Robter Howell

[Robter Howell]

Robter Howell Appearance Race: Human What's your race? Gender: Male Gender here. Age: 24 How old are you? Birthday: 12, Winter, 490AV Day, Season, Year. Birthplace: Zeltive Where were you born? Appearance: http://i.imgur.com/feLaHU5.png What do you look like? Character Concept Let's talk about you some more. Character History Tell me all about your past, baby. Robter was born in Zeltiva to his mother and father, which he would never to this day learn the names of, you see his father was a terrible, evil, yet sweet caring gentle man, let me explain, Robter's father was a very infamous criminal, a thief for a lack of better word's, he was actually the founder of a band of thieve's a small band, but still deadly, they had an abandoned barn they used as there "Headquaters" (Sorry, i couldn't think of a better word for it) which he would give missions to be executed. Robter's mother, she was i guess you could say his "Janitor" she would go around and clean up the messes Robter's father would make, such as if someone maybe had a clue about the bands existence and so on, she would pay them, and woo them with her beauty, but she remained loyal to her husband, but when the son of a high ranking guard in Zeltiva found out, there was only one thing the man wanted, and of course after nature took its course, Robters mother became pregnant with, Robter. His father was furious with his mother, he could barely look at her the same way. Robters grandfather was a man of many wives and Robters father despised him for it, which is one of the main reasons he was so furious with his wife, when Robter was born they could not look at him the same way, they had to get rid of him, neither of them really loved him, it was a stale relationship just a chore to them, to take care of Robter so when Robter was 2, and mostly cared for by the fathers band of theives brothers, his mother very early in the morning walked to the docks of Zeltiva found a ship that was headed to Syliras, and begged and pleaded the husband and wife that were headed there they took him to Syliras with them, and dropped him off at the ophanage where he lived until he was 16 he started working then, and then got a small flat where he has lived up until now. Language Fluent Language: Common Most fluent language here. Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Skill 1 # SP # Novice Skill 2 # SP # Novice Skill 3 # RB, # SP # Competent Lores Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of Syliran Culture Lore of History of Syliran Knights Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Fill me in, please! (HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - Max. 50gm worth) Housing Location: Where in Mizahar are you living? House: As a character, please note that your starting package does not include a cottage; instead, it includes a 20x20 apartment with the furniture listed in the Housing section. As it is the cheapest housing available, the apartment is situated deep within the interior of Stormhold Citadel and does not include any windows, only ventilation shaft to bring in fresh air. Each hallway is lined with torches which are kept lit at all hours of the day, allowing for light and giving residents free access to something to light their hearth from. A diagram is included below: Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Banshee]

Hello hello!

My name is Banshee, and I am here to help you with the daunting task of joining the Mizahar Community. It is my duty to assist you with your Character Sheet, so that you can get to writing quickly and properly.

And I've noticed several things that need addressed in your Character Sheet, that will need to be fixed before you can begin roleplaying here. You will need to read all of the tabs below, make the appropriate changes, then send me a Private Message. When that has all been done, I will remove this Intervention, and you can get back to roleplaying. Have a great day, and I can't wait to see more of your writing soon!

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DoB

Your Date of Birth must coincide with your Listed Age. If born in Winter 490, your PC would be 22 years old, not 24.

 

History

I'm skeptical about several aspects of your PC, as such, I've asked Paragon, the Regional Storyteller for Zeltiva to review it and let me know what he thinks.

Paragon got back to me, and this is word for word what he said.

He would need some kind of permission for his dad to be an "infamous criminal". If it was simply a thief, then that's fine. We have no abandoned barns as Zeltiva does not have farms. The headquarters I'm not sure of - there is a secret Yshul Cult of thieves in Zeltiva, so if he would like to write that into the history, that's okay. But their HQ is not a barn.

 

Skills

You're completely lacking Skills. Here's the Skill List. As a Human you get 50 Starting Package (SP) skill points and 15 Racial Bonus (RB) skill points for a total of 65 points. Please also label using the above identifiers which points came from where.

Banshee's Character Sheet Tip of the Month - June 2013

The Date of Birth (DoB) in your Character Sheet (CS) is required. What isn't required is to list an age. If you are having difficulties with putting down an age, or just get frustrated by it, just put your Date of Birth. This is the current Tip of the Month for it is one of the most common errors I see.

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