Completed Take Me Home

Sal unwittingly gets a free ride back to Lhavit after an eventful night.

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The Diamond of Kalea is located on Kalea's extreme west coast and called as such because its completely made of a crystalline substance called Skyglass. Home of the Alvina of the Stars, cultural mecca of knowledge seekers, and rife with Ethaefal, this remote city shimmers with its own unique light.

Take Me Home

Postby Sal Mander on March 2nd, 2014, 8:27 am

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Day 1, Spring of 514 A.V.

As the Sharai was inundated with gifts and flowers to mark the new year, so too did the people of Lhavit herald the coming of the new season. People with their important dates and their calendars. Out here in the wilds the season change was not so instant. Spring was but a newborn, and the icy tendrils of winter would for a while yet refuse to relinquish its grasp on the weather.

Barren trees had little to do as the brisk wind groped at twisted and deformed branches. Bushes and shrubberies were not so impotent though, their thick leaves and foliage bristling in the breeze. More rustling came from a group of bushes that had started to encroach on an age old path, concealed and forgotten by all but a very few.

Something darted from those bushes, too quick to identify by the human set of eyes that had been watching. For Kandor Vale and his party, the short expedition up the Aramanthine River and then inland had been surprisingly uneventful, though he did not plan to grow complacent so close to the end. Waiting a few moments more before deciding the danger had passed, Kandor stepped out onto the path and drew a deep breath. "Anything?" a second man asked as he too emerged from cover.
___"Just a critter. Let's move on, but stay vigilant. No mistakes this close to home."

Quite why anyone would want to linger in the Alpine Wilderness was a mystery to most. For Kandor and his men, it was the lure of academic study that had them bypass the traditional notions of personal safety and, some suggested, good old fashioned sense. For the less appreciative of students who remained safe behind their books and maps in Lhavit, it may not have occurred to them that their books and maps would have remained but blank piles of parchment if not for the likes of Kandor.

Still, academic findings would have been of little value if the finders did not make it back in one piece. There were four of them in total. Kandor led the party, a short yet stout man with a full dense beard that bristled like the bushes. He was deceivingly light on his feet, quick and agile, with keen eyes and ears to round out his talents as the party guide. The academics were Cedric Manse and Petyr Delacour, the first tall and slender and who had suffered the nickname of Horse Face when a child, the second equally tall, yet handsome in the rugged kind of way that suggested an element of danger about him. Despite their looks, they were the very definition of bookworms who were both out of place and out of sorts here in the wilds. Thankfully they had Gillan along, as quick and sharp with his tongue as he was with the myriad of blades that he carried. While no academic himself, there was no doubting he could school most others when it came to swordplay.

Thankfully it had not come to that, as sometimes it went. Kandor was no stranger to the perils of the Alpine Wilderness, but was ever thankful for an expedition that did not require Gillan's talents to be called upon. Yet for all their skills and talents combined, the discovery they made upon returning to the small boat by the riverside was something none of them were prepared for. Kandor was the first to spot something amiss. From the foliage his vision was somewhat obscured, but he moved to a better vantage point with silent intent. The boat sat tethered to the tree where they had left it, under which sat a figure propped up. His head was bowed as though asleep, or perhaps worse.

Kandor motioned to the academics to remain still, while Gillan worked to flank the boat. The figure made no sign of movement, or perhaps did not hear the men that closed in on him. Close enough now to take in more details, Kandor noted the man's clothes. Simple garments that spoke a modest tone, while the earthy colored coat looked comfortable and well worn in. Beside him was a worn pack, but no sign yet of a weapon. GIllan had now completed his flanking move and was ready to strike. He looked to Kandor for the signal, blade at the ready. But Kandor shook his head, deciding that the situation called for a new approach. Stepping out slowly, he moved with caution towards the figure, one hand on his long knife still in its scabbard.

"You there. Who are you?" Kandor waited for a reply before taking another step. Gillan had stepped out too, though kept his dagger drawn by his side.
___"Looks dead to me", he offered in a matter of fact tone.
Kandor was upon the man now, looking down with a frown. He nudged him with his boot, half expecting the fellow to fall over onto his side.
___"Yap, yap yap!"
The suddenness of the noise had Gillan spin around with little grace, surprise betraying his usual calm exterior for just a second. "What in the name of...! It's a damn dog", Gillan added with a wry smile having quickly recovered his nerve.
___"Well there's no fooling you is there?" Kandor offered with a smirk of his own. "But the question is where did these two come from?"

Having heard voices, Cedric and Petyr had come out from their hiding spot to join the others. The party of four stood around the sitting figure, each equally baffled at the fifth man below them while Gillan attempted to pet the dog with little success. "Damn it. Little bastard tried to have me finger off. Did you see?"
___"Looks like a mountain dog. Year old or so I'd say. You can get a better idea from the teeth," offered Cedric casually.
___"Well feel free to count 'em," Gillan said with his sardonic grin, though Cedric decided against putting his theory into practice.

In the meantime Kandor had squatted down to get a better look at the man's face. "Maybe come down from Lhavit and got himself lost?" he wondered. "But it's a fair way from the city." Kandor shook his head, trying to fathom this unlikely scenario. "Guess we take him back with us. Let the Shinya deal with him."
___"What about the dog?" asked Gillan, who was apparently not keen on the idea of having it in the boat with him. But he was surprised when he turned to see that Petyr was now holding the mutt, who was licking the academic's face with its tail wagging furiously. With a laugh Gillan turned to the boat, untying the tether as the group made ready for the trip back down the Aramanthine River.
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Take Me Home

Postby Sal Mander on March 3rd, 2014, 2:17 am

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Heading south on the river, Kandor and his team remained alert both inwardly and outwardly. On the one hand, the Alpine Wilderness offered a wide variety of dangers that might rear their ugly heads at a moment's notice. On the other, they had an unknown entity among them. Having found the ragged man by their boat, accompanied by a now slumbering mountain dog, Kandor had seen fit to escort him back to the city where the Shinya would decide his fate.

How the man had come to join their party remained quite the mystery, and the main talking point for most the journey home. "How do we even know he's from Lhavit?" Gillan asked as he regarded the sleeping man.
___"Where else do you suppose he came from? Man traveling alone doesn't last long out here." Kandor was quite right of course. It was feasible a fellow might come from the direction of Sultros in the east, but that would depend as much on his knowing that city's secretive underground network as much as it did a man's skill of surviving the wilds. North was to be found Wind Reach, but from here to there stood an unforgiving mountain range that was nigh on impassable without the aid of the famed eagles who nested there. As for the south, well, Kalinor was a one way ticket for anyone foolish enough to head in that direction.

In an effort to identify the man, the group had searched through his pack for clues. They'd found only a few items of clothing, some personal sundries and a purse filled with about one hundred kina judging from the weight. Fortune indeed for the man that Kandor and his men were no common thieves. The presence of kina was evidence enough for Kandor that Lhavit was where the man belonged.

Soon enough the group had made way to the base of the Peaks, where the winding staircase rose and twisted like a vine up towards the city gates. It was certainly not a route that was traversed without caution, let alone having to carry a person up it. "Alright, well, I'm not risking my neck carrying him up there." Gillan folded his arms in defiance and spat on the ground as if to show his disgust at the idea. Kandor regarded the man for a moment, pondering the perils of trying to carry him.
___"Quite right Gillan. We'd be asking for trouble just trying."
As the group stood there for a moment weighing up their options, the man suddenly leaped from the boat with all the grace of a drunkard, catching his foot on the side and falling in a pile on the ground. Gillan stifled a laugh while instinctively moving a hand to one of his blades. Petyr put the dog down who had become very excited that its master had awakened, while Kandor stood with his hands on his hips, his beard concealing any sign of emotion on his round face.
___"We're not meaning you no harm there good sir. Just tell us who you are and what you were doing out in the wilds."

The man sat upright, a perplexed look on his face as he fumbled around him as though looking for something in the dirt. After a few moments, it was as though he was suddenly aware of the four sets of eyes upon him. Almost sheepishly, he pulled himself to his feet while halfheartedly dusting himself down. He regarded each of the men with his keen sense of observation, before apparently deciding that he was in no immediate danger.

"Sal Mander's the name. Pleased to make your acquaintance." The man stepped forward and was about to offer his hand, before thinking better of it. He noted Gillan's hand resting on the hilt of a blade at his belt. Stepping back, he looked about him as if seeing his surroundings for the first time. "The wilds you say?"
___"We found you upriver," Kandor said.
___"Upriver?"

The men exchanged curious glances. "Aramanthine River? Ring any bells?"
___"Aramanthine River, of course." He looked like he was about to add more, but then fell silent as the others looked on.
___"Maybe he took a knock on the head?" Gillan wondered, growing a little frustrated at the exchange.

Several more questions were asked, but it became apparent that if the man knew anymore, he was not sharing it. Kandor and his men were left with only two conclusions. Either the man had indeed taken a blow to the head as Gillan suggested, or he was stark raving mad.
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Take Me Home

Postby Sal Mander on March 7th, 2014, 4:53 am

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Of course Sal had been withholding the truth when he said he had no idea. After all, it was not like he could blurt out how he had spent the previous evening chatting with a god. As he thought back to the exchange, his left hand moved to feel the mark on the back of his right, as though just to check it was still there. Had it not been, Gillan's assessment of Sal's mental state might not have been far from the mark.

Then there had of course been that terrible business before Ivak had shown up, though that was another story for another time.

As it was he had hitched a free ride back to the city and, if his own assessment was favorable, these seemed like decent enough fellows. They would have left him for dead and lifted the load of his purse had they been vagabonds, and what would their like be doing so far upriver?

Sal frowned as he was reminded of the events that had taken him out there in the first place, but quickly recovered and turned his attention to Kandor whom he surmised was the leader of this little band of explorers. "It might be as your good man says, regarding the knock on the head. Though I am pleased to say I think I can find my way from here."

Kandor regarded him for a moment, his keen eyes looking for any clues on Sal's face. But none were forthcoming and, if he was honest, they simply did not have time for babysitting fools that got themselves lost in the wilds. As far as Kandor was concerned, they had done their part bringing the man back to the city, where they had intended just to hand him over to the guard to deal with. But now it seemed the strange fellow had at least his wits about him.

"Way I figure it, you had some good luck us finding you out there. And far as I'm concerned, man's business is his own. So if you're certain you feel up to setting off, we'll not be stopping you." This time it was Kandor who offered the shake of his hand, gripping Sal's hand with just enough hold to show confidence, but not too much that he crushed it.

Petyr was saying his farewells to the dog who, Sal had told him, was named Corvo. "What a pair", Kandor thought to himself, before he and his men took their leave.

The trek up the Peaks to the Aramanthine Gate had no shortcut and corners that could be cut. Sal had plenty of time to ponder as he and Corvo began their ascent. In truth, he had to admit that some of last night was indeed a blur. But those misplaced details were like the frame of a grand painting, instantly forgotten and easily replaced. The painting itself was what really mattered, and this one was quite the epic. It had been life changing, to put it at its simplest.

Sal Mander, loyal to Ivak and brother of the Azenth. What did it all mean? Had his choosing been written in the stars, or was his the classic case of in the right place at the right time? Or wrong time perhaps. Either way, Sal was a keen admirer of fresh starts, a chance to turn over a new leaf and start from scratch. Too often his drive for perfection had left him dissatisfied and disappointed. But now, here was a chance to start over.

Not that he had a clue where to start. But it was a start nonetheless.

Still, for a brief moment he could not ignore a feeling of guilt nagging at him. Last night would always be remembered as the night he met Ivak. But it had also been the night he had finally found them. Found them and had his revenge.

But again, that was another story.

For another time.
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Take Me Home

Postby Catastrophe on April 24th, 2014, 9:15 pm

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Notes :
This was a pretty short, but developmental thread, Sal! I really like your writing style and the way you transitioned, and although I couldn't award much here, it was written well.

However, I would like to point out that you took the thread in an alternative way. I noticed you using an NPC in a sort of PC perspective. If you choose to use Kandor and/or his fellow companions, I encourage you to complete a write up and send it into the Help Desk where it will approved for future use. A nice thread, though! :)

Questions? Concerns? PM me! I swear I don't bite!

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