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Postby Z'hara on January 23rd, 2013, 7:00 pm

Hey people,I dont know how many of you read my previous post but i was a bit cofused and still am hahaha,but I'll figure things out eventually.

Im actually going to post my CS sheet here if anybody can give any advice on how to improve it or how i did something wrong and can fix it that would be awesome, dont mind the spelling errors I know there is but its only roughly done it will improve when I'm sure everything is right and I can continue to actually start RPing.


Given Name:Z'hara





Height:6ft 2


Skin Color:The fur covering most of Z'hara's body are a dark grey

Hair Color:The fur on Z'hara's elbows and knees are a pitch black along with his hair

Eye Color:Yellow

Other:Obviously he has the batlike wings and the claws on his hands and feet that all Zith have naturally,he does although have a scar straight across his chest about 25 inches long that is hardly covered by his harnes that he keeps slung over his chest

History:Z'hara came from the great Zith city Xy but now lives in the human city of Ravok

Personality:A hopless wanderer who gave up all love and respect for his own people when he was kicked out of the city for saving a human from being killed by his own kind,untill this day nobody except him knows why he did it

Ethics:Doesnt really have any but prefers to walk on the darker side of life

Likes:Enjoys the rush of a battle and pretty much any type of danger

Dislikes:Z'hara hates his own kind and despises nature but deals with it simply because he has to

1:1 set of toiletries
2:Enough food for a week
3:Eating knife
5:100 gold mizas

Housing: 1 basic 20X20 single room cottage with a hearth,bunk,chest,chair and small table.

>martial arts(costom to Z'hara's claws and wings)[10]
>Sneak(used for disguising himself among humans,amongst other things)[10]

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Postby Ball on January 23rd, 2013, 7:36 pm

Well, I see this is in the Q&A spot so I am gonna answer this!

For starters, the following things ya need to change:

Skills, there is a list of Skills, they aren't a full list and if you have any skills you want to incorporate, give a good explanation of what they are and so forth and submit it to the HD for approval to get it into a review. ;)

Also, you need to have your skill points denoted as thus:

XP == Points you gained from graded threads
RB == Racial Bonus
SP == Starting Package

Now, there are several ways to do this, the easiest way is as such:

SkillTotal PointsPoint Breakdown
Escape Artist15/10015RB

Also, marital arts, would be unarmed combat I believe. ;)
The code I used to make the table was this:

Code: Select all
Skill|Total Points|Point Breakdown
Escape Artist|15/100|15RB

Anything between the table tags, {table} and {/table} will show in the table, the pipes (|) denote each box within the table. :)

You are also forgetting your Lores and your Ledger!

A Ledger is used to keep track of your character's expenses and Lores are specific types of knowledge you know. ;)
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As Ball is getting closer and closer to maxing out Pyken as a skill, I would like to request that in places where Ball is not doing enough to constitute Pyken XP if Pyken technique lores could be issued instead.

Examples of proper XP level for Pyken would be: Ball developing or refining his technique by adding new thing against an actual moving target, not a dummy.

The use of basic skills alone are not enough to accomplish XP at Ball's current level of Pyken.

Thank you.

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Postby Anchor on January 23rd, 2013, 8:31 pm

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