Pincushions of Cellulose[Hadrian]

[Hadrian]

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[Echelon]

Adventurer's Loot A Gift Experience is its own reward. Faval's Loot : Faval Verbeugen Skill XP Reward Weapon: Composite Longbow +2XP Acrobatics +2XP Observation +1XP Philosophy +1XP Intimidation +1XP Rhetoric +1XP Lore: Longbow: Stance Longbow: Factors Loss of Privacy Calculated Movements Avoiding Needless Violence Hadrian: Pillar of The Community Weighing The Consequences of Violence Aggressive Voyeurism All Efficiency Logistics Mysterious New Employer Items or Consequences: -3arrows lost or broken Notes: Compliments on assuming magic when it was used, but assuming only the most aggressive sort. I felt that was well done. Your display of archery with Hadrian watching was a bit cocky for your level. Tone it down a bit in the future. Acrobatics are needed for footwork, so though you may have competent archery slow down your progression with footwork till your acrobatics match your archery. Don't forget to talk about the fatigue of one's arms when firing so many shots in tandem. I appreciated the skepticism he approached the offer with. Hadrian's Loot : Professor Aelius Skill XP Reward Rhetoric +1XP Shielding +1XP Interrogation +1XP Lore: Confidence In The Face of Science Set Habits to Deceive Being A Proper Pillar of The Community Indeed Lacking Proper "Outlets" Faval: Mercenary Opportunist Items or Consequences: None Notes: None (You both did a good job balancing the goal of the thread with attention to detail and flow of story. The dialogue seemed choppy, and I felt a distinct lack of time synchronization between the two characters. Faval seemed to step off and do marathon runs at Hadrian stood and said a few lines. More reflection on one another's posts might create a more coherent feel in the future. All in all it was a decent read, and I look forward to seeing how the Auction thread will turn out. Jury it still out on how much he will be paid, but it'll be more than fair.) - if you have ANY questions or concerns about this grading, please PM me.