Completed [training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Because if it works in one hand, it should work in the other.

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[training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Postby Licearsvansan on January 29th, 2013, 6:54 am

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Winter 513, the 19th day.

Warmth. It was a strange feeling to Svan now. He had begun to grow so accustomed to the cruel winter wind that he almost didn't know what to do with himself now that he could move freely again. Svan took in a deep gulp of the air and breathed it out peacefully. He was sitting cross-legged in the same clearing that he had done battle with Samantha, but now it was quiet and he felt at ease. He enjoyed these moments of alone time with nature. They almost made him feel like a true follower of Caiyha. They almost made him forget how often nature tried to kill him. The dhani let out another peaceful sigh and let him mind fall back to his task. Eager to make use of this brief reprieve in weather, Svan had quickly set out this morning to find an open spot to train his combat skills. His quest for a training ground had led him here to the clearing, but Svan had hit a wall with his training. He had never had any proper tutelage, and so when Svan had tried to recall former skill and techniques he was only able to draw up a scant amount of knowledge. This had led him to his current position. Sitting in with legs crossed and mind drifting, Svan traveled back into darker parts of his mind. This was often a dangerous move as Svan had memories in his childhood that he dare not try to recall, but those were often centered around his sadistic mother. For now at least, Svan only wanted to recall memories of his father. He sat there for many long minutes, as he drifted in and out of memories, never quite getting one to stick long enough to recall it clearly. He frowned in disappointment. His father was the only one to ever try to teach Svan any combat, but the young snake had never cared to pay much attention to the teachings. This was mainly because while Svan was right handed, his father was left. This made it painfully difficult to practice the things he was taught, and it didn't help that Svan's father had apparently never had the idea to start with teaching basics before flourishes. Instead his father seemed to believe that the best way to learn a fighting style was to be beaten by it. Repeatedly. Svan had to wonder if his father simply thought that the knowledge of how to use the weapon could simply be passed to another via a blow to the head. "What? Your head's bleeding my boy? That just means you're learning." Svan coolly repeated his father's words. His skull had still never lost the indent from that concussion.

With a certain calmness Svan rose to his feet and gripped the sword breaker at his side. As he drew it from its sheathe, a few small bits of white hot steel sprung out of the scabbard's mouth. Svan smiled at the small shower of sparks. While most men would call it a design flaw that marked a worn and dull weapon, Svan's father referred to it as his favorite feature. Holding the blade in his right hand, Svan made a light swing through the air. It was an odd feeling to him. The despite being smaller than a long sword, the weapon was thick and surprisingly heavy. He couldn't help but feel awkward holding the thing. The diminutive size meant that the blade could preform complex maneuvers without compromising balance, and the heavy weight meant that each slash would be heavy and powerful. However to Svan it was just a very troublesome combo.

Svan switched the blade to his left hand and closed his eyes. Slowly he moved his hands and the blade followed. It carved out wide arks through the air over and over. With each swing, Svan fell deeper into a trance. Steadily the movements grew less awkward and smoother as the memories of his father's displays flooded back to him.
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[training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Postby Licearsvansan on February 1st, 2013, 6:52 am

THUNK

Svan's blade bounced off a nearby tree, and the vibrations sent waves down his arms. Okay Svan told himself, Lets try not to break the sword before we learn how to use it. Svan had been trying to recall the techniques his father had taught him, and had kept his eyes shut to better focus. Unfortunately, Svan had a bit of trouble seeing through closed eyelids, and had accidentally wandered too close to the clearing's edge. Moving back to the center Svan gave the blade a few more swings. Still as strange a feeling as ever. Svan wondered If he would ever get used to the unique weight of the blade. While he was beginning to recall the techniques his father had used, he simply lacked the dexterity to use them. This was doubly true for his left hand. Svan made a frustrated groan, and switched the weapon over to his dominant hand. He let the weapon sing through the air as he swung. Now that he remembered the techniques he could preform them flawlessly in his right hand.

Shunk! The blade landed in the dirt several feet away from Svan.

Well at least he could kinda preform the techniques. As the day drew on Svan found himself trading the sword back and forth between his hands in an attempt to mirror his father's movements. When the blade was in his left, he was better able to remember the techniques, but he had significantly less control. For his right hand the opposite was true. After a bell of trying to recall the techniques, Svan decided it was time for something new. Since it was a good deal a lack of precision and dexterity that plagued him, Svan figured that it was those two feature that would have to be trained hardest. With sword-breaker in hand, Svan walked towards the edge of the clearing to meet the trees. Looking around Svan spied a larger population of low hanging branches. Svan made a tsk tsk sound and looked out towards the trees. ""look at all these branches just waiting to mug some poor fool across the face. We can't have that. It would be very bad if such a man were to take out his rage at the tree by clearing out these woods." Svan smiled as he wove his thin justification of what he was about to do, "Someone should definitely prune these troublesome branches before such a terrible fate unfolds." Svan gave a mock glance to his sides, "Well, if no one else will do it..." Svan lifted his weapon and held hi poised at a branch. Aiming for a specific spot the dhani brought his blade down in a vicious manner. After a moment to pull his sword back up, Svan examined the cut. It was 3 inches from where he had wanted. "petching tree must have moved!"

Svan readied his blade once again, chose a spot, and let cold iron cleave its way through bark.
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[training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Postby Licearsvansan on February 4th, 2013, 6:45 am

43 branches, one birds nest, and an unfortunate songbird later...

Svan slouched into a tree, and looked out at the woods and clearing to see the damage he had done. A myriad of branches and twigs littered the ground. Scratch marks from poor cuts marked both the fallen branches and those that still remained above. While Svan had swung hard to cut the branches, he had found that his father's sword was far duller than he had expected. He threw the weapon to the ground in disgust. "What kind of petching weapon takes 5 swings to cut through a branch?" Svan turned his back on the blade. Still... Memories of his father cutting though steel armor with the very same weapon drifted through his mind. The dhani made a face. He didn't like the idea of being the reason the weapon couldn't cut anything. looking at the ground Svan tried to think of what separated he and his father. Skill was the first thought that crossed Svan's mind, but strength was a quick second. His father was a man of rather large size both in height and muscle, and his mother was not afraid to admit that she had chosen him as a mate purely for his body and skill. Unfortunately it seemed that while Svan had his father's shoulders, he lacked...everything else. The young dhani had grown strong, the harsh world had seen to that, but he was miles away from being anything like his dad.

But we have to start somewhere. Svan told himself as he pushed away from the tree. The sword breaker, while dull, was still a bladed weapon. And like all blades, it had the potential to cut. However if Svan wished to use the weapon as anything but a blunt object, he would need every ounce of strength he could get. The dhani fell to the ground and entered a push up position, but after a few pushes Svan realized that his own natural inhuman strength was making the exercise too easy.

Not one to give up, Svan lifted one hand off the ground and dipped with the other. One way or another, I'm going to get stronger.
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[training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Postby Licearsvansan on February 7th, 2013, 8:08 am

Well this grass tastes disgusting.

Svan lay on the ground face first with a wad of grass invading his mouth. He had collapsed during his last push up, and had been like this for over 15 chimes. Eventually Svan decided it was time to move again, and so by tripoding on his head the dhani managed to push himself up. Waves of pain rushed down his arms causing Svan to grit his teeth as he rose. Once up, Svan turned to a nearby tree and stared at a thick branch. Okay, I guess I have time for one more. The air was getting cold, but not enough to drain Svan completely yet. He approached the tree and swung his arms to catch the branch. Then he gripped tight and slowly began to pull himself up. Luckily he had only burned up his pushing muscles so far, and he managed to climb onto the branch with a measure of ease. Once there Svan sat down and let his legs swing over the side. He took a moment to look out to the clearing and appreciate his current point of view. Then without further delay, he let himself fall backwards and used his legs as hooks to keep from falling off the branch. Looking back out to the clearing, Svan nearly got sick. He was upside down now, and blood was quickly rushing to his head. He closed his eyes lightly and reminded himself why he was upside down in the first place. Now back on task Svan clenched his mouth and curled his body upwards. He was already breathing heavily, "One down. Svan let his body straighten again. "99 more to go."
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[training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Postby Licearsvansan on February 9th, 2013, 6:26 am

58, 59, 60, 63, 68, 82, 99, 100.

Svan hung upside down on the tree limb with roughly one half of his blood draining into his head. While Svan was well aware that he had skipped a few numbers, he was rather proud that he was able to count at all considering the thumping sound in his head continuously broke his focus. He tried to righten himself back up, but found the his abs reluctant to move him any further. "Okay, you're hanging from a tree like a monkey, and you can't pull yourself back up. What do you do?" Before he could answer himself a small bird flit over to land on his chin. The dhani's face grew sour, and his voice became laden in sarcasam, "Okay, you're hanging from a tree like a birdfeeder, what do you do?"

The bird responded by giving his throat a few light pecks. The birdfeeder let out a series of coughs, "Jerk move bird.". Startled by the sudden sound, the bird hopped around its new perch, and turned to face the source of the noise. Now that Svan could see it clearly he noticed that while the majority of its feathers were black, it had bright red tufts of red on its wings. "Great, a phirebird." Svan had seen these creature before. They were loud, smart, and easy to tick off. One could only imagine how incredibly painful it must be for Svan to see such a perfect reflection of himself in an annoying little bird, and it must be doubly painful for the bird to see the simularities it held with Svan. "You know, the last time I saw a phirebird, I ended up chasing it off a cliff." He could have sworn that he just saw the bird stiffle a laugh. "I learned a lesson from that. Don't pick on crows." The bird pecked him harshly on the chin. "I mean phirebirds!" The bird pecked him again. "Well what the petch do you want me to call you?" The bird glanced upwards. "Tch, I'll call a chicken a god before I start addressing you as such. Now how about we just move on and leave each other alone. That way no one has to get-" The phirebird cocked its head to the side and began lifting and its feet up and down. The creatures claws dug into flesh and stretched it painfully. Svan grit his teeth. He had spent all day trying to get stronger, and now he was at the mercy of some blasted pidgeon. "I bet you think you're hot stuff, don't you?! Face me on even ground for one moment and I'll show you hot! I'll show you the inside of a cauldron hot!" Seemingly annoyed by Svan's shouts, the bird turned back to his throat and began pecking furiously. Svan gasped for air, and choked a little when the phirebird bit down on his adams apple. Eventualy the bird scored a critical shot on a vein, and the spasm of pain it sent through his body caused Svan to dislodge from the tree.

He hit the ground with a thud and groaned loudly. A small flittering feeling moved under his chest, and as Svan rolled over to his side he saw the crushed body of the phirebird. "Haha! No so mighty now are we?" A hand reached out and clutched the bird. Its right wing was twisted horribly. "Now what should I do with you? Your much to small to be lunch. Svan moved his face close to the bird, "Perhaps a snack. Unless you want to beg me for mercy that is." The bird pecked Svan on the nose. "Snack it is." Just as Svan rose the tiny meal above his head, a chorus of loud tweets and chatters sounded. Still dangleing the morsel, the dhani turned to meet the noise. At least twenty phirebirds rested in the tree behind him. Each one stared at Svan in a hateful manner. "I was just putting him out of his misery is all. Don't mind me." The closest and largest phirebird turned its head to the other and thenback to Svan. It rapped a foot once on its branch and let out the loudest caw Svan had ever heard. All at once the flock of birds took to the air and divebombed Svan. At first Svan fought back by swinging his weapon in pathetic arcs, but he quickly learned that rapidly moving birds were much harder to hit than tree branches. Overwhelmed, Svan dropped his captive and practiced his favorite manuver, tactical retreating. The dhani sprinted his way back to the city, with birds harrying him all the while. Only once he was within the gates, was he allowed to rest. Breathing heavily, the dhani took one glance out of the gate to see the flock of birds still waiting for him. I think I've trained enough for one day.

Weeks later, Svan would awake to the sight of a phirebird sitting outside his window. In its beak it carried two twigs which it set down at his windowsill. It clawed in front of the sticks, and then hopped over to the side. It looked down at the empty space before it, and then pecked in Svan's direction. It then hung its head in an almost mocking manner, and flew away cawing loudly. Svan walked over to the two twigs and looked down at them angrily.

Phirebirds 2, Svan zero.
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[training] Wrong sword style in the right hand

Postby Whimsy on February 11th, 2013, 10:36 am

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An innovative approach to a training thread. If you want more experience, describe the movements in greater detail: the feeling of the sword in your hand, the movement through the air, the exact things you're doing with your wrist. That sort of thing. PM me if you have any questions or concerns.

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