[Note by Jupiter] Hadrian WildFire

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Hadrian WildFire

Postby Hadrian WildFire on June 19th, 2013, 12:26 am

Name: Hadrian WildFire
Race: Drykas
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: 14, fall, 489
Birthplace: Where were you born?

Appearance: Hadrian is 6 feet 2 inches tall with long legs and a very toned torso. His face is sharp and very stern looking.

Character Concept

Hadrian is a drykas who learned to ride at a young age. His horse is a Cyphrus strider given to him after his 16th birthday. His strider has been a very loyal steed and he loves his horse he named deryk . He lives in the tent villages with his family. His family is a large part of his life and he looks to make a fortune to care for his mother.

Character History

He was part of a successful family living in the sea of grass.When he was young his brother was a skilled swordsman who taught Hadrian how to defend himself against others. Hadrian had to use this skill once when getting attacked by a bandit when he was out hunting with his father. His family was prosperous until a wildfire killed his father and brother in spring 510 AV. He found his mother wounded in the grass and escaped with her on his horse before his families tent was burned and everyone killed. He took his mother to a healer in RiverFall. After staying in RiverFall for a few weeks he took his own tent out and set his home up in the sea of grass. Soon after that he found his fathers body and his favorite leather armor. He swore to wear this armor in honor of his father.

Language:

Fluent Language: Pavi
Basic Language: Common


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Riding 30 SP + 10 RB Competent
Weapon: Cutlass 10 SP Novice
Tattooing 10 SP Novice




Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)

Lore of riding cyphrus striders

Lore of caring for horses


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: His deceased fathers Leather Armor

Housing: 1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a riding horse, a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags.


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Toolkit, tattooing -25 GM 75 GM
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Hadrian WildFire

Postby Jupiter on June 24th, 2013, 3:50 am

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Hi Hadrian!

I’m Jupiter, one of the Character Sheet Liaisons here in Mizahar! I’ve been looking over your character sheet for you, and I found a few problems that need to be fixed!

  • First of all, your age and date of birth don’t match up. Based on the age that you have listed for your character, he would have been born in the year 493.
  • A Strider isn’t given to a Drykas as a present. They bond with each other. Please change this in your character concept! :)
  • In your skills, your Riding skill has 40 skill points. None of your skills can have more then 30 at the moment, so I’m going to have to ask you to change that!
  • In your possessions, please choose between a coat or a cloak! :)
  • And finally, please put the city that you’ll be starting out at in your housing section!

Once you’ve fixed these problems, just let me know and I’ll remove this post and approve your sheet! If you have any questions or concerns, just let me know! :)


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