[Note by Crosspatch] Sorin, the Dhani Squire

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Sorin, the Dhani Squire

Postby Ssharathassorin on November 10th, 2014, 12:12 am

Ssharathassorin (Sorin)


Appearance

Race: Dhani
Gender: Male
Age: 102
Birthday: 21st March 502
Birthplace: Zinrah

Appearance: In his human form, he is large, 6'5" tall and built, looking like he does several bench presses a minute, this is generally because all of the muscle that makes up his snake form must go somewhere right? He speaks with the regular pattern of his species but if people don't know he's a Dhani he plays it off as nothing more than a simple but strong lisp. He weighs around 350lbs. None of it fat either and walks with a swagger similar to that of a man whose thighs are so thick he needs to walk like a cowboy to avoid them chafing. Other than that, he has a pair of dark yet piercing blue eyes and short blond hair that he cuts into a short triangular shape not dissimilar to a Mohawk on the top of his head.
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His Dhani form however is 22' tall, yet stands at around 18' since he hunches over. and is rather spectacularly muscular, his head taking a more snouty shape as his python like snake form makes it and his tail forming at the back, about as long as his legs at 10' long and prehensile. His legs are thick and three jointed and he has three toes on each foot, his arms are huge masses of rippling muscle and end in 3 clawed, one thumbed hands at the ends, his body is still huge and rippling mass of muscle with a large six pack generally on show, following it up is still quite a thick neck, long and thick since it is connected to his shoulders, it comes to a large head that is quite snouted and doesn't change much from his serpentine head, aside from his enlarged fanged teeth. His whole body is covered in the same coloured scales as his snake form, mostly brown with some
Blue, yellow and black diamond like patterns on his arms, legs, back, tail and head to break up his outline, with a large cream coloured section if scale making up his chest, belly and groin sections. An image of his head in Dhani form is his avatar.

His snake form however is truly just a collossal mass of muscle, his length is around 44' and it is all muscle wrapped around a spine, seeing as he has no venom he either wraps around others to crush the life from their bodies with the strength of 4 men or slaps his tail around like a huge club with the intent to break bones or incapacitate. Sharing the same scales as his Dhani form.
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Character Concept

His concepts are quite simple, become a knight and be good at doing it too, since he couldn't stand being a simple hunter in his nest, he grew as a person and decided he should leave. He is a large person with a fairly reserved personality, it takes a lot to anger him and he knows how the races treat other races, although he has a natural dislike for the other sub-races of his kind he dislikes no others in particular. He knows that humans especially fear what they cannot understand and as a result choose to belittle them. Although he has feelings and they get hurt he tends to brush it off somewhat. He wishes to become a hero and hopes that by becoming a Syliran knight he can accomplish this feat, aware of the collossal journey ahead he is very willing to do what is asked of him by his superiors but will not take a life without good reason.

His problem is that he's a carnivore and has trouble maintaining his self, if e had the money he could but and eat cattle, preferring things still alive when he begins to eat them, being a reptile after all. Also his dislike for the cold means that he has never been anywhere other than the warmth of Syliras ad Zinrah, however he will be happy to go elsewhere when asked.
Character History

Born to his mother Ssharathas, Sorin was raised well, but never wanted to become a hunter for his people as he saw it as a boring, hard job. All through his time as an infant and a young constrictor he trained in wrestling and brawling, he also learned some hunting with his at her which is why he learned that he found it boring. He constantly heard stories from his father throughout his childhood of heroes and dragon slayers and then saw his father show him his human form, amazed by this and how he could look like the humans in m stories his father told he began to try and become human at a relative age and thought he made real progress becoming a Dhani, but it was only when his father had a mishap out hunting and died that he decided to leave and become a great knight. His mother kept trying to pressure him into staying as a hunter however he simply couldn't be forced into the task. This was aided by the fact that his mother almost instantly began looking for other mates which he never understood why but hurt him. Perhaps it was the chivalry and devotion to one women like the heroes in the stories and his expectations of his mother, but nevertheless he left, left on the journey that would change him forever.

Arriving in Syliras and getting a little place to call his own he set out to join the Syliran knights by whatever means necessary, but would always strive to do good

Language

Fluent Language: Snake Tongue
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Fill me in, if you want.

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Weapon: Flail 20 SP 20 Novice
Tower Shield 10 SP 10 Novice
Heavy Lance 10 SP 10 Novice
Riding (Horse) 10 SP 10 Novice
Wrestling 10 RB 10 Novice


Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Dhani Culture
Lore of History of The Dhani

Possessions

Limited Clothing
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Heavy Flail
-Tower Shield


Borrowed from the knights at this time: training horse, heavy lance, uniform/ armour

Heirloom: a huge heavy flail with a small decorative, yet still usable pommel flail on the other side of the handle
Heavy flail = 15 + pommel hilt 10 = 25 *2 due to large size = 50 GM heirloom item

Housing

Location: Syliras

House: Living in the squires communal area being a squire

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Cashed in housing + 400 GM 500GM
Bought large tower shield -60 GM 440 GM
Weapon Harness -10 GM 430 GM


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Sorin, the Dhani Squire

Postby Crosspatch on November 23rd, 2014, 1:18 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Mizahar does not use real world months, it uses seasons. Because of this, your PC's date of birth is in correct, please correct this. More information can be found on the Mizahar Calendar.
  • As a note, the present date is Fall 514 AV, which would make your PC presently 12 years old.
  • What sort of Dhani Subrace is your PC? Can you please put this somewhere clear on your CS? Also, can you please add a description of the real life snake your Dhani is patterned after and fill in the necessary information (the form can be found at the bottom of the Dhani lore page).
  • Are you sure you do not want an optional poor language?
  • Please label all your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name” - including the tower shield.
  • Please list all your starting clothing items. This consists of; a simple shirt, simple pants, simple boots, simple undergarments and a simple cloak or coat.
  • To trade in the housing at creation is +500gm, not 400gm.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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