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A Hard Day's Night: Part I

Postby Snaeha Datura on July 29th, 2014, 4:56 pm

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|| 5th Summer, 514AV || Place of Purging, Kalinor ||

"Snaeha, we have another patient for you." That droll, cool voice only belonged to one person, and Ayatah rolled her eyes as soon as she heard her superior say her name. Svorador Hellebore was not known to be talkative (quite the opposite), and so whenever he did address Snahea, it was usually for a demand of sorts.

"I've seen to all my cases," she frowned, mentally checking off the names of all three women and two children who had been in her care today. Yes, all five patients had received their equal share of her attention; there was nobody else on her agenda that she knew of.

Svorador was already halfway out of the staff quaters when he heard Snaeha's reply, and to her surprise he actually paused momentarily to give her his response: "Room 12, Surrogate wing. Bring a guard." Then he strode out, discussion over.

His cold attitude frustrated Snaeha endlessly, but ultimately Svorador was her employer, and if she was ever going to progress in her medical career, it was him she would need to impress. And she was certainly not going to impress him by standing there pouting (which was really quite the inconvenience, as men usually were very impressed when Snaeha pouted her lips and fluttered her eyelashes). "Let's get going then," she muttered to the empty room.

The Surrogate wing welcomed Snaeha with its usual eerie silence, broken by the odd frantic scream or wail that set her teeth on edge. Such screams were usually the sign of an unstable Surrogate; Snaeha's least favourite type of patient. It was only when she and the guard accompanying her - a young man called Havien - stood just outside her patient's room that they realised those blood-curdling scream were from Snaeha's newly acquired patient.

"Better brace yourself," she murmured. Havien smiled appreciatively, misreading her concern for his safety and not her own. After a moment of preparing herself for whatever lay beyond, Snaeha lead the way into the Surrogate's room.

She was greeted by a frantic, small woman who threw herself into Snaeha's arms with such force she was almost knocked backwards into Havien. "Thank goodness!" The Symenestra woman cried, her hands clinging onto the front of Snaeha's uniform in an act of desperation, "please, please help her." The woman finally released Snaeha from her grip, and pointed towards the bed, where assumedly the surrogate was lying.

And indeed, the woman lying there had that hopeless, terrified expression of a surrogate nearing the end of her duty. But there were hardier expressions in the Surrogate's face as well, ones of hatred and fury. Snaeha was remarkably unfazed. In her experience, Surrogates tended to react to their given situation in one of two ways; either by quietly accepting their fate, or by throwing themselves into a pointless fit of rage. Clearly, this woman had decided on the latter.

"I assume you are the mother?" She said brisky, glancing back to the woman who had greeted her at the door.


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A Hard Day's Night

Postby Snaeha Datura on July 29th, 2014, 4:57 pm

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The small woman nodded frantically, "yes, yes I am. My husband and I -- we wanted to make her as comfortable as possible, so we kept her in our home for as long as we could."

A stupid act of forced selflessness, in Snaeha's opinion. It seemed a growing number of Symenestra pairs decided that, despite being happy to seal the fate of a complete stranger so they could have a child, they could not live with themselves should their precious Surrogate live anywhere else but their family home. In the majority of cases, such a set up never ran smoothly, as the to-be parents were never well equipped to deal with even the most simplistic side effects of a deadly pregnancy. In the end, it was the child who suffered, which enraged Snaeha no end.

The pregnant woman screeched something, but Snaeha completely failed to comprehend any of what she said. She gave the Surrogate a scolding frown that she usually saved for pesky children who could not keep quiet when they were told. "How far along is she?" Her estimate was around two-thirds of the way through the pregnancy, judging by the size and positioning of the Surrogates mounding belly.

"Eight and a half months,"

Snaeha did not hide her surprise. The bump was far too small for a fetus that far along. She shot the Symenestra mother a questioning look, and the woman instantly dropped her gaze and provided a sheepish explanation, "she... has been refusing the majority of her food for the past four weeks. For the most part she will only drink water."

Somehow, Snaeha managed to not roll her eyes directly at the other Symenestra.

Why didn't you bring her in sooner?

Did you not realise that you were unable to care for a Surrogate?

How about doing what is best for your baby, not your ego?

All were questions she wanted to demand from the mother, but knew it would probably lead to a mental breakdown from the Symenestra woman, or worse, a series of heavy complaints about her own bedside manner. For whatever reason, this woman and her husband had decided to keep the Surrogate in their home, and experience told Snaeha that such couples were not usually keen on admitting their moral stupidity.

"Look at me!" The scream made Snaeha jump and knocked her out of her train of thought. She swiftly turned to the Surrogate, who had now propped herself up and was staring straight at her. Behind her, Snaeha felt Havien shuffled forwards, preparing himself to restrain the pregnant woman. "I am not an animal for you to slaughter and discard." The Surrogate thrashed about, knocking a small vial of water off the storage unit beside her bed. The glass shattered, spraying thin droplets of water and tiny glass shards on Snaeha and Haiven's feet as they rushed towards the bed. Such objects - especially those made of glass - were banned from the Surrogate wing in case they were used as a weapon against staff members. Snaeha threw the Symenestra woman another questioning gaze, and the woman instantly looked even more sheepish than before.

By the time they had made their way to the Surrogate - the pieces of lying glass had slowed the two of them down in their rushing - she had calmly reached down to the side of her bed and picked up a large piece of the broken glass. Her movements were slow and calculated, executed with only one goal in mind that became frighteningly obvious when she rested the sharpest point of the piece of glass on her rounded belly.

"I will cut this baby out of me if you come any closer." All desperation from her voice was gone, and the Surrogate now wore a strange, satisfied leer. Snaeha did not doubt, in the slightest, that this woman would stick to her word if pressed.


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A Hard Day's Night

Postby Snaeha Datura on July 29th, 2014, 5:00 pm

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Snaeha and Haiven both froze, the latter slowly backing away with wide, panicked eyes. The Symenestra mother wailed and fell backwards, her hands locked together in a breathy prayer.

"Now I refuse to die giving birth to one of your... monstrosities. I simply won't do it. So you have two choices," the woman licked her lips and nodded to Snaeha, now addressing only her, "Cut this baby out of me now, or give me some medication so it dies, and not me."

The mother wailed again, and Snaeha sent her yet another cold stare: if you don't shut up, you might lose this baby afterall.

Her attention back on the Surrogate, Snaeha raised her right hand slowly, ensuring their eyes - amethyst and a rather boring-looking brown - remained fixated together. "Please. Don't." The unborn child's safety was Snaeha's only concern. The Surrogate, and the old mad mother for that matter, could both drop dead for all she cared. But the baby, that tiny life form that carried her people's blood, was the only important thing in the room to Snaeha (second to only herself, of course).

She needed to rationalise with this woman, to show her that what she was doing was the right thing by sacrificing her own body for that of a child. "What is your name?"

Her question surprised the Surrogate, and for a brief chime Snaeha noticed her grip on the glass shard go slightly slack. "Nancy. From Sunberth."

What a hideous name

"A beautiful name," Snaeha ensured her voice was calm and sweet. She had heard that many Surrogates felt slighted if their real names were not used (something that Snaeha thought was rather petty), though she doubted that this woman would appreciate the act of courtesy. "My name is Snaeha Dat-"

"I-don't-care-what-your-name-is!" The Surrogate spat out the words like a venom, so furiously that a drop fo spittle hung from her bottom lip after the outburst. Snaeha tried not to stare at it disgustingly. "I have told you the options you have. Which is it?" The woman raised an eyebrow, almost playfully.

[i]She's actually bargaining with me,
Snaeha realised with a slow horror, with a child's life. The sick azo.

Nothing was said between the two women for a chime, so the Symenestra mother's snotty sobbing was the only noise in the room. Haiven shifted his weight nervously, his red eyes darting from Snaeha to Nancy, and back again.

Snaeha had not practised the skill of Hypnotism on anyone other than salesmen and the odd suitor. It was a dangerous game to play, she knew, and did not take the skill light-heartedly. Trying to manipulate a patient was something she had never considered before - it was too risky, what with the precious life they were carrying. But now, as she stared at that horrid woman's poxy face, she saw no other alternative.


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Postby Snaeha Datura on July 29th, 2014, 5:02 pm

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So she inhaled deeply, blowing the cool air out from between her teeth to steady her thoughts and nerves. Her right hand, which had been extended towards the Surrogate in an offer of peace, slowly came to her side and she lay her eyes on the woman's face. This time, it was not just the other woman's eyes that Snaeha stared at, but her whole face. She paid close attention to the freckles on her Surrogates cheeks, a small bump on her nose that could have been from a childhood accident. She guessed that this woman had lived a challenging life, growing up in a poor neighbourhood with a poor family. She certainly didn't have the look of a well kept woman, despite having spent the past few months as an honoured guest in Kalinor.

"Nancy, surely you don't want this," Snaeha began cautiously, making sure her voice was even and her pronunciation clear, "you don't want to be responsible for the death of a baby. Your baby." Yes, suggestion! The simplest tool a practising Hypnotist could use. She watched carefully for Nancy's reaction, and was delighted when the woman did not respond with a scream of insults.

She spoke again, pushing her influence a little further into the mind of the woman in front of her, "you would not be able to live with yourself knowing a tiny life had paid for your own."

Nancy's hands were shaking now, but she still gripped the glass piece so tightly that it was beginning to stain with her blood.

Snaeha pressed on, knowing it would take more than basic suggestion to convince this woman. She would need to create the illusion of some sort of bond between Nancy and the life inside her womb. "This baby is yours, Nancy. And you love him, don't you?" She paused for a chime, but did not allow the Surrogate to react before she spoke again, "despite everything, you love your baby and would never hurt him."

It was taking all of Snaeha's concentration to put her words together correctly, to keep her voice in this strange, monotonous tone. But soon she would need to pull away from Nancy's mind; she could hardly stand here for the next few weeks until the baby finally killed this woman. Carefully, and oh-so-slowly, Snaeha raised a hand and slipped it inside the pocket of her uniform. There was always a collection various plant extracts in there, it was just a matter of which ones she had on her person there and then.

"I... don't want to." The words were spoken in a tiny, childlike voice that Snaeha didn't recognise as Nancy's even as she watched the woman's lips move.

The Surrogate was shaking her head, her eyes focused on her own swollen stomach with a new sense of wonder. Snaeha took the moment of distraction to glance down at the vials in her hand. One vial, filled with a stodgy red liquid, was a potent mixture of Heldrog mixed with wine. A strong sedative, if mixed with the correct balance.

Perfect.

Nancy was still shaking, and her eyes were now red and wet. She stared up at Snaeha with a hopeless look.

Resuming that slow voice, Snaeha gave a gentle order to Nancy. "Drink this. It will make your baby strong." She stepped toward the bed and uncorked the vial. Nancy nodded once, then tilted her head back with her mouth open obediently, at last accepting her fate.

For good measure, Snaeha emptied the entire contents of the bottle into Nancy's slack mouth, and watched the woman swallow the sedative.

Snaeha turned to Haiven, "make sure this room is guarded at all times, and tell the medics to continue to give her a Heldrog-mix sedative every other bell." She glanced behind herself, see that the female's head had now drooped to one side. With a satisfied nod, Snaeha turned back to Haiven, "I'm going on my break."


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A Hard Day's Night

Postby Khida on August 1st, 2014, 10:09 am

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Diplomacy +1
Herbalism +1
Hypnotism +1
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  • Behaviors of an unstable surrogate
  • Diplomacy: soothing with a compliment
  • Herbalism: sedative properties of heldrog
  • Hypnotic suggestion: simple but effective
  • Interrogation: direct questioning


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I enjoyed Snaeha's attitude throughout this thread. Smart application of Hypnotism, too! I gave Diplomacy for her attempt at placating the surrogate, but if you'd prefer another relevant skill, let me know.

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