[Issues found by Accolade] Mara Fikes

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Mara Fikes

Postby Mara Fikes on December 31st, 2013, 6:11 pm

Mara Fikes

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Physical Informatoin


-Name- Mara Fikes
-Race- Human
-Age- 21
-Birth- 7th of Winter, 494 AV
-Birth Place- Sylirar, Syliras
-Starting Area-Sylira, Outside of Syliras
Physical Apperance

-Eye Color- Vibrant Green
-Pigmentation- Light Tan
-Structure- Strong upper body strength, light muscles mainly to be seen as abs and defined calf and leg muscles.
-Height/Weight- 5'4/120 lbs
-Hair- Ombre style, Dark brown roots with light brown highlights
-Tattoo- The Tattoo stretches from the right side of her back down to her right thigh.

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Attitude View

-Personality- Mara is very independent and will just about refuse to except help from anybody even in dire situations. She has an exceptional ability to turn ideas and thoughts into solid plans of action. Driven to derive meaning from her visions of her future. Mara keeps herself in check with very high standards for her performance. Having only her companions the ones she truly trusts no matter how close you get to her she will only tell you lies, Keeping her secrets far from other minds. That way if there was ever a situation where if somebody heard something about her she would come up front and say that's not true because well, It isn't.
-Morals-Mara believes that if you do what ever it takes to survive then you are in good shape, If you will destroy connections between people, Relationships { Other than her companions }, anything its good for her and, she will do just that.
-Likes/Dislikes-Apples, Cold Weather, Quiet areas, Ridding her horses, Hunting, Getting money/ Hot weather, Closed spaces, People helping her, Losing money, Thieves, Going home without a kill.
History

Not much of Mara's life was that important, She was born in Syliars and lives there till' this day. Her parents were always poor and only wanted the best for Mara but they were always beggers and could never live up to the expectations Mara had for life but they always tried their best. Ellie Fikes and Simons Fikes, They were the two parents that brought the world in her perspective and led her to believe there was something better she could do and that when she got the chance to take it, take it and don't look back. When she was seven years of age her mother and father brought home two horses, Uriel and Floyd. Now, Her parents saved every morsel they could get to buy these two horses for her and since that day Mara rides them when ever she gets the chance. Although they may not have saddles she uses a plain sheet and the bridles she received from her mother as of her 10 years of age. Slowly as her parents got older Mara got wiser, Taking in account of her snares and traps, Her arrows were also very important to her, A item she earned as she turned the age of 13 and she still uses it. One day her parents promised her they would be back with more money then she could ever wish for and so they left with nothing but their clothes and themselves. Mara waited every day to see her parents walking down the streets with expensive jewels hanging from their throats and clothing that she couldn't even imagine. Everyday she grew tired of waiting on them, After awhile she stopped eating and would starve herself for days on end until she mustered up the courage to move on without them and so she did, Going outside of the city walls to hunt on the back of a horse and nothing more. Selling the kills was the easy part but catching them was even harder, Some days when she didn't have a snare that had a meek mouse or a rat but she would have to resort in hunting the animals by bow. Life was and is now so hard for Mara yet she refuses to beg and hope others find pity on her.
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Mara Fikes
You feel strength in the experience of pain.
 
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Mara Fikes

Postby Mara Fikes on December 31st, 2013, 6:31 pm

Companions


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Flyod- One way to describe Flyod is a decent sized pony with a kind heart and lazy attitude. Aside from that he can pick up his large hooves and kick up some dust galloping but he still lacks the important speed she wishes he would adopt. Keeping in pace with him she feels like sometimes their hearts beat as one. Flyod has been with her since the beginning and has yet to leave her side no matter the circumstances. He isn't the best a being a hunting horse but she manages to keep up behind a prey animal.
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Mara Fikes
You feel strength in the experience of pain.
 
Posts: 29
Words: 17185
Joined roleplay: December 30th, 2013, 12:54 am
Race: Human
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Mara Fikes

Postby Mara Fikes on December 31st, 2013, 7:38 pm

Skills

Archery = 33/100pts COMPENTENT
Ridding = 26/100pts COMPETENT
Cooking =3/100pts NOVICE
Unarmed Combat = 3/100pts NOVICE


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Owned Items

Average Clothing (1 Pair of boots/ 1 Cloak )
1 Waterskin
1 Tolitries
(1) Week's Rations
1 Eating knife
Flint & Steel
1 Long Bow
20 Long Bow Arrows


Ledger:


Item | Deduction/Reduction | Currently|
Long Bow | -75gm | 45gm |
Long Bow Arrows (20) | -1gm | 44 gm |



Heirloom

1 Pony, Price at 50 gm


Lores:

Lore of Skinning small mammals
Lore of History of Syliran Knights
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Mara Fikes
You feel strength in the experience of pain.
 
Posts: 29
Words: 17185
Joined roleplay: December 30th, 2013, 12:54 am
Race: Human
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Mara Fikes

Postby Accolade on January 12th, 2014, 2:05 am

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Hello Mara Fikes, I am Accolade, you're friendly Syliras DS and there are a few things that need to be cleared up on your CS.

Ledger - You need to have a ledger to show your starting account balance and any transactions that you make for this PC.

You have two horses listed, animals in this game are not free you have to pay for them.

You have a bow that also needs to be accounted for in your ledger.

Skills - As a normal human you are allowed 65 points to your starting skills, and you've come up short. So go ahead and add those.

Heirlooms - You are only allowed one heirloom for up to 50 gm. You have two listed.

And lastly you are missing two lores.

Fix these issues and I will remove this intervention, if you have any questions please pm me.
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