Celeste's CS

[Celeste Empyrean]

Celeste Empyrean

Basic Info

Name: Celeste Empyrean
Race/Age/Gender:

Kelvic; 3 Yrs old (DOB Spring, 510 AV, Day 14); Female

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Appearance:

Celeste is a thin girl with a slim stomach that can never be satisfied. Her hair is short and brown, and her eyes are a deep chocolate brown color. Her animal form is a Sugar Glider, a small squirrel-like animal with a long brown tail, large eyes, and a small body. She can glide through the air and run quickly through obstacles when she is in animal form.
When she is a Sugar Glider, she weighs only around ten-fifteen grams and is around four or five inches long.

Character Concept:

Celeste is a good-natured, protective girl, but she can be fierce and confident when she needs to. Aside from just her Kelvic-animal form, while she amazes others with her agile speed when she is a Sugar Glider, she does search for other true human companionship; like maybe a friend, or a spouse.

Character History:

Celeste was born during twilight-time in Cyphrus; Riverfall, afterwards her parents abandoned her, or could not take care of her (she is still trying to find out). Thus, she is not familiar with human compassion, and is more often than not curious about the virtues of love, romance, and relationships. Though her thirst for knowledge on love-related emotions is evident, she would more likely want a kind caring person rather than a spouse.
She had journeyed from a remote spot in the plains (her birth spot) all the way to Riverfall, where she walked the streets with little money, but some dignity. Though she has not yet made friends, she wishes to, but it seems much harder than it looks.

Training & Skill Points

Acrobatics - 25/100 SP points
Horse Riding - 10/100 SP
Wilderness Survival - 10/100 points
Hunting - 10/100 RB Points
Cooking - 5/100 SP

Starting Package

Family Heirloom
Celeste was given a small dagger at birth. It wasn't till she was fully self-conscious when she learned how to use it (around 1 yrs. old), and use the old thing for basic hunting.

Housing Choice
1 Large Tent w/ supplies & Gildling Horse(Dun color)
large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, full set of tack, and large set of saddlebags

Languages
Fluent: Common - Basic: Tukant (picked up from living in Riverfall)

Possessions:
1 Set of Clothing (tunic, leggings, shawl, leather boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack with
1 Set of Toiletries
Food for a week
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel

Lores
Lore of the Kelvic
Lore of Cyphrus

Thread List; Spring 513
24th - The Arrival

Ledger
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100 Mizas

[Banshee]

Hello hello!

My name is Banshee, and I am here to help you with the daunting task of joining the Mizahar Community. It is my duty to assist you with your Character Sheet, so that you can get to writing quickly and properly.

And I've noticed several things that need addressed in your Character Sheet, that will need to be fixed before you can begin roleplaying here. You will need to read all of the tabs below, make the appropriate changes, then send me a Private Message. When that has all been done, I will remove this Intervention, and you can get back to roleplaying. Have a great day, and I can't wait to see more of your writing soon!

Helpful Links!
Starting Guide - A very helpful guide to getting started here on Mizahar
Starting Package - The basic things all PCs get to have.
Character Sheet Templates - Great examples for helping to build your CS.
CS Help - A thread with many helpful links, as well as a place where you can ask questions on anything you need!
Rules - Things you need to follow while here in Mizahar.

 

Age

18 years old is elderly for most Kelvics, especially Sugar Gliders. I would suggest changing this to about 2-3 years old.

 

Skills

Your Flying/Gliding skill should be changed to Acrobatics.

Exploring/Survival should be changed to Wilderness Survival.

Please drop the Basic, from Basic Hunting.

Also, as a Kelvic, you get 50 Starting Package (SP) skill points, and 10 Racial Bonus (RB) skill points for a total of 60 points. You only have 50 points, so you can add 10 more.

Also, please add proper notations to your skill points, to differentiate which are Starting Package (SP) and which are Racial Bonus (RB).

 

Lores

You can have 2 Starting Lores, so you can add 1 more.

 

Ledger

Your PC gets to start with 100 Golden Mizas (GM). You also should include a Ledger, to track your purchases and the like. Also since you started with a Tent, you should look at the Starting Packages Link further up in this post.

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