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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Marbled Mists

Postby Colt on May 6th, 2013, 8:50 pm

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44th of spring

Dawn had come slowly that morning. The night had been entrenched in heavy rain, a rain that had come to a close just as Syna’s first rays began to caress the horizon. She had not yet fully awoken from her slumber, but no canvas of fiery colors would herald the dawn. The rain goddess still walked, and the Sea of Grass was enshrouded in a veil of mist. Light somehow touched the deep recesses of the fog, casting them in swirling white and silver. Instead of a display of red and gold, today’s dawn was altogether different. Almost… ethereal in the churning of the shadows.

The traps had sprung empty over the course of the night, and the last of their hunted grouse had been eaten for the same night’s dinner. They would have to dip into the store of preserved meat that had made its way into the rest of their belongings if they wanted to have breakfast, which was something he was not looking forward to.

He stood alone, completely isolated in his own small world of shifting silver. It would be another half-hour, at least, until he had to rouse Slither and the falcon, and so he let them sleep.

Now that the soreness of traveling had worn into silence, he once again found himself awake in the gray hours of the morning. It had been a dream that had woken him; this dream, however, had not been as abstract as others.

He had been atop a hill, watching a man below dance with a sword. Slowly, carefully, he made the same movements over and over, giving the silent observer the strange feeling that he’d seen this before. Then he caught sight of the dancer’s face, and it hit him: the Syren, the odd man with the odd curved sword.

Why are you doing that? he asked the Syren.

I am fighting, the Syren answered, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.

No, you are dancing, the hunter insisted.

Yes, the dancer agreed, but it is to fight.

How do you fight by dancing?

Do you remember Orkis?

Of course he does! said the Orkis from beside hunter, eliciting a violent jump.

The hunter eyed the Orkis warily, but he was gone in the blink of an eye. The bemused observer looked around.


Where did he go?

I am fighting him, the Syren explained.

The hunter continued to watch the Syren’s dance, quite thoroughly confused. The man spun slowly and brought his sword above his head, then pivoted and lowered it in an odd, diagonal path until it pointed to the ground. A calm step back, then to the side, bringing the sword in a wide arc across his shoulders, then another turn to bring the sword above his head once ore.

Then, in an instant, the Orkis was there. He and the Syren were locked in battle, and the raised sword was blocking a blow. Pivot, slash across the Orkis’ chest, and the drykas was suddenly gone, and the Syran was just dancing.

Step back, to the side, then the Orkis was back—and the Syrak was evading a blow. The tulwar arced again, cutting slowly through his blink-attacker, and the Orkis was once again gone.

Do you see? asked the Syren.
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Postby Colt on May 6th, 2013, 8:50 pm

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The javelin was familiar in his hand. He grasped the exact center, where the wood was thickest and the balance perfectly equal. He tilted it to one side experimentally, then the other, feeling its movements in a way he never had before. Here, now, he would not send it flying through the air. He closed his eyes, doing his best to visualize the Syren’s dance.

Spin. Bring the javelin above his head. Slash across his chest. Step back, step to the side, arc through the air until his arm was completely extended, weapon parallel to the ground. Breathe.

Again.

Spin. Javelin above his head. Slash. Back, side, arc.

He held the position, running over the dance in his head, trying to imagine the Orkis attacking him. What did each movement match up to?

The first one was easily conjured; a simple strike from above with a sword or club. The strike was blocked, then a slash across to the chest to deter a second assault. Unsuccessful, it would seem, as there was still another attack. Stepping away from… a thrust, perhaps? He slid away from the imagined weapon, then around it—and another slash silenced his phantom opponent once and for all.

He remained there, motionless, one arm extended above the ground. No, something was off. He ran through the dance in his mind.

No, it wouldn’t have worked, had it been real. The dance was for a sword, an instrument made for slashing. His javelin had no edge with which to cut, and no hilt to protect his hand. Neither his strikes nor blocks were effective.

He frowned, trying to imagine what would be effective. First was the strike from above—he raised the javelin to block. No, that would cause his attacker’s weapon to skim across the shaft and hit his knuckles; that would not do. He thought some more, thought about how much force he would use if swinging a sword. Perhaps if he tilted his weapon… he altered the block, and the imaginary sword hit again. This time, however, the javelin was tilted down. The sword would have hit just on the other side of his hand and slid off the javelin, over his shoulder.

Yes, that would work.

And the thrust? How would he counter that?

The avoidance of the blow was simple enough; the art of getting out of the way was effective no matter what weapon he was using. Still, a follow-up strike was demanded be the dance, and a slash would be useless. He tried the back-and-sidestep again, slowly, conjuring the image of the sword’s thrust, then froze in place. The javelin was still poised by his shoulder where the block had taken place, leaving it in an awkward place for anything else. He could attempt the Syren’s slash, but it would do little but give his opponent a hefty bruise on the ribs.

Something darted suddenly through the mists. All thoughts of battle were suspended in time, and sheer reflex took control. The throwing spear, already poised and ready, flew from his hand for the shapeless shadow. It, too, became invisible in the silver, but a pained squeak bespoke of a hit target. A success.

He slipped through the silky veil, catching sight of his weapon jutting from the ground. He knelt beside it and examined the creature he had slain; it was a dik-dik, a thing that looked like some odd cross between an antelope and a mouse. It was still alive, pawing at the ground in a feeble attempt to stand, and with a wrench of its head its struggles were ended. He breathed a small sigh of relief; it seemed that their stored meat would remain untouched today.

Then, suddenly, he laughed. Why hadn’t he seen it before? It was such a simple solution. After the block and evade, his weapon was already at his shoulder, poised to throw—that was an obvious choice, it ever there was one. He drew the javelin from the animal’s body and stepped away to try again.
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Postby Colt on May 6th, 2013, 8:52 pm

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An attack from above. Deflect; blow slides away harmlessly. A thrust. Step back, to the side, a direct stab to the front. An effective dance.

He did it again. Then a third time. By the fourth dance, his movements had become much more fluid. Not the best by any means; when he returned, he would have to enlist a sparring partner’s help if he was to improve. The mist danced around him, forming shadow figures that flickered just out of sight. The east was growing lighter, rendering the thick mist a faint purple.

What else would an attacker do? A simple slash and thrust were just two possibilities. He closed his eyes, trying to figure out what he, himself would do if he were in a conflict with himself and was using a sword. An attack to the ribs; low, simple. He changed personas once again, imagining himself on the receiving end of the blow. The slash came, and he raised his weapon to meet it. He stepped to the side and the sword slid away, leaving another opening for a jab of his own.

He did the dance again, adding his own steps to its end. Again.

The mists suddenly parted, and a shaft of brilliant golden light pierced the air with warmth. Within moments the fog began to thin, and come day, it would be completely one.

He grudgingly lowered his arm. Morning was upon him, and the time for toying with weaponplay had ended. They needed to get moving if they were to reach the Tree before spring’s end.

He returned the javelin to its quiver at his back and gathered the dik-dik in its arms. The creature had a decent amount of flesh on its bones; more than enough for Slither to make use of. Besides, he doubted that this would be the last time he woke up earlier than usual. And if the Syren was still in Endrykas by the time he returned, he would make sure to investigate the dances farther…

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Postby Limey on May 15th, 2013, 5:27 am

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Observation 2 Dreams Of Dancing Steel
Javelin 3 Correct Grip For Javelin (Hand-To-Hand)
Tactics 1 Training To Match Your Opponent's Weapons
Inspiration From One's Surroundings
Fluidity From Practice


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Great work, mate. I always love to see logical, clinical reactions to weapon training. I know it sounds dorky and it can result in tedious prose sometimes, but you are anything but that. Your narrative is great as ever and the flash of inspiration Khasr gets from spearing that dik-dik was... well, inspire.

Keep it up, oh, and a wonderfully strange and ominous dream, too.


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