My CS

[Z'hara]

Hey people,I dont know how many of you read my previous post but i was a bit cofused and still am hahaha,but I'll figure things out eventually.

Im actually going to post my CS sheet here if anybody can give any advice on how to improve it or how i did something wrong and can fix it that would be awesome, dont mind the spelling errors I know there is but its only roughly done it will improve when I'm sure everything is right and I can continue to actually start RPing.

My CS


Given Name:Z'hara

Race:Zith

Age:23

Gender:Male



Appearance:

Height:6ft 2

Weight:130lbs

Skin Color:The fur covering most of Z'hara's body are a dark grey

Hair Color:The fur on Z'hara's elbows and knees are a pitch black along with his hair

Eye Color:Yellow

Other:Obviously he has the batlike wings and the claws on his hands and feet that all Zith have naturally,he does although have a scar straight across his chest about 25 inches long that is hardly covered by his harnes that he keeps slung over his chest


History:Z'hara came from the great Zith city Xy but now lives in the human city of Ravok

Personality:A hopless wanderer who gave up all love and respect for his own people when he was kicked out of the city for saving a human from being killed by his own kind,untill this day nobody except him knows why he did it

Ethics:Doesnt really have any but prefers to walk on the darker side of life



Likes:Enjoys the rush of a battle and pretty much any type of danger


Dislikes:Z'hara hates his own kind and despises nature but deals with it simply because he has to




Equipment:
1:1 set of toiletries
2:Enough food for a week
3:Eating knife
4:Flint&steel
5:100 gold mizas

Housing: 1 basic 20X20 single room cottage with a hearth,bunk,chest,chair and small table.



Skills:
>Cooking[5]
>hunting[5]
>martial arts(costom to Z'hara's claws and wings)[10]
>Medicine[5]
>Detection[15]
>Sneak(used for disguising himself among humans,amongst other things)[10]



Langueges:1.Zithanese
2.Common
3.Vani

[Ball]

Well, I see this is in the Q&A spot so I am gonna answer this!

For starters, the following things ya need to change:

Skills, there is a list of Skills, they aren't a full list and if you have any skills you want to incorporate, give a good explanation of what they are and so forth and submit it to the HD for approval to get it into a review.

Also, you need to have your skill points denoted as thus:

XP == Points you gained from graded threads
RB == Racial Bonus
SP == Starting Package

Now, there are several ways to do this, the easiest way is as such:

Skill	Total Points	Point Breakdown
Herbalism	10/100	10SP
Escape Artist	15/100	15RB
Riding(Horse)	1/100	1XP

Also, marital arts, would be unarmed combat I believe.
The code I used to make the table was this:

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[table]
Skill|Total Points|Point Breakdown
Herbalism|10/100|10SP
Escape Artist|15/100|15RB
Riding(Horse)|1/100|1XP[/table]


Anything between the table tags, {table} and {/table} will show in the table, the pipes (|) denote each box within the table.

You are also forgetting your Lores and your Ledger!

A Ledger is used to keep track of your character's expenses and Lores are specific types of knowledge you know.

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