ARAVANA`

[Aravana]

ARAVANA` Appearance Race: Konti Gender: Female Age: 15 Birthday: 49, Winter, 494. Birthplace: Mura Appearance: Aravana is definitely on the shorter side of the Konti race. She is skinny and her skin glows creamy white. Her eyes are pale violet with a sparkle of gray in them. Her hair is long and straight, bright white with off-white highlights behind her ears. Character Concept Aravana is more on the fiesty side, and whenever she breaks down she tries her best to not to let others see her pain. She is very interested in the god Laviku. She loves the water and she is probably in the water three fourths of her day! Language Fluent Language: Kontinese, common Basic Language: Vani Poor Language: Arumenic Skills Skill Total Reimancy 25 pts. Hunting 15 pts. Storytelling 10 pts. (HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - Common Skills: Trade skills related to Medicine, Artists, Divination, Tourism) Lores Helpful Lores: Reimancy Hunting Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak (white with silver trim) -Simple Boots (black leather) 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: dead mother's writing kit (pen, paper, ink) Housing Location: Mura House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Wanderlust]

Hello Aravana!

I'm Wanderlust, one of your local Character Sheet Liaisons. I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar begin as smoothly as possible! Unfortunately, I've noticed some issues with your character sheet that will need to be resolved before you can continue roleplaying. Once these issues have been taken care of, PM me and I'll remove this intervention!

• Title: Firstly, please make sure the title of your character sheet is simply your character's name with only the first letter capitalized.
  
• Age and Date of Birth: Please include the abbreviation "AV" after the year in your date of birth to indicate that your character was born after the Valterrian. Additionally, if your character was born on the 49th of Winter, 494 AV, she would be 18 years old, not 15. Also note that in the Konti lore, it states that Konti live up to 250 years and are considered adults at 30 years old. As such, bear in mind that at age 15, Aravana would be considered the rough equivalent of a 9 year old human child.
  
• Languages: All players begin with only a single language at each level of fluency. You cannot be fluent in both Kontinese and Common -- you must pick one or the other.
  
• Skills: As a novice Reimancer, you can only control a single element. You must make a notation of what that element is in your skill table, i.e. "Reimancy (Water) | 25 SP | 25 total | Novice". Additionally, your skills have been set up incorrectly. Please see the Secret below for more information on how to properly set up your Skills.
  
  
  Secret :

  Example 1:
  
  

  Skills	Exp	Total	Proficiency
  Auristics	15 SP, 72 XP	87	Master
  Seduction	18 SP, 3 XP	21	Novice
  Glassworking	10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP	57	Expert
  Intelligence	5 SP	5	Novice
  Sewing	13 XP	13	Novice
  Weapon: Javelin	1 XP	1	Novice
  Acrobatics	85 XP	85	Master

  
  
  SP = Starting Points
  RB = Racial Bonus Points
  XP = Earned Experience Points
  
  
  Example 2:
  
  Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
  Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
  Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
  Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
  Sewing: 13/100
  Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
  Acrobatics: 85/100
  
  
  Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
  
  
• Racial Bonus: You're missing your Racial Skill bonus! As a Konti, this means that you can add an extra 10 skill points into either Fortune Telling or Medicine. Yay!
  
• Lores: I'm afraid your Lores are far too vague. In fact, Reimancy and Hunting are skills. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as "Lore of Reimancy: Early Signs of Overgiving" or "Lore of Hunting: Tracking a Deer".
  
• Heirloom: An heirloom can be anything on the Price List that costs 50 GM or less. Unfortunately, an heirloom must be a singular item. You cannot claim all three pen, paper and ink as your heirloom.

Once the issues I mentioned above have been taken care of, I'll approve your CS. Of course, I'm here to help! If anything I mention needs clarified, or if you just have any general questions, feel free to PM me!