Completed Where am I? (Phobius)

[Darkalin Pinewood]

Read thisThis post will be in my Self-modding voice.

The three men moved through the city, getting lost more than once. But, despite that, they soon came to the restaurant known only as The Rose. It was nice and comfortable. The tables were long, the food was warm.

Darkalin quickly explained that Bruka was a thin soup, native to Kalinor. Sadly, they did not sell it at The Rose. He would have loved to taste a treat that his father had made often. But he had other thing to eat, all of which were delicious.

The three spoke of many things, such as what they thought of the city, what they were here for, how long they'd stay, among other things. It was happy times, times that one could not see in Ravok, feel in Kenash, hear in Sahova. It was genuine Alvadas Happiness.

By the time Darkalin left, the day was late, and there was much to do. He rode of, a smile on his face. He would remember this day, as it had escalated from a rather disappointing event to Merriness. And thus, he went.

[Caela Dorin]

Grade Awarded Darkalin Experience Skill XP Earned Observation 1 Socialisation 2 Lores • Lore Earned • Robbed in Alvadas • Helped by a Zith • Edgar: A Zith • Phobius: An unexpected acquaintance • Location: The Rose Phobius Experience Skill XP Earned Observation 2 Socialisation 2 Lores • Lore Earned • The cost of using Unstable Stables • Finding one's way in Alvadas • Meeting a red eyed stranger • Edgar: Mister Furry Man • Location: The Rose Edgar Experience Skill XP Earned Intimidation 1 Observation 1 Lores • Lore Earned • Stopping a robbery • Helping a stranger • Frightening a child • Phobius: A red haired man • Location: The Rose Additional Comments Well that was an eventful thread. When I first read the summary, I was thinking that it was a packed thread but the fact that you squeezed so much into so small a thread is unbelievable. That being said a number of the posts were quite short. About 300 words is considered a minimum that a post should be. It means that the people you write with have a better chance of coming up with a good response because they have more to react to. Bear that in mind in the future. Darkalin and Edgar: Could you please be careful about what colour text you use as some of them are difficult to read. If you want to use coloured text, it might be better to add a background colour to your post. You can do that for instance by using {frame=black} at the beginning of the post and then {/frame} at the end except with square brackets like these ->[ ] Nobody is saying that you have to do it but if you plan on using coloured text then doing it this way makes it much easier to read. Also check the BBCodes thread for further details. Anyway, great thread folks! Please edit or delete your grade request and PM me if you have any questions or concerns about your grade. x