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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Kind Words of Encouragement (Solo)

Postby Colt on March 6th, 2013, 11:34 pm

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Fall 80th, 498 AV
afternoon

The glorified stick arced gracefully through the air, flight as beautiful and true as that of a wounded goose, and came to land with a wooden clatter a full ten feet from where it had been launched from.

The small child was undeterred. His face was still set in the hardened mask of determination that it had worn for hours, seemingly unaffected by the failure. Though, it wasn’t quite clear what “success” would entail; he had thrown it from the top of a small hill into an open yonder. Nevertheless, his steps were solid, speaking of a specific goal that had just been missed, a goal that was just out of his fingers’ reach.

The boy was young, with not even seven winters to his name. He had light brown hair that seemed as if it couldn’t decide if it wanted to be light or dark and his cheeks were round with baby fat that time had not yet managed to strip away. When he picked up the fallen javelin he had to carry it at an angle; the thing was almost as tall as he was, and yet he grasped it with the contentedness of someone who knows that they will learn.

“Why’d you pick it, boy?”

Khasr shrugged. “Why’d you pick your sword?” The little Windheel had become better at navigating the old hunter’s parleying and was beginning to wield it himself.

“I picked my sword because it’s a good weapon. Simple. Easy to use. You hold the end that don’t cut and stick with the end that does. Same with the bow. But your sticks got points on both ends; I’ve seen you stick yourself more times on accident than you’ve stuck targets on purpose.”

Khasr pouted and turned on his heel once he had returned to his original position. Fine. If the old man wanted to be so mean then he could be mean to himself. Khasr didn’t need to listen. And he certainly didn’t need to listen to that smirking chuckle. In fact, he decided that he hadn’t heard it at all.

He planted his feet firmly on the ground and hefted the throwing spear to his shoulder. Even though Daha knew nothing about javelins and so the boy was left to figure things out himself, he had made progress from his first clumsy toss in the Whet Stone. If anything, the boy knew his weapon; he always made sure to grasp it in the middle, where the balance was perfect on either side, and though he may have stuck himself once or twice he had never dropped one or lost his grip. It was his own body that he did not know; once thrown, they never seemed to go where he wanted. Still, he was determined. He would learn.

He leaned back and wound up his arm. He held his breath. He let it fly.
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Postby Colt on March 6th, 2013, 11:34 pm

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The javelin flew through the air, just a little more coherent and landing just a little farther than last time. Khasr grinned and clapped, attracting Daha’s attention.

“See?” Khasr exclaimed haughtily. “I got it farther!”

Daha looked at the weapon in question. He couldn’t actually tell if it had gone farther or not, but kept silent about it. He found small children, and this one in particular, some of the hardest people to argue with.

Khasr trotted proudly to where the fallen weapon was sticking awkwardly out of the ground and pulled it out. He returned to his throwing spot and once again planted his feet, pulled back and released the javelin into the wind.

It rotated in the air and dropped to the ground ten feet away. Khasr frowned.

Daha arched an eyebrow as the boy stamped towards the throwing spear, suddenly irritable in his footsteps. The old hunter sighed.

“Come here, boy.” He didn’t know anything about javelins, but he did know a thing or two about shooting a bow. There were probably at least a few things that could help the child.

Khasr looked up in surprise. The word why began to form on his tongue, but he then stopped it. Maybe Daha was going to help him, after all. He tilted his head, then trotted over.

“You’re standing wrong for it,” the old hunter said. “Got your feet too close together. Move ‘em apart.”

Khasr looked down at his little shoes, then did as asked.

“Little more. You want them under your shoulders. There, that’s it. Face where you want to throw. Try it again.”
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Postby Colt on March 6th, 2013, 11:35 pm

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Khasr took a deep breath and drew back his arm once more. He looked intently into open space, and with a great huff threw the javelin.

It wobbled, but the forward end remained facing forward. It soared, past where Khasr had first been standing, over the rise... and landed on the far side of his previously best shot.

Khasr leaped into the air.

“I got it!” he screeched. “See? I got it!”

Before Daha could comment dryly on how his help had made all the difference, the little boy dashed off to retrieve the object of his joy. The hunter sighed and shook his head.

“Children,” he muttered.

Khasr vaulted back onto the rise, ready to try again. He squared his stance, dug his heels to the ground and faced the open plains. Again, the javelin traveled a respectable distance, at least as respectable as one would expect from a seven-year-old. Again Khasr squealed in delight, and as he ran to retrieve it again his steps were buoyant. Daha watched the little Windheel with halfhearted irritation at his noisiness, lips playing between the ghost of a frown and the ghost of a smile. Khasr didn’t pay attention; he was too caught up in this new and wonderful game of seeing how far he could throw the javelin. He was getting better, he was really getting better!

The afternoon stretched, and the coolness of late fall was briefly warmed by the boy’s massive grin. Even when his arm was so tired he could no longer lift it, he was grinning. When his back hurt from all the trotting and leaning, he was smiling. Because, this, this was a good day.

And when he grew up, he decided, he was going to be the best javelin-thrower that ever was.

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Postby Limey on March 11th, 2013, 11:41 pm

Skill and Lore Rewards
Skills Lore
Javelin 3 Not Just A Glorified Stick
Observation 2 Javelin Vs. Sword
Try And Try Again
A Proper Grip At The Right Place
Daha: Old, Crotchety... But Not Stupid
Proper Stance: Shoulder Width
With Every Day, You Get A Little Better
Have A Lofty Goal


Additional Notes :
Short but sweet, and well-written as always, mate. I liked the characterization of Khasr as a boy and old Daha. Hope to see more of both.


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