[Note by Traverse] Kartah of the Tiger Eyed (WIP)

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Kartah of the Tiger Eyed (WIP)

Postby Kartah of the Tiger Eyed on September 2nd, 2014, 11:03 pm

Kartah of the Tiger Eyed

6'3, 150lbs. Dark brown/chocolate skin, black hair, hazel eyes that lean more to the brown side. Thin and weaker than most other Myrain.

Myrain, currently resides in Taloba

34/Summer/490, 24 years of age

Female

Tall, with black hair all pulled to one side and held in place with tree sap, more than likely. Hazel eyes that lean to the side of brown, with an inner green ring. Dark chocolate toned skin, and fat lips pierced 3 times on the left side (held with gold rings). Thin figure, not very curvy, and broader shoulders. Very calloused hands and feet, scraped knees, and many scars (one cut along her neck, three claw marks on her stomach, and various branch incidents all over). Sharp angled chin, sharp cheekbones, but a heart shaped face. Long fingers.

Character Concept

Personality- Very quiet, but agressive, and easily startled. Very loyal to some, not much of a consience, but doesn't love killing or hurting things. Very "fight-or-flight-", 50-50 shot of her attacking you or her running away to somewhere you can't follow.

Ethics - Anyone that treats her with respect deserves the same. But if they betray her, she will not hesitate to bring them the punishment they deserve. Sometimes death, often serious injury as a warning.
Family above all else.

Likes - She enjoys climbing, harvesting random fruits and berries, and exploring the forests and Jungles by herself.

Dislikes - Water, large crowds, and being far away from home (but she will leave home if she has to)

Character History (Optional But Recommended)
Pre-Creation - Her parents were very strict when she was growing up; she'd often get hit, but they did it to prepare her for the difficult road they wanted her to go down. They wanted her to be a warrior; metal armour and all. But as her figure started to show that she wouldn't be carrying too much muscle, they switched gears to teach her how to simply defend herself. Her mother gave her a wooden boomerang as a child, but eventually, it broke, and her mother passed on the familly heirloom, a steel dagger. Soon after leaving school, Kartah would finish the chores at home and run off to the jungle nearby. She taught herself how to climb, but one day she fell, scraping her thighs, arms, and neck on the way down. They left her scars. She continued to climb, until she decided she didn't want to stay with her strict parents, who kept her on a tight leash. She left home at 24

Post Creation _ nothing so far

Training & Skill Points (Required) Starts with 30
    Climbing- 10
    Weapon: Daggers - 5
    Weapon: Boomerang - 10
    Singing- 5
    Brawling- 5
    Escape Artist- 5
    Wilderness Survival: Jungle- 10

Starting Package (Initial Skills/Points)
1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
    White cotton vest
    White cotton skirt
    Brown cotton cloak
    Brown leather moccasins
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
100 Mizas (33-34 Bikkas)

1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a compass, a riding horse (Leopardbred), a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags.

    Climbing- 10
    Weapon: Daggers - 5
    Weapon: Boomerang - 10
    Singing- 5
    Brawling- 5
    Escape Artist- 5
    Wilderness Survival: Jungle- 10

Earned Skill/Points
None

Equipment/Possessions (Required)
Starter Pack
Heirloom- Mother's Dagger
(A dagger with an eye engraved on the hilt- very flimsy, bad quality. Kartah slits the throat of every victim with the dagger, just to keep the redish shine)

Ledger (Required)
100 Mizas (33-34 Bikkas)

Thread List (Optional)
None so far



((I have never done this sort of application- please tell me if I need to change anything before I switch this out of WIP))
just trying to survive in the only way I know how
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Kartah of the Tiger Eyed (WIP)

Postby Traverse on September 4th, 2014, 6:42 pm

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Hello Kartah,

Overall your CS looks to be in good condition, but there are a few things that need to be worked out before i can give you a green check mark of approval:

  • Name: Mizahar's naming policy doesn't allow for titles int he name. Kartah's name should just be listed as 'kartah' when it appears on the forums, etc. You can change this by going to your profile and deleting the 'of the Tiger Eyed'

  • Skills: You have your skills listed twice and in addition haven't included the 10 in Tracking that Myrians get as a racial ability. When you list out your Starting Skill Points you should list which are from the Starting Package with a 'SP' and those that are a Racial Bonus with an 'RB'.

  • Lores: As part of the starting package you get to start with two lores or bits of knowledge your PC might have. Recommended starting lores are put into the Taloban example CS. If you are starting with Wilderness Survival you have to start with a lore that reflects some knowledge of the wild Ex: How to start a fire, Knowledge of poisonous plants (falyndar), etc.

  • Languages: Each PC gets to start with being fluent in a language, basic in another, and poor in another. You do not have to use all three, but Kartah's languages should be listed somewhere

  • Housing: Please list where Kartah is living right now. This is usually either in the military barracks or your clan's longhouses.

Once these issues have been dealt with I can give your CS the greenlight and send you on your roleplaying way, if you have any questions or concerns feel free to shoot me a PM and we can work things out,

-Traverse
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