Completed Without a Paddle

With the Ravosalamen taking the day off, Anona is struggling along with all Ravokians in finding alternate routes throughout the floating city.

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

Without a Paddle

Postby Anona on March 12th, 2014, 5:43 am

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Anona couldn't help but feel amused at the outsider's embarrassment, especially since the blush spread out over his face looked so discordant with his gruff features. His obvious discomfort was funnier to Anona than he supposed it ought to be, so he tamped down the short laugh he felt building up in his throat with no small amount of effort.

He nodded when the man finished his questions. "Essentially, yes. There are some bridges, but in all honestly you'd have more luck looking for a canal that's a little thinner than the one we just crossed. Bridges are sparse, to say the least." He thought for a moment, considering whether or not he should impart the outsider with a bit of advice. After only a tick or two, he decided that he would; he may have been more comfortable with Daegron than most because he was an outsider, and therefore posed little to no threat to him, but finding men whose presence he didn't find threatening and frightening was a rare event indeed. It'd be a damned shame if he'd wasted this encounter.

"On second thought, don't go looking for canals. I wasn't exaggerating about you being fortunate when you found me in that alleyway; you might be bigger than some, but size means nothing when three or four thugs gang up on you in tight quarters. Without being a citizen, even if you managed to live through an attack you'd be hard-pressed to find any aid in this city." And that was the way that things were. Citizens were valued because they contributed to the community-- because they loved Lord Rhysol as he loved them, because they respected and feared the Stryfe, because they understood how life should truly be lived. Outsiders held none of this reverence or understanding, and every bit of space that they occupied was wasted on them for it.

Still, as long as Daegron was in the city, Anona could perhaps take comfort in his presence, if only because it didn't make bones squirm under his skin.

When Daegron pointed behind Anona and asked if that was the inner city, Anona became acutely aware of the water soaking his boots, the bottoms of his breeches, and the edge of his cloak. By the Voice, he'd already gone and ruined his one passable outfit, he was barely halfway to James's house, and when his employer got home--

Anona couldn't quite repress the shudder that jerked through his body. "It is," he finally managed. "I'm afraid I have to go. Tarsin's is in that direction." He pointed generally to his left. "Three stories tall, near the entrance, or thereabouts. You can't miss it." He turned quickly to leave, setting a brisk pace as he left the alley. Just as he was about to put the whole scene behind him, he realized that he'd never offered his own name. He turned his head slightly.

"I'm Anona, by the way. Good luck, outsider."


oocI think that's about it! Feel free to put the last post up, or PM me if you'd rather this be the last post of the thread, and then we can turn it in for grading! :)
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Without a Paddle

Postby Daegron on March 12th, 2014, 2:53 pm

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She was right. He wasn't much of a warrior and though his disturbing flesh-shaping talent was good enough to intimidate most regular thugs, he wouldn't want to draw too much attention to himself. It was a dangerous city, unforgiving and intolerant of outsiders. She, on the other hand was marginally friendly which made this encounter an unusual one. He dismissed his suspicions though, such thoughts were of no use.

And then he caught a glimpse of her shuddering. He knew the feeling as he'd seen it before. He had caused it before. Was it fear that motivated her ? Was it fear that made her leave in a rush ? Was it fear that she tried to hide ?
It made sense in a place unfriendly like this. It made sense in a beautifully corrupted place as this.

"See you around".. he nodded and mumbled as she stormed away..

It took him an hour or so but following the Merchant's ring clockwise in a more focused and careful manner he finally found an overcrowded and busy bridge to the Docks. It wasn't long enough till he reached his destination...


oocDone and done ! Thanks for the encounter :) Feel free to mark it as completed

The Art will twist you and turn you.
It will break you and tear you asunder; from your scattered remains it will shape you.
It will engulf you and spit you out.
It will fester in your mind, disfigure your body and blacken your soul.
And so on and so forth, through an endless chain of transformations till the time comes and you are everything...
Then you'll truly be nothing...

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Without a Paddle

Postby Abstract on March 27th, 2014, 11:06 am


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Anona


Skills

~ Observation - 3
~ Acrobatics - 1
~ Socialization - 1

Lores

~ Ravok Without Ravosalas: A Mess
~ Identifying a Non-Ravokian
~ Daegron: Outsider

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Daegron


Skills

~ Observation - 1
~ Socialization - 1
~ Acrobatics - 1

Lores

~Ravok Without Ravosalas: A Mess
~ Morphing: Painful Side Effects
~ Ravok: Merchant's Ring
~ Ravok: Bridges Rare

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N/A



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I liked your small details... Daegron's problems with morphing (he should really be more careful) and Anona musing about how he was lucky she didn't want to kill/rob him :) Very accurate.

Otherwise, not too much to give... but a fun thread anyways.


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