Elizabeth

[Elizabeth Morgan]

Character Name http://www.polyvore.com/tigi_long_red_wavy_hair/thing?id=51495900 name: her real name is Thea but she hates her name her father picked for her so she goes by Elizabeth and her last name Morgan. Race: Human/ Inarta Mix blood Gender: female Age: 16 Birthday: 03/ fall / 498 Birthplace: wind reach Appearance: taking after her mothers Inarta heritage she has natural red wavy hair more fire truck red than ginger. She has intense golden eyes that sparkle in the sunlight. She has very pale skin with full cheekbones. Her hair gets blonde at the tips because of her fathers blonde hair. Since her father had golden eyes and your mom has green eyes. She has inherited only two features from her human father. She is 5'8 and weighs around 120 pounds which is very light for her Inarta heritage. She has a couple of of curves here and there. Character Concept She hates her human side. She thinks her blonde tips make her look strange because most think of her as full bread Inarta. She usually just says she died them as a kid and could never get it to come out. Happy that she looks so much like her mother she can pass as a Inarta. She usually replies that she is full bred Inarta if any ask. She has walls and can can be very shy at first to other races. She is secretive about her whole human heritage. She can be very sweet once she warms up to you but once you broke her trust just forget ever talking to her again! You are brave when it comes to friends and family's and actually thinks of running as a hobby making her very fast. She also grew up learning archery since her mother was a pro, she passed her talents on to her daughter at a very young age. ([ Character History When she was born her dad ditched for some girl that wasn't her mom so she grew up with just her mom. Her and her mom always had a close bond and would never be separated all her childhood. Her mother grew up her daughter with a simple rule: be adventurous. Learning how to climb the highest mountains, and shoot the craziest bows, or even ride the insane birds she has always focused on the fun in life. Her and her mother didn't just have a mother-daughter relationship. They were best friends as well. Through all the memories, tears, laughter, smiles, sobs, heartbreak, fun, and adventures her beloved mother finally passed by falling off a crazy eagle in the mountains. Debased after her mothers loss she had to struggle for food and money starting work at an early age. Wanting to escape the horrible memories she hoped on her bird Akalia and flew away with everything she needed to Syliras. Starting a new life and going for full bred Inarta she has a job and friends. Language Fluent Language: Nari Basic Language: common Poor Language: kontinese. ([ Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency (SP) Glassworking # 10 # 10 Novice (SP)weaponry- crossbow # 10 #10 Novice (RB) Falconry # 10, # 20 #30 Competent Lores Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of Inarta Culture Lore of History of Wind Reach Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple green Shirt -Simple brown Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel - one falcon 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: mothers crossbow Housing Location: Just moved to Syliras House: As a character, please note that your starting package does not include a cottage; instead, it includes a 20x20 apartment with the furniture listed in the Housing section. As it is the cheapest housing available, the apartment is situated deep within the interior of Stormhold Citadel and does not include any windows, only ventilation shaft to bring in fresh air. Each hallway is lined with torches which are kept lit at all hours of the day, allowing for light and giving residents free access to something to light their hearth from. A diagram is included below: ([ Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Traverse]

Hello Elizabeth, before I can approve this CS there are some big holes we need to plug up.

First of all this isn't necessary for approval but there are some issues with your tenses in your CS. Most of the time you refer to things fromt he third person perspective, but then you swap suddenly to 2nd person I believe, with this 'you' thing. I would suggest reading through and just tidying this up to make it easier for folks to read it.

• Character Name: Please insert your full name into the header that says character name.
  
  
• History: It sounds as if you are writing your history in the mindset of your PC (I think), but the 'crazy' eagles are Wind Eagles, and if Elizabeth was raised by her full blooded mother she would more than likely have a great respect for them, even if her mother perished by falling off of one. Also you would need to hash out the details with a moderator to get your PC a Wind Eagle, their lore illustrates most of what you need to know about obtaining one, but under no circumstances ever will a Wind Eagle permanently leave Wind Reach, so that section or your history needs altering.
  
  
• Language: There needs to be some explanation of how Elizabeth would know Kontinese
  
  
• Heirloom: Please specify the type of Crossbow Elizabeth has, she can have either light or heavy, as both are within the limits of the 50 GM allotted for an heirloom. There are also a few other kinds as well illustrated in the Price List

Once these issues have been taken care of I can award you a green check mark, feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns,

-Traverse