flowing, Dark Fiery Red Eyes: Deep Brown Height: 5'3" Weight: 120 lbs God of Worship: Ivak Personality/Concept Saeriel is soft spoken, easy to listen to, or talk to for that matter. Saeriel is fairly easy going, but not overly so. She tends to judge people based on actions and the first impressions they give but always gives everyone a chance to prove their worth. Saeriel has a fiery temper and can be quick to anger though she tends to try to keep controlled, if only for a short time. Saeriel also at times feels an urge to be violent or kill someone, even if there isn't a reason. However she rarely ever raises her voice, even when angry, mostly because she feels an angry intonation in her voice that is still quiet is more effective at conveying her emotions. Saeriel still, however, has a presence that seems to draw people to her like moths to a flame. Saeriel does not trust easily and only through time will she come to truly trust someone. Saeriel also tends to brood a lot. Saeriel is one of the few who worships the God Ivak. Saeriel also lives by several philosophies which helps her in many ways in her day to day life, her skills, and her mindset. Skills, Lore, Languages, & Gnosis   Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Weapon (Short Sword) SP 30/100 Competent Weapon (Shortbow) RB 15/100 Novice Hunting SP 15/100 Novice Reimancy (Fire) SP 5/100 Novice T=Thread Exp in a hyperlink to the thread   Lore Lore: Zeltivan Wildlife Lore: Zeltiva Streetplan   Languages Common - Fluent Nari - Basic Possessions   Clothing and Armor Loose Fitting Dress made of Night Leather with Black Cloak and Hood (Purchased) Black Leather Boots (SP, Non Armor Clothing Boots) Simple Shirt (SP) Simple Pants (SP) Simple Undergarments (SP) Simple Boots (SP)   Weapons Shortbow (Family Heirloom) Shortbow Arrows (20) (Purchased) Short Sword (Purchased)   Mounts   Other 1 Waterskin     1 Backpack which contains:      -Comb (Glass)      -Brush (Glass)      -Soap      -Razor      -1 eating knife      -Flint & Steel Housing 1 Basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table in Zeltiva Ledger Income/Expenses Reason Sum +100 gm Starting Package 100 gm -60 gm Loose Fitting Night Leather Dress 40 gm -1 gm Shortbow Arrows (20) 39 gm -10 gm Short Sword 29 gm Spring 512 A.V. Threads [Zeltiva] Every Bit Helps (Open) [Quest] The Black Obelisk: Act II of Darkling Tides

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed   Lores Your Lore of Blending into Crowds easily would be included in the skill Stealth. Lore: Exceptionally Agile would be included in the skill Acrobatics.   Minor Notes These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments. After looking over your PC, it seems your character is described in just about every way as an Inarta, rather than standard human. If you are wanting to be Inarta, please make the appropriate changes to reflect that. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd