[Note by Harrier] Claude

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Claude

Postby Claude on April 29th, 2013, 6:47 pm

Claude


Appearance

Race: Pycon
Caste:
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 11"
Weight: 23 lbs.
Birthday: 59, Summer, 490.
Birthplace: TBD

Appearance:
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Formed from clay the same bleached beige and white as old bone, Claude normally stands at just under a foot in height. Though as flexible in shape as all his kind, the middle-aged Pycon is typically seen to be primarily man-shaped in structure. But while he has a head, arms, and torso as any man would; below the waist he is inconsistent from one day, or even one hour, to the next. Sometimes he walks on two legs, sometimes on three or four. Other times he seems to merely glide on an almost snake-like trunk that extends downwards from his belly.

Against that change are the solid details that seem unusually constant for a Pycon. More often than not, his upper body and arms are those of a chiseled athlete. Strongly defined muscle covers his body in smooth swells from neck to hip, but the edges are worn down and faded like a statue from the days of old. Lines smoothed as though by the ravages of constant tide, or wind, or rubbing of hands make him look older than his years and perhaps even a little forlorn. Still, he possesses a straight-backed severity, almost a majesty like a work of great art that has been appreciated so much and so often that it no longer causes the stir it used to but still catches the eye as you walk past.

But despite the varying nature of his propulsion and the tautly attractive nature of his musculature, nothing stands out more than his face. Or, rather, where a face would be. Though his head is fully formed and rests upon a humanoid neck, with clean jaw lines below and a polished dome above, his face is as pale and smooth as a river stone. Whether there were once features that are now worn away completely, or whether he never possessed a mouth or eyes or nose, it is impossible to tell. Eerily, despite his lack of eyes, that faceless expanse of white clay that passes for his head will always focus on whatever draws his attention; his lack of ears and eyes seeming to cause him no difficulties in perceiving his surroundings.
Character Concept

Somewhat unadventurous for his kind, Claude has very little life experience despite his advancing years. Content to dabble in medicine and anatomy for an unambitious living, he spent most of his time following simple and generally unproductive pursuits that fit his mellow demeanor. At odds with his casual lifestyle, his appearance is that of a hard-bitten and well-traveled Pycon, and his bearing is almost regal.

Character History

(Rough sketch until fleshed out by flashbacks and some experience with the character.)
His unassuming life went on for twenty-two years, until Fall of 512 when he found himself shockingly uprooted and transplanted a long and unrecoverable distance away from home. Now in Wind Reach, he's been forced out of his complacent habits by the need to make a life for himself amongst the boisterous Inarta.

Language

Fluent Language: Common.
Basic Language: Nari.


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Medicine 30 SP # Competent
Flux(Magic) 15 SP # Novice
Escape Artist 10 RB, 0 SP # Novice
Py-ken 5 SP # Novice



Lores

Lore of Inarta Anatomy
Lore of Pycon Anatomy

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Robe (Usually worn as a thick skirt.)
-Simple Boots
-Surgical Apron
-Smock (Stained)
1 Waterskin
1 Wind Reach City Map (2 GM)
2 Books, Common (17 GM)
1 Detail Brush (5 SM)
1 Quill (5 CM)
5 Vials of Ink (10 GM)
1 Backpack which contains:
-Soap
-Clay Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 Knife
-Flint & Steel
70 GM / 4 SM / 95 CM

Heirloom: Glass Vial containing the powdered rock of a small portion of his parents. (2 GM Value)

Housing

Location: Wind Reach

Residence: The Commonrooms

Ledger

Start Purchases Total
Starting +100 Pinions -29 GM / 5 SM / 5 CM 70 Pinions


Thread List

Coming soon.
I lifted you up from clay
To do my violent arts
How I did it I cannot say
But instead I gave you hearts
-Rupert Pycon in the play A Villain's Children
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Claude

Postby Harrier on September 27th, 2013, 7:39 pm

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Hello adventurer, I'm Harrier, one of the Wind Reach AS's and I've been looking through your character sheet and noticed a few issues.

  • You need to specify what exactly you purchased. Ledgers need to be clear and concise in this. The items in your inventory that you listed have prices beside them but are not indicated as pre-creation purchases in your ledger. You also have not updated your ledger since receiving your latest grade.

    Purchase Cost Total
    Starting Package +100 Pinions 100 Pinions
    Item purchased amt remaining
    Season Wages/Expenses amt remaining


    The above format is one of the more effecient methods of keeping track of your ledger so that us ST's can see exactly what has been purchased. A purchase date is also recommended but not required. Wages and expenses should be dated by season.
  • You need to include all current threads in your thread list.

Once you've fixed these issues, PM me and I'll remove the intervention. If you have any questions about the above, feel free to PM me and I'll be happy to assist!

Fly On ~Harrier


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