Completed Espy Variance

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

Espy Variance

Postby Noaru on December 3rd, 2013, 7:10 pm

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Winter 2, A.V. 513


A thin veil of white coated the water’s surface, foretelling the approach of winter’s wrath. The air was cold and an ice coating was placed upon the lonesome pillars of salt that occupied this lake. A particular pillar of salt stood in the center of the lake; lonesome in nature, as though the ice that formed around the lower regions of its body had imprisoned it. A silhouette appears above the pillar as white soulmist, shimmering under the falling grace of snow, flowed around it. The silhouette shimmers in the gaze of the morning sun, as a robe of obscure whiteness forms around its visible body.

Noaru overlooks the partially frozen waters with the eyes of a wayfarer. He had lost his way and in his mistaken judgment, found a new place location to be his alone. A cold winter breeze captures Noaru’s soulmist, his robe flows in the direction behind him and extended outwards like wings in attempts to capture the wind. The spirit would have believed that he was an extension of nature; representing its darker attributes at most, if it were not for the love he has for dark concepts. Noaru crosses his arms and focuses on the world around him—to feel the energies there in.

“I have forgotten where I came from.”

Noaru realized that he was so consumed with power and growing stronger that he had forgotten his core nature, his primal nature. He was nigh completely domesticated by the human family he had guarded and watched over those many years ago. The Valterian was what brought him back to the start. The destruction stripped him of everything and left him with scattered memories: a profound hatred and a void that can only be filled with the completion of the task he has set out for himself. However, what it left him with was… himself.


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Postby Noaru on December 8th, 2013, 1:43 am

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Noaru watched the sun rise, slowly but steadily forcing the darkness to retreat back into the recesses of the earth. The start of a new day and he was able to witness its wake. Noaru was slowly remembering each and every sunrise he had seen in his lifetime. In his first days of existence: a blood red sun looked down upon him; glaring intently at him, as if knowing the purpose behind his vague and dark existence. A dark empty forest surrounded him and trees with barren, black branches reached outwards towards him. There were many noises, unfamiliar to him, resonating through the seemingly dead and forgotten landscape.


The first days of his existence were sudden and lamentable. Noaru, the young variant of him, was truly powerless. He could not maintain his form, nor speak, only sense things beyond his powers and hide. He was nothing but a child without a home, without anything, dubious in nature. The spirit, so young and lost, took on the characteristics of the beasts around him. He became a wild entity, trusting no one but himself. The world was simple, do as you please and don’t die while doing it. These were the principles Noaru followed. He stood upon mountains and walked through valleys and forests. The sea was as vast as the skies he followed and the beautiful fields of flowers, in his eyes, stretched endlessly.


Noaru never believed that his magnificent world…would be destroyed. That he would come to question his own existence and be involved in the affairs of humans, ghosts, monsters, beasts and the undead. Noaru was starting to remember everything piece of memory, every fragment that made up his existence was returning and conjoining to be one, once again. This made him remember something, something distant and cold. A part of him that was lost and shattered took root within his mind but could not properly maintain its influence and reveal itself.


“ What must I truly remember, Fate. This visage must be released from obscurity for me to see it!”


Noaru steps forward, off the edge of tall pillar of salt and down towards the freezing waters beneath him. The spirits form gently touches the water’s surface as ripples disturbed his reflection in the water. There was something about the calmness of a partially frozen lake that made Noaru want to throw something. He searches for something to throw and finds nothing floating along the water’s surface. The spirit decides to leave the seclusion of the center of the lake and travels to the closest shore.


Noaru stood on the frost coated shore, looking for something to toss across the water’s surface. He finds and picks up a flat stone. The spirit lifts the rock with his soulmist and simply chucks the rock into the water. There was an awkward silence that ensued. Noaru picks up another rock and tries to find a perfect way to throw it. He throws another and the result was the same as the first. Noaru understood that his lack of focus was what would lead to the deterioration of his soulmist manipulating technique.


I may need to change my technique a bit.


Noaru concentrated on his form which caused the soulmist around his body to glow with a white hue. He allowed his contraction to fall solely on his tendril of soulmist that was holding the stone. In one swift movement, he flicks the rock across the water’s surface with a sharp movement of his soulmist tendril. Noaru watches with a satisfied grin, as his stone skips four times and sinks beneath the water. The spirit tries again. This time, he crouches slightly and stands with his shoulder facing sideways to the water—with his non-dominant side closest to the water's edge.
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Postby Noaru on December 9th, 2013, 2:22 am

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Noaru lifts another stone off of the ice coated earth. He was preparing to throw the rock, so that it could dance across the water’s surface before sinking into the cold dark depths of the lake. However, a strange noise captures his attention. The spirit’s instincts told him to hide and so he did, concealing his form and appearance: ceasing to materialize to be concealed from sight; invisible. The sources of the noise burst from the treetops in a flock and soared over the lake. There were a few of these birds that decided to roost on the ice coated shore. Noaru was puzzled by the sudden intrusion of hawks, why were these birds flying around this lake so early in the morning?

Noaru watched the birds as they encircled the lake and notices that the salt pillars were steadily being filled with their numbers. A few of the birds on the shore were too busy scavenging off of a dead rabbit corpse to notice Noaru’s presence. Noaru vanishes and seizes the opportunity to be able to have a hawk’s body as his own. The spirit extends ten tendrils of soulmist and grabs a hold of the startled creature’s wings. A frantic squawk resonates through the silent and serene environment, giving it an ominous atmosphere once the animals cry for help stops abruptly.

Noaru noticed an immediate difference within the hawk’s body; it felt similar to a human’s body, except it had wings and feathers, including the primal feel it held. He watched as the whole flock began to panic, squawk and flap their wings in blind terror. The hawk’s didn’t know what caused a member of their flock to squawk so loudly and grew worried at the fact that he was quiet afterwards. Noaru watched and observed the birds, they amused him. A chime or so passed before Noaru had taken complete control of the hawk’s body, he could sense its nervousness but all he wanted to understand was how to fly with its wings.

The spirit scrutinized the hawks, carefully observing their flying forms and formations. He, in his observation, notices a young hawk preparing itself for flight—running and flapping its wings. Noaru wasn’t going to let this opportunity pass him by and he gives pursuit! The spirit does the same; he runs along the cold ground and flaps his wings. Noaru tries to maintain his balance while flapping but found it difficult to do. However, he doesn’t give up! The spirit picks up the momentum and jumps once he felt that he was moving fast enough for flight.

The rest was exhilarating, he felt so alive—ever more so than he did when he flew in his original form. The flock takes off also. Noaru couldn’t believe that not only was he flying and learning how to with wings but also leading a flock. The sun shined behind him, illuminating the forest below and the great distance beyond his sight. This greatly changed his view of the world and allowed him to see just how small he was…in this vast existence. However, he does not allow his “smallness” to take the best of him; he rode along the winds of time and allowed them to carry him—within the gales of fate.

Noaru would not allow no being who belittles him, or any law to bind him down. He’s withstood the boundaries of which destiny had set forth and persevered over the destruction that overwhelmed the world before. Noaru flies down onto the largest tree overlooking the forest in front of him. He could see the ocean and the sun was still rising over the horizon, casting a gold and orange glow onto the sea. The spirit could only smile in amazement—even though his memories were not completely intact and jumbled beyond comfort. He would not forget or grow tired of the beauty of his home.

Noaru releases his hold on the hawk and descends into the forest below, his day wasn’t quite done. There were many others things to see and explore: possibilities and mysteries to be held. He could now feel and remember what it felt to look forward to something. The sense of adventure and wonder came back to this spirits blackened soul and his hatred of life faded: now that he remembers the importance of life and what it felt like for life to slip through his fingers. Noaru looks again into the rising sun as it smiled on his translucent state, it was the same as before: unchanging and beautiful. The spirit departs into the wilds. In order to embrace the wild nature he held, deep within.
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Postby Orion Michaels on December 18th, 2013, 3:19 am

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+1 Materialization
+1 Soulmist Projection
+1 Possession
+1 Observation
+1 Running
+1 Philosophy
Lore :
Reminiscing on a World Lost
Poession: Experiencing Exhilaration Through A Hawk’s Body
Awkwardly Flying With as a Hawk
Simple Things Can Have Big Effects


Final Notes
Another good thread, Noaru. I like this character. Very philosophical, very introspective. Almost a tortured artist, tortured soul. It’s hard to imagine what it would be like to live for so long and yet recall so little. Keep it up. If I can offer a suggestion; a little more detail into the possession would be appreciated. I can give you more lore about controlling creatures if you write more information about him learning to, for lack of a better word, operate them. :D

Please edit grade your request to reflect its completion. PM me with questions, comments, or concerns. 
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