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Favchean does a little unarmed combat practice

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

The Body The Temple

Postby Favchean Hronis on November 13th, 2013, 11:11 pm

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Time stamp 77 Fall 513

In the darkness of night many things can hide, shadows play across the buildings of Riverfall as Leth shines its light along its streets. There was no hush of the evening for the night was still young enough that there were the occasional couples out for a night stroll through the gardens, or through parks. The mother of Akalaks was Akajia, the goddess of shadows and secrets, but their father was Wysar the god of integrity, discipline and conviction. The two balanced each other out in Favchean's mind, and as a race Akalak's mirror their deistic parentage in their own limitations and advantages.

Favchean accepted Akajia's influence on his life as a child accepted that his parents would make him eat broccoli. He gave her credit where credit was due, giving her a prayer of thanks when it was merited and he never complained too loudly about the influences she gave. It was to Wysar that Favchean had held his most esteem for. So it was that he found himself in his cozy condo that was rather bare in decoration. One could tell that a man lived here alone for there was barely any amenities for comfort. There was a bed for sleeping in the bed area, there was a dresser for his clothing such as they were. There was a cooking area with a small wood stove that also helped keep him warm in the winter. There were wooden chairs with no cushions, and the wood itself was scarred and time tested.

In the middle of the living area, where a couple might have placed a chair or couch for entertaining Favchean had an odd contraption. It looked almost like a coat rack, long and standing upright. It's support beam was about two feet wide, and reached a height of seven foot so stood a little taller then Favchean. It had appendages that stuck out at odd angles from its support beam. Some of these were high, some were low, and some bent upward, while others angled downward. Each arm was connected to the support beam with a sturdy metal bracket, causing the arms to move when pushed. Each arm was covered in thick cloth, and when touched one could feel sand underneath the fabric. Each arm was also a different weight. It was a practice dummy that Favchean had purchased from a friend who made them for those who sought to improve their unarmed combat.
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This is exactly what Favchean hoped to do. But first it was time to properly thank Wysar for his care and guidance. The dark green Akalak settled down easily on his knees, sitting back and resting his hands on his taut thigh. He was bare chested, his hair unbraided once more hanging long down his neck and shoulders. He was dressed for comfort so that he could both train, but also so that he could meditate on his god.

Icy blue eyes closed, and he began his breathing exercises. These allowed him to be able to attune his attention inward, on his body but also to cast his consciousness out to the god Wysar. Favchean did not presume that the god would heed his words, or even make note of his prayers, only that he believed that he heard them.

His breathing was slow and deep, his muscles loose and relaxed as he controlled his emotions and his thoughts. Nothing mattered in this moment but making sure every single muscle loosened, every single breath was purposefully taken. Nothing in this moment was automatic or taken for granted.

Wysar, god of integrity, hear my thoughts. Thank you for the discipline that you have granted me and my brothers, the discipline that helps most of us manage our natures. Thank you for o god for the focus that you help bring us, for the hand that you keep on your children the Akalak. Help this Akalak achieve greater discipline, greater integrity. Guide my decisions so that all are honorable and righteous. Help my heart continue to burn with conviction to protect Riverfall and its citizens. Help my heart hold dear the conviction to uphold your integrity.

When the short prayer was over, Favchean continues to stay in his calm state his breathing continued to slow and it was chimes before he opened his eyes once more.


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The Body The Temple

Postby Favchean Hronis on November 13th, 2013, 11:40 pm

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Done with his evening meditation and prayer time, Favchean stands in one fluid motion. The size of his girth might make people assume that he didn't have the grace to execute such a move but he was not some clumsy oaf. While he might never have the look of a delicate ballerina, it might have surprised someone to see just how easily the lumbering Akalak moved.

The first thing he did was begin to warm up, while at the same time inspecting his newest addition to his training regime. He had paid fifteen gold miza's for this from a trader who swore that it was in great condition. He had tested it and it looked as if it hadn't been used much if at all so he was pretty happy with it thus far.

First he started to move in place, just a soft shifting of his feet back and forth to get the blood moving. Normally his hair was tightly braided so the soft swinging of the coarse black strands was mildly distracting. However when he begins to move his arms to the side and back to warm of his arm muscles he begin to lose himself to the training. Blocking out all that wasn't his body and his opponent, which at this time was the wooden dummy, he felt the exercise begin to warm his body,

Tentatively, testing the dummy, the Akalak threw a right cross to the left top arm, a simple punch. He held back, he did not put his entire weight on it but his knuckles connected nicely to the bag and he felt the impact into his arm. The dummy arm barely moved. With a smile Favchean threw another right cross, this time it was harder, and again his knuckles connected. This time the arm bent backwards a quarter of an inch, and bounced back easily. One more right cross was given, this time with his full weight behind it, his knuckle connected and he felt the impact into his shoulder. The arm bent back rapidly, but also returned to its position thanks to the tightly coiled hinge.

Laughing now, enjoying the exercise Favchean began to practice in earnest. Now instead of a simple punch, he raised to a punch kick combo. Right hook, left knee kick, right roundhouse in quick succession. His thick body obeyed his commands, the knuckles connecting solidly, his knee smashing into the body of the dummy, but the right roundhouse he misjudged the middle arm. Instead of connecting his bare foot sailed over the arm he was intending, which caused his toes to smash into the solid trunk of the dummy. Instead of connecting to the arm with the aligned leg to take some of the impact his toes had taken the brunt of the impact causing him to grimace as he bounces off the tingling pain with just two or three bounces.


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The Body The Temple

Postby Favchean Hronis on November 14th, 2013, 12:10 am

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Once his toes stopped stinging he began again, this time he started with a roundhouse kick, connecting solidly with a 'THWACK'. On the finishing turn he leaned back and extended the opposite leg forward, his knee over extended a little bit and he felt the protest in his joint. He didn't let that slow him though, and as he rose to place the foot back on the ground his arm came up in a succession of quick jabs. One, two, three, four, all lightening quick but not all as precise as he wanted. He needed to work on that, he can hit them very precisely in slow motions but in a combat situation he was not going to get away with being slow.

Repetitive motions were key, he needed to get his muscle memory state worked on so that things were smooth and fluid. So he once again went through the same motions. The first series of a right upper, left knee kick. and a right roundhouse, then the second series of a left roundhouse, a right front kick and a quick series of jabs. His body was beginning to glisten, sweat beginning to bead on the dark skin but his breathing continued to be extremely controlled, lest he begin to pant.

He didn't pull any punches, he didn't hold back on any kick and soon his knuckles were sore and the tops of his feet felt beaten up. After a little bit his breathing became heavier and less controlled but he continued. It was not until he felt good about the precision of his jabs that he worked another series of hits. This one was a left cross, a leg sweep, and a high kick. He was a lefty so the cross was cake, the sweep caused him to wobble, and he found it difficult to go from a crouched sweep to a high kick. The tendon that ran from the inner knee to buttock stretched tightly. Another thing he would have to work on.


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The Body The Temple

Postby Favchean Hronis on November 14th, 2013, 4:08 am

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Favchean straightened, aligning his spine with his neck, making sure his narrow hips are straight and his feet beneath his shoulders squared. Slowly he raised his right leg, keeping his left straight and still, his knee first coming parallel to his stomach then his sternum before he began to straighten the knee, turning his hips to the side. Slowly, ever so slowly does the muscle extend, his body wobbling once forcing him to stop with his leg partially extended to try and find his balance once more. Once he did he continued to extend until the leg was perpendicular to the floor, his hip turned outward and his body balancing off center. Then he lifts higher, his head angling downward as his foot angled up. Slowly more and more until the tendon protested, then as slowly as he raised his leg, he was quick to snap his knee together and lower his leg. He will have to work on lengthening that muscle a little more.

The next exercises he worked on was a series of punches. He was trying to prevent developing a tell, a tick that would tell an opponent just which hand he was fixing to strike with. So many inexperienced fighters both with unarmed and with weapons flinches, or twitches visibly right before they lunged telling a more experienced just which side to duck. His series of punches were upper right, lower left, left cross, upper left, lower right. His arm extending, his elbow never opening fully, every impact caused the muscle in his arms to ripple from the shock of it. Yet he continued. The only time he broke the routine is when he felt himself flinch, or twitch, and then he stopped and started again in that same punch.

Now he knew enough about anatomy that there will always be those tells that no one will be able to see with the naked eye, and he tried hard not to tell the difference between the tells that every day people would be able to see, and someone who it would take more then simple eyesight.

A grunt is starting to be uttered from his lips with every punch, a sure sign that Favchean was tiring yet he didn't slow. Over and over, his arms extend and the sound of flesh against material rang inside his condo, and his breathing became pants. His long hair, unbound was wet on the underside with perspiration. Yet he did not stop until his muscles quivered from exhaustion. Even then he slows to a stop, and does not just instantly go from fast paced movement to a dead stop. He slowly slowed the punches, and then stretched his arms gently before he made it to one of the chairs with out a cushion, and sat heavily. He would sleep well tonight.


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The Body The Temple

Postby Magpie on November 30th, 2013, 10:59 pm

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Favchean :
XP:
Meditation +1
Observation +1
Unarmed Combat +3
Acrobatics +1

Lores:
Wysar: Appreciation Through Action
Unbraided Hair is Distracting While Training
Speed Matters in Real Combat
Training Muscle Memory
Removing 'Tells' from Fighting Habits


Notes :
Very good with sticking to your experience level. I'm sure a lot of people would have made the whole session go off without a hitch because it was just a training dummy, but you were very realistic with getting used to using the dummy.

On a stylistic note, be mindful of your tenses. Writing on Mizahar is typically done in the third person past tense, but you slipped into present in a couple places. No big deal, and it didn't break the flow of reading, but I wanted to let you know.

Overall, a great little solo, you have a very natural, descriptive style that makes for an easy read. Good job :)


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