Dolnad Cud

[Dolnad Cud]

Name: Dolnad Cud
Race: Human
Birthday: 13th Day of Autumn 489
Gender: Male
Physical Description:
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 191 lbs

Dolnad has pale skin and long, greasy dark hair. He has hollow brown eyes framed by bushy eyebrows which are often raised, which combined with his round facial features and smirking mouth gives him a weird and rather unpleasant look. He is quite fat, although pretty strong for a man who resents physical labour.

Dolnad grew up with his mother in a small house in the shady parts of Syliras. From early age he was kept at home, away from people, learning how to brew potent brews from different types of mushrooms. Thus, he is unsociable, irritable and quite neurotic. He has also become addicted to the hallucinogens certain types of mushrooms produce, giving him some relief in his lonely life. Although Dolnad is lacking in the social department, he is a very intelligent man, and highly resilient, never giving in to life's attempts to end his miserable existence. He believes in the Gods, but resents them. Apparently condemned to be alone forever, he continues his life as he always have done.

Dolnad wears simple clothing, and carries with him the tooth of his now dead mother, the only real person he ever felt a connection to.

Skills

Herbalism SP 25

Crafting SP 5

Reading SP 5

Eavesdropping SP 5

Stealth SP 5 + 15 RB = 20

Gardening SP 5

Lores

Caretaking of Hallucinogenic Mushrooms
Cooking with Hallucinogenic Mushrooms

Heirloom

Mothers Tooth

Languages: Common tounge, fluent

Items
1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Housing

Bronze woods outside Syliras

Shabby house, with bedding a cauldron and different types of alchemy accessories, and even a little garden-ish thing (mushrooms!!).

[Jupiter]

Hi Dolnad!

I’m Jupiter, one of the Character Sheet Liaisons here in Mizahar. I’ve been looking over you character sheet, and I’ve found some problems that need to be fixed. Don’t worry though, I’ll be here to help you!

Currently, your character’s year of birth is very off. I’m not sure if the 14 you have is your character’s age, but if it is then your character’s year of birth would be 498. If not, then please choose a more feasible year, as the one you currently have would make your character 185 years old!

Several of your skills have less then 5 skill points in them. In the starting package, any skills that you choose must have between 5 and 30 points in them, so please rework your skill points to fit this! You are also currently missing 5 of the skill points given in the starting package, so be sure to add those in!

Also, the way that you have your skills set up currently is not correct. You will need to note next to the skill whether it is from the starting package (SP) or whether it’s a racial bonus (RB). Here are two example of correct skill set ups using your alchemy skill.

Alchemy: 25/100 (25 SP)

or

Skill	EXP	Total	Proficiency
Alchemy	25 SP	25	Novice

You’re currently missing the racial bonus for your character. As a human, your character will get 15 points in any skill of your choice! Just make sure that all 15 are in the same skill. Now, as an example, let’s say you added your 15 point racial bonus to your stealth. Your skill would be laid out like this:

Stealth: 25/100 (10 SP + 15 RB)

Skill	EXP	Total	Proficiency
Stealth	10 SP + 15 RB	25	Novice

Caretaking of Mushrooms isn’t a skill within Mizahar. You could choose something such as Gardening and would be able to use that skill on mushrooms.

You currently only have one lore. Please choose another! Also, the one that you currently have doesn’t work as a lore. Perhaps you could do something like Lore of Which Mushrooms are Hallucinogenic or Lore of Mushroom Care.

Remember to label your language as fluent!

Please choose housing that is within Syliras. It’s highly doubtful that your character would be able to survive outside of the city.

Once you’ve fixed these problems, just send me a PM and I’ll remove this post and approve your sheet! If you have any questions or concerns about anything, feel free to contact me! I’ll do everything I can to help you out!


Jupiter