Solo Devouring Knowledge

In which, Nai'a goes to the Library to read up on Medicinal Herbs, as well as finding a interestin a couple of Poisons.

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Devouring Knowledge

Postby Nai'a on February 3rd, 2013, 3:28 am

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Devouring Knowledge [Part 2]

Postby Nai'a on February 3rd, 2013, 3:44 am

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Devouring Knowledge Part 3

Postby Nai'a on February 3rd, 2013, 3:55 am

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Devouring Knowledge Part 4

Postby Nai'a on February 3rd, 2013, 4:04 am

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Devouring Knowledge Part 5 -The End-

Postby Nai'a on February 3rd, 2013, 4:05 am

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Devouring Knowledge

Postby Arcane on February 10th, 2013, 2:40 pm


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Hi Nai'a,

The content in the books seemed to have been plagiarized from a variety of sources, including here, here, here, here. While I appreciate that you have attempted to rephrase some of the content, the fact remained that you kept the content more or less intact. This makes it extremely jarring when I read things like "antispasmodic agent", various modern scientific-latin names, and the fact that the content reads like a modern text rather than something out of the medieval setting that Mizahar is.

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Devouring Knowledge

Postby Arcane on February 10th, 2013, 6:14 pm

Nai'a,

You can use the herbs. It's not the using of the herbs that is the problem here, it's the way of which you portrayed your content. A copy and paste with some rephrasing is a very lazy way to do it. I agree, the knowledge has to come from somewhere, but that doesn't mean that you can't internalize it and let it come out naturally. There are many other ways to learn about herbs besides the internet. You can talk to people who know about it, read books, experiment and try it out yourself, etc.

Do you get what I'm saying here? It's fine to research and take knowledge from the internet, but what we want to see here is something new, something original. So take that knowledge, internalize it and wrap it up in an original story and plot so that it doesn't exist anywhere else in the world except on Miz.
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