Flashback Fall of a warrior (Kalder)

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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Fall of a warrior (Kalder)

Postby Kalder Volhin on October 16th, 2013, 2:40 am

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The pavillion was a shadow of its former self. The children who usually play and cause trouble throughout the building were all gone leaving Kalder and his mother alone without any distraction."Kalder my son please wear your hair in the way i showed you. Your father would be proud to see his son standing tall amongst the rest of the clan." Kalder looked away and lowered his head in shame. "My father has never been proud of me a day in my life. He wasn't even there when i bonded with Tasatir. He resented for what happened to Morwen. The way he looked at me everyday is a constant reminder of what i meant to him." The sun continued to blast rays of heat upon the endless field of grass and all who dwelled within it as the ceremony began. The death of the great Hrunthar the master hunter brought grief to all drykas that day. As his only son Kalder would be the one to take command as head of his family and the pavillion his family resided in. The body of Hrunthar still looked young and full of life and wisdom. Kalder remembered the days in which he would often stare at his windmarks dreaming of days when he too would stalk prey with his father and Morwen. Now his father was dead and he had died hating Kalder for his mistakes as a child. There was still the ceremony to carry out the fall of a great warrior had brought even still more misery among his clan.
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Fall of a warrior (Kalder)

Postby Praetorian on October 16th, 2013, 3:02 am

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No. You don't have a CS STARTED. You cannot make any posts until then. What kind of character are you? What do you look like? What skills do you have? We don't know because you don't have a Character Sheet.

Go make one and try again.

Also, you cannot make a post with a timestamp like that. "2 years ago" is far from descriptive. At the very least, you have to have the Season, Day, and Year.

Kalder Volhin wrote:2 Years ago


There are also no "buildings" in the Sea of Grass. There are tents. And death is common among the Drykas, there is no way that every single Drykas would be affected by the passing of one. Life is hard; people die.

Please, actually read the lore before jumping into the forums. You'll be a lot happier and your character will be a million times better.

I'm locking this thread. You can start posting when you have your Character Sheet.

If you have any questions, please message me.
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