Creza

[Creza Raltros]

Full name
Creza Raltros

Race
Kelvic

Birthday
Winter 32nd, 496 AV (16 years old)

Gender
Female

Appearance:
For a Kelvic, Creza is pretty short, she is only for about 5'9" tall weighing for about 130 lbs. Which make her look pretty skinny and for a kelvic this makes it efficient to morph to her animal form, an eagle. For that reason, her eyes look very special. It looks sharp and narrow, but its clear golden brown iris made it hard to look away from this girl. She may look slump and weak, but her 'animal side' made it clear not to underestimate her strength. She has a long brunette hair that suits her eyes well and sometimes, she would cut it really short according to her feelings at that time.

Character concept:
Due to her age, she tends to act like a teenager, unstable and emotional but like everyone else, she learned to mature way faster than other kelvics. Like a leader, she would think through every aspect of a decision and that trait makes her a good leader. She is courageous and she stood up for what she believed.She is also a good companion for those who is seeking for a true relationship because she is less likely to lie. She speaks everything she has in mind but only for good. She is a great girl for someone at her age.

Character History:
Creza is a girl with no parents. Her parents are patrons of the sky. Their job as eagle kelvics are to watch out for the sky. Unfortunately, they died on a mission when Creza was just a little girl. Since then, Creza has been travelling with different companions. She is smart enough to protect herself and she could just flee off to the sky whenever she feels like travelling alone. Then, she'll find new clothes to travel back by feet. Due to her form as an eagle she is not relatively close to other members of either her parents' families. In fact, she doesn't know anyone in the family beside hers. Her parents are pretty rich when they left her alone and she save every penny of it and whenever she needs food, her hunting skill would take control. Then one day she decided to stop travelling and stay in one place and she took all her belongings from her old house and brought it to her new apartment.

Skills:
Wilderness Survival: +30/100
Foraging: +26/100
Unarmed Combat: +26/100
Medicine: +10/100
Cooking: +10/100
Dagger: 5/100

Lores:
Lore of reading traits
Lore of plants in Syliras

Possessions:
-1 Set of a simple clothes (SP)
-1 Set of boots (SP)
-1 Set of cloak (SP)
-1 Waterskin (SP)
-1 Backpack (SP)
-1 Set of toiletries (SP)
-1 Eating knife (SP)
-Flint & Steel (SP)
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: A necklace that holds a small bead with a dagger carving to remind Creza that it is their duty to protect the people.

Housing: 20x20 Apartment at Syliras.

Ledger:
-Starting: +100 GM

Thread List:

[Enchantress]

Character Sheet Intervention

Hello there, Creza!

I'm Enchantress, one of the resident CS Liaisons and I'm here to help you out! I've read through your CS and I couldn't help but notice some kinks in your Character Sheet. These issues must be dealt with before your CS could be approved!

 

Basic Info

Age: As stated in the lore, Kelvics have a much shorter lifespan - they grow much faster - compared to the other races and it will match their animal form's. The average lifespan of an eagle is 20 years, which would mean that if Creza is 16 years old, she'll probably about 50 years old in human years. So, if you want Creza to be in her teenage years, she should be around 6-7 years old.

Birthplace: You seem to be missing the information, please add it to your character sheet!

 

Skills

Each new character is only allowed 50 points for skills and 10 or 15 more as Racial Bonus. You currently have a total of 102 points. Please subtract this. And as a Kelvic,you can add 10 points in either Hunting, Wilderness Survival, or Foraging. Also, please arrange

 

History

As I understand it, your history is quite vague without a birthplace, so you might to add some further details so that I can judge whether it fits the lore or not

 

Language

You seem to be missing this part of the character sheet. Each character is allowed a fluent, basic and poor languages at staring - one for each category. Since you're a Kelvic, your fluent language should be Common and Eagle-Speak! Please add this to your CS!

 

Lore

You might want to elaborate on the reasing traits you mentioned! It's a tad too general!

 

Note

I highly recommend to fully read the lore of the Kelvics, for it is one of the more complicated races!

You can check this link out! It offers various templates for character sheets and most certainly will help! You can simply copy the BB codes and fill in the necessary info!

Once these problems had been fixed, just contact me and I'll get this intervention out of the way! Until then, I'm afraid you can't post anything IC. Now, if you any questions of some sort or just need someone to help your way around, feel free to PM me! I promise I won't turn you into a frog