Andrew

[Andrew]

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Andrew




Race: Human
Age: 23 years of age
Birthday: 23 day of Fall


Appearance:
Andrew stands at 6 feet tall, unusual for a human. With medium length dark blonde hair and bright, stunning blue eyes. Most humans, of they are 6 feet or above are quite lanky. But Andrew has a rather fit and toned body, used to fighting on the streets. Andrew's skin is lightly tanned and he has pearly white teeth.

Character Concept:
Andrew will often go out of his way to stop the local gangs, which he used to be part of. But he is rather snappy at times and if you are a very annoying type of person, he won't even give you the time of day. In his mind, he has no time for friends.


Character History:
Like most children in Sunberth, Andrew's parents were poor and were deep in poverty. Also, like most children in Sunberth, he belonged to some of the local gangs. But after his deeply loved mother passed away from cancer and his quiet father died defending him, Andrew decided to quiet the gangs and fight against them, till he dies.


Language
Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language:
Poor Language:

Skills:
Weapon: Dagger Skill level: 25 Novice
Blind Fighting: 55 Expert

Possessions
1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt(white)
-Simple Pants(black)
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Coat(black)
-Simple Boots(tan, worn combat boots)
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Dagger
100 Gold Mizas


Heirloom: Army dog tags that used to belong to his father

Housing

Location: Sunberth

House: A small cottage like house with three bedrooms made out of brick

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• The Date of Birth must include a day, season and year. More information can be found on the Mizahar Calendar.
• At creation you have 50 skill points (SP) from the starter package to spend on skills.
• Skills are required to have between 5 and 30 skill points in them including the racial bonus.
• As a human your racial bonus is +15 in any one skill of your choice.
• Sunberth does not have any army or formal military force. The closest to a full military force would be the Syliran Knights and the Ebonstryfe - and even then they do not have dog tags.
• The starter package cottage is as follows:

  1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table.

  Please correct this.
• Please deduct the value of the dagger from your ledger.
• Any items brought must be listed in the character’s possessions and in the ledger along with their price. Several different items cannot be lumped together. A good example of a ledger is as so;

  Item	Price	Money
  Starting Package	+ 100 gm	100gm
  Candle	-1 gm	99 gm
  Shirt	-1 gm	98gm

• Are you sure you do not want a basic or poor language option?

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch