Anjali Adhetra CS

[Anjali Adhetra]

Anjali Adhetra Anjali(aka anji) as a Human Violet.png (137.37 KiB) Viewed 345 times Anjali ( aka Anji) as a Fox images.jpg (14.36 KiB) Viewed 345 times Basic Information: Race: Kelvic Birthday & Age: fall 21 510 AV (2 1/2 years old but looks 19 due to her ageing like a fox ) Gender: Female Animal Form: Fox Languages fluent: Dog, Common Physical Description: Anjali stands at about 4'11 and weighs about 115 pounds in human form, has piercing blue deceiving eyes and reddish orange hair. She is considered a beauty among Kelvics, but hates the attention. Her small appearance makes her seem defenseless, but she’s very sly and good in a fight. People might think she could be older, and are surprised to find out she’s only 2 in human but looks 19. She’s an incredible skilled hunter. Character Concept: Anjali is a very outgoing and is hard to hate. Though at first look, she may come off arrogant and a brat, she’s a sweet girl who hates to fight, and a real trickster. She’s an amazing spy and protector, and just wants to be loved and to love. Lore Lore- Training & Skill Points Hunting 15/100 (racial bonus) Equipment/Possessions Simple cloth dress, black cloak, shift, and sensible shoes (Starting Package) Ledger 600 gold mizas (Starting coin, no house) threads http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic21800.html http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic21815.html

[Anjali Adhetra]

finally got it right!!!!

[Ghost]

Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. There are a few things you need to fix:

1) You should lower her age. Kelvic age just as fast or slowly as their animal. A 16 year old fox would be incredibly old. Please also state which day and season she was born.

2) Her skills are a little unusual for a Kelvic, especially for a Kelvic that is not bonded. Kelvic are essentially animals that sometimes take the form of a human, and they lack the understanding for more complex things. Certain medical procedures are definitely among those.

3) “Record Keeping” is not a skill in Mizahar, so please pick a different one.

4) You don’t have any languages. You may pick up to three, one at fluent, one at basic and one at poor.

5) You don’t have any lores. You may start with two.

6) A corset is not part of the starting package. If you want a corset, you need to buy it with your starting money. Please check the price list for the price.

7) Your starting package is missing several items. Check this page for a list of items you start with.

8) You don’t seem to have a house. If you start without a house, you can add another 500 gold mizas to your ledger.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if you have questions.

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed [tab=Age/Birthday,#00BF00,black]If your PC was born in Fall 510, and since it is currently Summer 512, your PC would be 1 year, 3 seasons old, not 2 and a half.[/tab]   Skills As a Kelvic, you get 50 starting points + 10 Hunting for a total of 60 points. Feel free to add 45 more.   Lores I noticed you had none of the starting Lores. Lores are specific bits of information your PC knows over a variety of topics, and cannot be improved upon. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd