Solo For Rhymes! [Job]

Danderion feebly attempts to write lyrics in addition to playing the lute at his new work.

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For Rhymes! [Job]

Postby Danderion Snowsong on August 16th, 2013, 3:35 pm

24th of Summer, 513 AV

Harmonic tunes sound through The Red Diamond Tavern. Occasionally, a not so harmonic error would split the otherwise lovely tune, or even stocking completely until finding the rhythm again. This was the work of Danderion, freshly hired as an musical entertainment at the tavern. It may be strenuous, but it rewards him with practice and a very reasonable pay.

Scattered applause resounds throughout the tavern as he ends his current piece. He then shifts his slowly-cramping fingers to move on to the next piece. Just then, a rather elderly man calls out to him: Listen here, how about you tell a story for us while playing, hmm?

He contemplated this. He knew how to write, but had never written something to accompany his pieces. It would very probably be useful to know. So he smiled a bit and replied: I'll have something by tomorrow, if you can wait!

Applause came once again, but louder than when he had simply played. He decided this was a good sign, and thought about this while he played on. However, after another few bells of work were done and he stretched his cramped fingers, he hadn't thought of anything.

So he simply chose another approach: He would go to the other patrons, play them a bit and ask what the topic should be.

So he walked up to the elderly man, and played him a rather uplifting tune. In response to his inquiry, he answered: Heh, why not about a peaceful scene, not about these rather sorrowful battles others write about? Thinking spontaneously, he asked for the man's name. Drondon, lad!

And so he proceeded around the tavern, playing different tunes, with different results: some patrons not wishing to be disturbed, others enthusiastically giving him multiple topics to work with.

After the last bell of his work was done, he took his lute and walked home. It had been a good day, he thought, with something new he could do.

He then sat home with a piece of paper and a quill accompanied by cheap ink, and thought through everything the others had told him: everyday life, tragedy, love, battle and honour. He decided to put a little of each in the ballad, and started working his way toward rhymes. How to put it all elegantly? After multiple bells, he had devised a rather short one, but he was content with it, being his first poem.

Returning to work the next day, he saw the old man come in a few chimes after he had began. He grinned at his sight, and preparing himself to play it, began to recite it:

It was but a normal day in Drondon's life,
Yet fate found the time was rife.
The young man found a young lass,
Love set in stone, never to pass.

But that was when war's banners called,
Drondon was named, both were appalled.
He then left, his city's what he fought for,
and he returned, both sick and sore.

For days and weeks he coughed and sneezed,
for air he could only wheeze.
And when his body finally resigned,
his dear one followed, their fates entwined.


This time the loudest applause he had received so far echoed throughout the tavern, even if some was sarcastic. WIth Drondon grinning at him, he couldn't help but feel ecstatic. He bowed, and prepared to again play his usual tunes.
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For Rhymes! [Job]

Postby Noblesse on September 17th, 2013, 10:55 am

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Skill XP Earned
Lute 1 XP
Poetry Composition 1 XP
Storytelling 1 XP


Lore Earned
Performing at the Red Diamond Tavern
Asking Patrons for a Good Story Prompt
Poem: The Life of Drondon


Additional Notes :
Nice job for your first thread, Danderion. :)

Contrary to what you requested, however, I gave you Poetry composition instead of Lyrical writing, as this was a poem he composed and recited in the thread. I also would have awarded more to his lute playing skill, but there was a lack of detail in this action, hence the 1 XP.

I have also skimmed through your CS and noticed you’ve already given yourself your seasonal income. Please, before you do this make sure to PM me first with your two job threads. It does not even have to be completed nor graded. As long as your PC had performed his work, he will be awarded his wages. Follow up on it soon as you see this note.


Arise ye of noble heart

If you have any concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can figure it out.
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