[Note by Crosspatch] Arvellas Tallgrass

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Arvellas Tallgrass

Postby Arvellas Tallgrass on April 8th, 2014, 6:20 am

Appearance

Race: Dryka
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Birthday: 19, Winter, 493AV
Starting City: Endrykas
Birthplace: Endrykas

Appearance: 5'4, toned, lithe body with naturally fairer skin that is more tanned from days spent on horseback in the sun. Her eyes are a solid piercing shade of jade with long thick dark hair that one would expect of a woman of her people. She typically wears no braids but does wear to wraps of red silk in hair that in end in black and red beadwork. Arvellas has her string of tattoos that cascade around her chest and down her arms in tight circles resembling prints of a horse. She wears the tans and greens of her clan as well as a modest emerald suspended from a length of leather given to her as a wedding present from her husband.

Character Concept

Arvellas appears to be a calmer and quieter woman of her people upon first meeting her; not that there is much restraint required for such a claim to be made. She is quick to silence those who underestimate her and feels that, despite the beliefs of her people she must work hard to prove that she is still an equal woman following the death of her husband.
She has recently found herself curious for the life that could be found outside of the Endrykas and the safety of her people. She does not think that she would ever simply leave her home and her people; but her curiosity grows with each passing day.

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Arvellas's mother was the first wife of her father and Arvellas her only daughter. Her father cherished his daughter and her twin brother as his first children and encouraged his daughter to take on every task and trial alongside her brother. Arvellas and Fili were inseparable until the day she turned seventeen and was married.
Her husband, Thorin, was a man who loved her fiercely and, as a man who was, by trade, a tanner of the hides that were brought in by their clan, awed at his wife's ability with a bow and blade. The two had been married only a year when their clan when Fili and Thorin went out on a hunt with a group of their men. Arvellas was three months pregnant with their first child at the time and was left in the care of her mother. When the hunting party returned it was with news of the death of her brother and husband after the party was ambushed by a flock of glassbeak. Arvellas's pain at the loss of the two men whom were most important in her life was difficult for her and in her grief she miscarried her child. Her father welcomed her back into his Pavilion following the death of her husband.


Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Pavi


Skills


Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Riding SP 26 26 Competent
Bow SP 9 9 Novice
Sword SP 9 9 Novice
Tracking SP 6 6 Novice


Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of the Stars
Lore of Horsemanship

Possessions
Niall- her Eyktolian Desertbred

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple tan and green shirt
-Tanned Leather Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Hunter Green Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Food is given out daily
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-100 Gold Mizas
-1 Large Tent

Heirloom: Emerald encrusted Knife that belonged to her mother's mother.

Housing

Location: Endrykas

House: Pavilion of her father

Ledger


Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
One life is all we have and we live it as we believe in living it. But to sacrifice what you are and to live without belief, that is a fate more terrible than dying.
~Joan of Arc~
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Arvellas Tallgrass

Postby Crosspatch on April 20th, 2014, 8:32 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • Please label your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name” and have it specific to what is being used. For example to use a short bow it would be labelled as “Weapon: Short bow“.
  • Your lores are too broad - more so as there are skills in horsemanship and . A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
  • Are you sure you do not want a poor language option?
  • You appear to be missing your racial bonus. As a Drykas your racial bonus is +10 in Riding.
  • As it appears you have chosen the tent starter package, can you please list all of the items you receive upon your CS to prevent confusion.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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