Divina Matre Victorias, "Victorias"

[Victorias]

Divina Matre Victorias Appearance Secret : Race: Pycon Gender: Male Age: 1 Year Birthday: 1, Spring, 512 Birthplace: Sylaris Appearance: His current appearance is based on Yahal and a Benshira that worshiped him. Victorias features greatly detailed wings with each feather coming to an appealing point. He appears dressed as per his form and "wears" a laurel crown. His "dress" is a simple female toga under a breast plate and is barefoot. The face he has chosen is incredibly beautiful, so much so that it seems a shame she were made of clay... and a guy. While his body is gray he has in the past kept beautiful stones and even gold flakes within his body as to decorate himself when trying to make a good impression. Her currently manipulates powders in his body for a greenish color and stores them within his body when necessary. He stands at foot tall and weighs 25lbs not counting inclusions. Rather than change his appearance, he is quite happy with it, when he feels a change need be displayed by his person. he creates an engraving on a feather on his wings. He starts at the highest feather and works his way down. He has decided not to do so evenly and instead will start on his right wing, moving to the right arm should it be necessary. Engravings: [Highest to Lowest] All is one, one is all. Swords can speak and words can cut. Character Concept Secret : He is a traditionalist with revolutionary ideas for a Pycon. His main being that a Pycon's final form is not something they themselves take. He sees his form as more of an identifier but not as important as what other Pycon make it out to be, and definitely not his final form. He believes that a Pycon's final form is actually the impression made on others and things. Thus a Pycon has achieved his final form when he has interacted with all things, and is thus represented by all things. This is a source of Antinomy for him. An example would be the sun. If he made a huge impact on the sun in some way, than all who could observe this are observing a part of his final form. All is one and one is all. He wants to achieve his final form but knows of it's impossibility due to the vastness of the world, and short Pycon lifespans. Otherwise he can again be seen as a traditionalist with odd ideas. He doesn't worship Harameus but acknowledges his part in his creation. He's not really the worshiping type at all. If you can't do it yourself or find someone willing to, than you don't deserve it. To him prayer is more of a hindrance, though he does respect the gods. He highly respects Sagallius and Myri, he believes they deserved to achieve their godhood because they achieved it. He also believes that Aquiras and Ruros got what they deserved. Not in a malicious way, but they lacked the strength to maintain their power thus they didn't deserve it. He is a believer in the idea that knowledge and experience can triumph over all. He who deserves something one day may lose this and those who lack this may gain it. To him possibility is endless because Harameus made it that way. However if he were to serve a god it wouldn't conflict with him either. If given a gift than it was deserved and if they have similar goals why not help each other. They just can't expect too many prayers from him. Maybe on occasion, but not everyday. His everyday behavior is quite friendly . He is typically very laid back and enjoys deep conversations, requiring much thought and debate. Though one would expect a clown upon meeting him due to his size he is hardly that. Though he does possess a sharp tongue. He won't stand for being disrespected as well. To him all are equals, even the divine. A god could threaten his life and to him death would be preferable to disrespect. In fact that god would be helping him achieve his final form by interacting with him. He is also in the middle ground of morality. Overall he can be described as a neutral person, with a deep love for thought, debate and knowledge. Character History To be disclosed IC Language Secret : Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Nader-Canoch Poor Language: Semhu Skills Secret : Skill EXP Total Proficiency Morphing 5 SP 5 Novice Glyphing 5 SP 5 Novice Projection 5 SP 5 Novice Animation 10 SP 10 Novice Reimancey [Earth] 15 SP 15 Novice Auristics 5 SP 5 Novice Voiding 5 SP 5 Novice Escape Artist 10 RB 10 Novice Lores Secret : Lore of Quick Pycon Reformation Lore of Advanced Pycon Reformation Possessions Secret : 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Razor -Balanced Rations (3 Week's worth) -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Khopesh A weapon given as a gift from Sari, the Benshiran woman to which he owes his form, especially his face too. It's a standard Khopesh except having been made for her son it's perfect size to be wielded by a Pycon. Housing Secret : Location: Sylaris House: Just outside of Sylaris by a clay-rich rock formation having been dug out by his earth Reimancey. It's perfect size and features a crude bed and chair. Ledger Secret : Purchase Cost Total Starting +100GM 100GM Housing Return +500GM 500GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Gossamer]

Hello There.

First let me say that arguing with a liaison who has asked you to make changes, or even a DS, is not appropriate. You simply nod, make those changes, or you don't get to play the PC. They will not ask you for unrealistic or outrageous things. They are in their jobs because they know their stuff BETTER than you do and are there to guide you to a correct playable PC. Understand that. And please, do not argue again. If you do, you are wasting their time and your own time and we'll make sure you do not continue to do so.

Accolade covered everything I wanted to say below. Thankfully hes on the job and was at a PC and not on his phone like I was which is why I posted a message forthcoming, not an actual intervention.

One thing I would add is simply this. Please do not use images that are copy written without artists permission. Assassin's creed stuff is fairly obvious and unoriginal. We strive to have people create ORIGINAL ideas here. I'm sure there are AC RPG sites out there if you are really gung-ho on that sort of concept.

The final thing I'd like to say is PLEASE DO NOT TELL THE READER HOW TO FEEL ABOUT YOUR PC. It's annoying beyond believe. Simply describe them. Don't start sentences out with "You'd be amazed..." because how in the world would you know what will amaze someone else or not? That's dumbing your reader down and not giving them any credit at all.

Thank you, and I look forward to seeing your changes.

Goss

[Accolade]

Hello, this is Accolade your Syliras DS. There are a few things here that need to be fixed before we can OK your CS.

House: Just outside of Sylaris by a clay-rich rock formation having been dug out by his earth Reimancy. It's perfect size and features a crude bed and chair.

Your skills list says fire Reimancy, not earth.

Make these changes and PM me when they are done.