[Note by Crosspatch] Cheu

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Cheu

Postby Cheu on April 24th, 2014, 6:57 am

Cheu


Appearance

Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Birthday: 488 AV
Birthplace: Sunberth

Appearance: Cheu is an athletic young man with a height of 6 foot and a weight of 145 pounds. He has dark blue eyes, shoulder-lenght dark blond hair and fair skin that easily get a tan during the summer. Without much facial hair and curious eyes he is often mistaken for someone younger. At his left shoulder he have a tattoo of a black sun and over his body a couple of dozens of scars can be found.

Character Concept

Cheu is a cheerful young man who is curious and a seeker for adventure and attention. He enjoys company and booze as well as being alone either relaxing or training. When it come to business he have learned to keep his head cool and focus on the moment, not letting his thoughts wander away.

Believing that you should try and follow the custom were you come to Cheu tries to stay out of trouble if possible but he won't let himself be pushed around either. Easily respond with violence against violence, Cheu have no problem hurting other people without warning if he feel they pose a threat to him.

Victory before honor, Cheu have no trouble using dirty tricks to win a fight or to get what he wants and look down on people who he think follow stupid ideals.

Character History

Cheu was born as the only child to an mercenary and his wife. His parents being in their late forty's and already having given up on a child saw Cheu as a blessing from the gods.

With his father being a mercenary spending most of his time outside the city guarding caravans, Cheu grew up with his mother in a poor neighbourhood of Sunberth. Cheu remembers his childhood as mostly happy. His mother working with weaving on the side of raising Cheu gave them enough wealth to be able to always be feed and his father returning from work meant a small gift and exciting story's.

In winter 496 AV luck changed. Cheu's mother got ill and despite the healers help and medicine she passed away shortly after getting the disease. He was temporally taken care for by a neighbour housewife until his father arrived in the middle of spring 497 AV.

Crying and begging his father not to leave him in the care of the neighbour housewife, who had taken care of him and treated him badly compared to her own children, his father finally decided to take Cheu with him knowing that he would have to pass on his trade sooner or later.

The first few years after Cheu's mother passed away was hard both for Cheu and his father. Trying to do his best to train Cheu into a mercenary as well as doing his job put a lot of stress on Cheu's father. Luckily Cheu's father managed to join a stable group of older mercenaries who only took jobs guarding caravans on somewhat safe trade routes.

After a few seasons most of the old mercenaries had become fond of Cheu and viewed him as a mascot for the group, entertaining him with stories of past and helping out with his training, passing on some of their knowledge to Cheu.

As Cheu got older he got to help out more when it actually came to the few combat encounters. Instead of the order to run and hide he now got to stay in the background guarding the rear while the older men fought.

Despite the way the old mercenary's might look they were veteran fighters all still capable and working well as a unit. Many bandits who thought they had found a easy prey found themselves quickly outflanked and dominated in a fight by the old men.

Casualties did however occur and in 505 AV Cheu's father was hit by a arrow piercing his lung. Cheu's father managed to stay alive for a few days before finally passing on. Dealing with death was nothing new to Cheu, but losing his father was tough to deal with.

Cheu stayed with the group of mercenary's for a few more years now with the role of a fully grown fighter earning his full share of the payment received. Finally he decided he wanted to explore the world outside of the familiar routes and left the mercenary group in 511 AV. Cheu have been travelling ever since without a clear goal on what to do next.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Pavi
Poor Language: Navi


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Longsword 30 SP 30 Competent
Shield 15 SP 15 Novice
Brawling 5 SP 5 Novice
Wilderness Survival 5 SP 5 Novice
Land Navigation 5 SP 5 Novice
Medicine 5 SP 5 Novice
Lores
Lore of Sunberth Street Layout
Lore of Sunberth Culture
Possessions
1 Set of Clothing:
-Brown fur cloak
-Wool shirt
-Leather belt
-Rough brown leather pants
-Wool pants (under the leather pants)
-Black leather boots
-Wool muffler
-Armless leather jacket
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Sharpening Stone, Personal
-Healer’s Kit
-Blanket, Winter
-Bedroll
-Tent, one-person
-2 Torch
1 Rucksack which contains:
-Food for a week
Weapons & Armors
-Longsword
-Small steel shield
-Leather armor
Heirloom: Worn wood carving of a woman.
Housing
Location: Sunberth
House: Aquillar Hot Springs
Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +600 GM 600 GM
Staring gear -100 GM 500 GM


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Cheu

Postby Crosspatch on April 27th, 2014, 2:46 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • The Date of Birth must include a day, season and year. More information can be found on the Mizahar Calendar.
  • Did you mean Nari instead of Navi? Nari is a very difficult language for outsiders of the Inarta to learn and would require a lot of practice with a native speaker - please take this into consideration.
  • It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
  • Please label your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name.” For example to use a longsword it would be labelled as “Weapon: longsword“. The same goes for shield.
  • All items purchased at creation are required to be listed separately, not in one big bulk sum.
  • Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the single environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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