[Note by Crosspatch] Bijaal

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Bijaal

Postby Bijaal on August 21st, 2014, 4:00 am

Bijaal


The Basics

Race: Kelvic
Gender: Female
Age: 3
Birthday: 24th of Summer, 511 AV
Starting City: Kenash
Birthplace: Kenash

Appearance:

A sense of danger moves with the tigress like her shadow: the grace of her paws disguises the mercilessness of the claws they hide, and the calmness of her mien belies the predatory watchfulness of her nature. Kali is, first and foremost, a killer.

Standing at 5’9”, her human form is young: the roundness of youth is balanced with the sharper edges of a woman just coming into her prime. The barely restrained lethality is there, too, leaking through the fragile veneer of humanity. It is a potent threat to those who would seek to challenge her or her freedom.

The signs of what she is can be detected via her hazel, not-quite-human eyes and her extremely pronounced canines.

Character Concept

Her personality, such as it is, can be described as blunt and short-tempered. Kali cannot be bothered with dishonesty. When she is not speaking, she is watching. In a hunt, she attacks from the side or from behind in one explosive, lethal burst.

She does not make friends easily as she can never fully relax among others. The only exception to this is when she is in heat, whereupon her standoffish demeanor becomes slightly less so. Though, during these occasions, her increased sociability is over-shadowed by an aggressive insistence on being satisfied. Then, once her needs are met (or once the cycle is over), she returns to her non-social norm.

Character History

Both of her parents were Kelvic, and their union was brief and uninteresting as both were bonded to their respective Kenashian owners. Kali stayed with her mother for the first year of her life, whereupon she decided that she wasn’t cut out for the life of a slave. Escaping from her mother’s slaver was easy given her natural instincts, learning how to earn an honest living as a free person was less so. Still, after several difficult months spent honing the arts of hunting, tracking, and stealth, she managed to set up a steady job for herself by supplying one of the local meat vendors with fresh game. For now, this is enough.

Language

Fluent Language: Common.
Basic Language: Pavi.
Poor Language: Tukant.

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Hunting 20 100 Novice
Stealth 10 100 Novice
Tracking 15 100 Novice
Wilderness Survival 5 100 Novice


Lores

Subtleties of Shadow: The Mastery of Stealth
Predatory Instincts: The Basics of Hunting and Tracking

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Flaxen Shirt
-Flaxen Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Flaxen Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Food is given out daily
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Her mother gave her the one valuable thing she owned, which had been a gift from her mother: a bejeweled hair accessory, called a passa. Kali wears it on occasion.

Housing

Location: Kanesh

House: The standard housing in Kanesh, which comes with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table.

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Bijaal

Postby Crosspatch on August 21st, 2014, 8:59 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • As a race, Kelvics have a hard time learning more academic and scholarly subjects (languages included) difficult to learn - even more so before bonding. Please take this into consideration.
  • It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
  • At creation you have 50 skill points (SP) from the starter package to spend on skills and your Racial Bonus. As a Kelvic this is +10 in Hunting or Foraging or Unarmed combat. Please state this.
  • Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
  • Your lores are too broad. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
  • Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.
  • Being a Kelvic and an escaped slave in Kenash is an extremely dangerous thing to be, and would quickly result in the potential recapturing of your character or being classed as a Rujaro - Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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