Flashback Blood, Sweat & Insults: Part II [Solo]

In which Ayatah faces a particularly gruesome adversary.

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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Blood, Sweat & Insults: Part II [Solo]

Postby Ayatah on February 4th, 2013, 9:11 pm

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|| 30th Fall, 506AV. || The Training Grounds, Taloba || Early Morning. ||

”It will get easier as time goes on.”

The words of her mother echoed through Ayatah’s mind. It had been three weeks since her first day of training, and… sure, things were getting a little less horrendous...

But that didn’t make them easy -- far from it.

The recruits were now usually awake when their trainers would burst into their rooms to call them to training, as opposed to still sound asleep like babes. Their bodies were getting used to the harsh brutality of their morning sessions when they would run and fight and climb on empty stomachs, before being fed some slop of oats and vegetables (and questionable meat, if you were lucky). After their sustenance, they would spar some more, run some more…

Until finally, they would stagger back into their dorm rooms (after being lucky enough to eat a second meal), and fall into their beds. The days were long, the nights short.

But for Ayatah, the harsh treatment was beginning to pay off. Her limbs were toning and growing in muscle. She was still not as strong as her comrades, but she was certainly becoming stronger within herself.

The recruits were slowly, but surely, becoming something close to… friends. There was no warmth or care between them as such, but an unspoken respect and empathy. When one suffered a twisted limb or concussion, the others were often there to soften the blows and save the ‘patient’ from further damage.

So, before the grey light of the early morning had even cast upon the garrisons in which the recruits slept, Ayatah and her roommates were already awake. One girl - damn, is her name Daena? Something like that - was already up and standing on one leg as she stretched her thighs. Ayatah, however, was making the most of those final moments before --

”Up! Get up you petching wastes!”

[i]Good morning, Sunshine.

The three other women rolled out of their beds, dressed and left - completely silent. Ayatah fell to the rear of the group, feeling a harsh cramp in her calf from the previous days climbing.

Down to the training yards they went, where about half of their comrades waited, some yawning and others chatting quietly. The sky held a thin grey mist, and meek sunshine battled through it. It did not take long for the rest of the recruits to come to the training grounds. A week or so ago, a male had apparently slept through the morning call, even when his dorm mates tried to wake him. Fearing for their own wellbeing, they had left him snoring in his bed. A bell late, the poor bugger had joined the others, hoping that nobody would notice.

Herliz did not miss a trick, and the moment his feet had touched the sand of the sparring ground, she had rounded on the latecomer. By the time she was through, the young man had tears and blood running down his face.

Since then, nobody came late to training.

”This morning,” the recruits turned slowly in the direction from which the voice was coming. They didn’t even have to wonder who was speaking, “you will be sparring. Not against each other, but my cadets.”

A throng of bodies stood behind the head trainer, in a perfect military line. Although they specialized in varied weapons, the seniors of the new recruits looked exactly the same; back straight, faces blank and forward, arms at their backs - or if their weapons would not allow, at their sides. That will be us in a year or so Ayatah thought, glancing at the terrified-looking faces of her equals. One girl in particular looked like she wanted to burst into tears, maybe two years for some…

But Ayatah would not allow herself to crumble under the critical eye of her seniors. If she was ever going to prove herself in these three years of serving Myri, early experiences such as this one could become help or hindrance.

”Pick a wretched little toy to play with.” It was a command not for Ayatah and her comrades, but for the seasoned recruits. Their hardy eyes fell to the body of trainees, and Ayatah was startled at their intense look of hunger.

She shook her head a little at her previous naivety: These are not simply last year’s newcomers. These are hardened recruits, who have been in our military for years. They chew up and spit out novices like us.

The realization was almost saddening. But then that little spark within Ayatah - the part that would probably make her get beaten up in a few chimes - came to life.

Bring it on.


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Blood, Sweat & Insults: Part II [Solo]

Postby Ayatah on February 7th, 2013, 9:34 pm

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The seasoned recruits descended upon the rookies, cutting through their tight circle like a hot knife in butter. Ayatah and her comrades shuffled to the side to allow theirs superiors through as they sniffed and leered at each of the downcast faces. Slowly, the recruits were tugged away from the flock of warm bodies and into the cool damp air.

”C’mon, you.”

A harsh pull at Ayatah’s arm let her know that she had been chosen. Oh, jolly good…. She thought --

Until she glanced at the face of the Myrian who had decided that Ayatah would be their victim.

The woman was huge. To say that she was tall for a Myrian would have been a massive understatement - and her thighs were almost as thick as Ayatah’s waistline, to boot. Her face was completely hardened and blank, as if she was part sculpture. Being already shorter than the average woman, Ayatah felt like a child next to this… this…

Beast.

The two of them walked in silence to the weapon crate. Ayatah, as ever, went straight for the wooden double-bladed dagger. Her opponent, however, brushed her fingers over the hilt of a broadsword, dagger, gladius, handaxe… before finally settling on a scimitar. Ayatah gulped. She had not sparred with anyone using the delicately bent sword before, and for a few moments she admired the wooden weapon. The blade was much wider at the tip than at the hilt, and unlike a typical sword, the tip itself was sharpened to at an angle.

The woman rotated the sword in her hand, flashing Ayatah a smirk that was, to say the least, less than helpful. The half-breed stared at her opponent wide-eyed, and followed the huge woman to the center of the training ground.

”Ready, Eypharian?”

Ready, Tskanna. Ayatah nodded and smiled meekly, trying to swallow the chuckle that bounced behind her teeth.

She slid into her familiar sideways position. The woman’s sword was a decent length, and it would be difficult for Ayatah to get close enough to stab her without getting pummeled herself. But a longer weapon took more time to swing and get moving, and it would be when the other woman was readying herself to attack that Ayatah would have to make her move.

Around them, the other recruits were beginning their sparring. Most of them seemed to be losing quite obviously, however one or two appeared to be surviving a little better.

The Tsakanna-esque woman came forwards, great chest heaving and shoulder held forward. Myri, she could block the sun out…

Ayatah quick-stepped away, turning her back to the other woman momentarily to spin around and lead the beast in another direction. She was fast, but her opponent had expected the dodge, and bought her scimitar across horizontally. Ayatah turned right into it.

She pretended that the blow did not hurt, but the combination of the speed in which she had spun one way, and the strength behind the swing that had bought the sword from the opposite direction resulted in a blinding pain that claimed Ayatah’s entire right side.


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Blood, Sweat & Insults: Part II [Solo]

Postby Ayatah on February 7th, 2013, 10:07 pm

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”Do you want to take a bre-eak?The final word was drawn out, full of sarcasm.

Ayatah didn’t even bother to answer the question. The best way to prove herself was through physical prowess, not a sharp tongue.

The women began again, standing opposite each other. For a chime or two, the half-breed eyed her opponent more carefully. The woman was taller and broader than herself, but that didn’t mean that she was invincible. All I need to do is find your weakness… she planned mentally, her dark eyes flashing up and down the woman, …and then I have a hope in hell’s chance of surviving this ordeal.

Her opponent swung her scimater; a low blow. Quite literally; the woman appeared to be aiming for Ayatah’s calves. It was a strange tactic, but a good one. Ayatah could not duck something so low, nor could she step backwards quick enough to avoid the long blade. She instinctively threw herself sideways and above the swing, landing painfully on her shoulder and back. The move had not gone as she had hoped, but she had had technically avoided the blade.

”You look like a baby Tskanna.” Clearly, her opponent was equally unimpressed.

Takes one to know one, Ayatah wanted to reply, but she had more sense than that, luckily for her. She stood up, and brushed herself down. Already, her muscles were aching and she could only imagine what horrendous bruises would be splattered across her skin come morning.

”You should practice how to turn a fall into a roll, and that’s how you do it.”

The words were not a compliment - not by any means. But all the same, they were spoken in a more genial tone than before. Perhaps this beastly woman was not quite as feral as Ayatah had first thought…

”Now, stop fighting like a petching Deyhan.

Then again…

She scrabbled to her feet, pride suffering even more so than her physical body. But the training ground was not the place to pout over a bruised ego, especially when Ayatah already had to prove herself more than her fellow recruits. Dagger in hand, she prepared herself once more.

And this time, she wore a different attitude. Before, she had already admitted that she would be on the losing side of this spar, and when that thought process enters a person’s mind, it is easy for them to ask ‘why bother’? She was not a fool; against a seasoned recruit, any of the newcomers would lose, it was just a matter of time. But she would give this competition all she had, and if the near-certain outcome was for her to lose, she would put up a damned good fight.


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Blood, Sweat & Insults: Part II [Solo]

Postby Ayatah on February 8th, 2013, 9:28 pm

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If there was one tactic that Ayatah had used throughout her life, it was dodging her foe’s swipes and swings. It made the most of her speed, without dragging her into close combat without being on her own terms and ploy.

But today, she would change her approach. The other female’s weapon had more than twice the length her own double-bladed dagger lacked. It would be nearly impossible for Ayatah to dodge her foe’s scimitar, let alone to do so whilst trying to embed her own blade into the other woman. But if I keep close… A large blade was difficult to keep close to the body whilst also maintaining well-aimed strikes.

So when the taller woman bought her scimitar downwards, the half-breed did not step sideways or backwards, but forwards instead. Her body was angled in such a way that her foe’s blade missed her barely by an inch. But it missed, and before Ayatah even allowed herself to consider celebrating, she bought her dagger in a low forwards grip, sharply into the other woman’s stomach. Twisting her forearm around and up, she bought the opposite-sided blade upwards and jabbed into the woman’s collarbone, reverse grip.

Even her rival seemed a little impressed - or perhaps it was pain that made the other woman’s eyebrows flick upwards just a tad. But either way, the full-blooded Myrian quickly refocused her attention back on destroying Ayatah. But it was harder to do that with the half-Eypharian standing so close.

A fist collided with her shoulder, and for a moment, she staggered to one side. Another came towards Ayatah, this time aiming for the side of her head. The blow was high enough for Ayatah to stoop under, reappearing at her adversary’s shoulder and connect the point of her blade to the woman's waistline.

Just as she was about to smirk with smugness, the other woman embedded her elbow right into Ayatah’s stomach, knocking all the air from her lungs. Her fingers twitched, the dagger slipped from her grasp and she doubled over desperately.

”Better! But you are too quick to stop and praise yourself.”

The words were correct, but like anyone who hears criticism of themselves, it was difficult for Ayatah to acknowledge the truth behind it. She picked up her dagger, forcing herself to breathe slow and steady to refill her lungs with air once more.

"You are annoyed that I'm right." Now it was the other woman's turn to look smug, and her near-black eyes flashed with dark amusement.

"I'm learning to swallow my ego and my need to be right." Ayatah muttered, rubbing the dirt off her thighs and wincing as her fingers ran over scrapes and bruises.

The woman gave a throaty chortle,
“well, Eypharian… Your pride and your ego are one of the many things that separates your kind with my kind.” By the end of the sentence, the chuckle had turned into a scowl and her words full of poison.

The words were more painful than any physical beatings Ayatah had received from the woman. Even when I fight like a Myrian, I am seen as anything but…

But then there was a small, almost child-like, sense indignation that flickered within Ayatah. She did not answer the larger woman, not this time. But she met her eyes, steely and cold and mirroring the same disdain the full-blooded Myrian sent her way.

I’d rather be half-Eypharian than half-Tskanna.

And Ayatah of the Scattered Bones walked away with a small, rebellious smile on her lips.


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Blood, Sweat & Insults: Part II [Solo]

Postby Limey on February 15th, 2013, 5:25 am

Skill and Lore Rewards
Skills Lore
Endurance 1 Easier To Endure, But Not Easy
Observation 1 The Benefits Of Brutal Training
Acrobatics 2 Punctuality: Not Just A Word In Taloba
Dagger 2 Lions Against Lambs
Sacrificing Speed For Reach
Accepting Pain And Returning It
Victory Or Defeat: Only The Fight Matters
Dagger Fighting: Get In Close
Don't Stop Until The Enemy's Down


Additional Notes :
Not bad, all in all. You accomplished a lot in this one, but there's a limit in how much XP I can dole out per solo thread. Still, I liked the analytic way that Ayatah approached her Goliath; very realistic and tactically-minded. It ended on another note of realism, too, with her further separation from the Myrians, but more and more I can see Ayatah is fast learning to deal with that. The description of the Taloba training regime was good, too. Keep 'em coming!


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