[Note by Crosspatch] Neve Coolwater

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Neve Coolwater

Postby Neve Coolwater on December 11th, 2014, 1:57 am

Neve Coolwater

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Race: Vantha
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: 21 Spring, 495 AV
Birthplace: Coolwater Hold, Avanthal

Appearance:

Neve is athletic. He is tall, muscular, and built to be tough. Despite being in the cold of Avanthal his whole life, and how the rest of his family looks, Neve has almost no body fat. His legs are very long in comparison to the rest of his body, and they are strong, just as his arms are.
Like all Vantha, Neve's eyes change color from time to time. Although for the most part, you will find them to be either a light brown, or a light blue. His hair falls naturally curly, but he likes to straighten it when he wants to look good for what ever situation. Neve's bone structure is very sharp. His cheeks bones are placed very high, and his nose is pointed.
Although his job has made him a skilled hunter, navigator, and survivalist, Neve doesn't like to dress the part. When at home, or in a place where uniform is unnecessary, Neve likes to dress business casual. This includes a good pair of pants, and a cardigan-like sweater on most occasions.

Concept:

Winter Coolwater, Neve's sister is the most important person in his life. Every decision he makes, good or bad, has her best interests in mind. Neve is a very protective person, and unlike his sister, is not nearly as good at keeping things light. He is a realist and a survivalist, and won't see the good in people until they prove to him that it deserves to be seen.
Neve wants desperately to leave a mark on the world. His goal in life is to be known for something grand, and special. During his youth he spent his time acquiring skills that would allow him to survive outside of the icy theatre that he called his home for the entirety of his childhood, and on his eighteenth birthday, with Winter by his side, he left Avanthal, headed to make his dream come true.
Neve thrives in stressful situations. He is very confident in his ability to not only find a solution, but also to act on it. Though sometimes his solutions are not always the best possible one, he makes sure that the situation gets remedied before it gets worse, every time.

History:

Neve was born only thirty two minutes earlier then his younger sister Winter. His mother and father were very kind, and the hold in which he was born to very loving. It was the best upbringing a child could ask for in the cold of Avanthal, a place that would keep your heart warm.
During his youth, Neve spent almost all of the time that his father was home, and not out on a mapping expedition, learning all of the things that his father knew. This included hunting, fishing, mapping and navigating at sea. He also learned the very basics of sewing from his sister over the years of watching her complete some of her projects.
On their eighteenth birthday, Neve and Winter decided that they were not cut out for the lifestyle that was given in Avanthal. They said their farewells to all of the ones they loved, and boarded a ship that was setting sail toward Sylira. Neve heard that dreams could be made there, and was looking forward to finding out if that was true.

Language:

Fluent Language: Vani
Basic Language: Common

 
Skills
Hunting - 15(SP)
Wilderness Survival - 10(SP)
Navigation - 10(SP)
Carpentry - 10(SP)
Archery - 5(SP)
Carving - 10(RB)


 
Lore
Lore of Wilderness Survival: Poisonous Plants and Berries
Lore of Hunting: Setting Small Traps


 
Possessions
Simple Set of Clothing(White)
1 Waterskin
Backpack Containing
-Brush(Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week)
-1 Eating Knife
-Flint and Steel
1 Shortbow
1 Dagger
1 Large Tent (4 Person)
100 Feet of Rope
1 Lantern
2 Torches
1 Bedroll
1 Blanket
Fishing Tackle and Hooks
1 Compass
1 Riding Horse (Frostmarch)


 
Ledger
+100GM (SP)
-30GM (Shortbow)
-2GM (Dagger)
Last edited by Neve Coolwater on December 11th, 2014, 4:48 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Neve Coolwater

Postby Neve Coolwater on December 11th, 2014, 4:43 am

Lacey

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Lacey is the Frostmarch horse given to Neve and Winter as a gift from their parents (also a part of the large tent housing package) as they set off on a journey to Sylira. The personality behind the horse gives her a very loving demeanor, she will often neigh when new people are around, and act shy as well as rubbing her head against Neve or Winter whenever they are around and she wants attention.
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Neve Coolwater

Postby Crosspatch on December 15th, 2014, 2:26 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • At creation a Vantha can apply for their racial gnosis mark (Ice Reaving) from Morwen at creation. If you wish to gain this please put in a request on the Help desk with a polite note as to why and then link your supplied Storyteller Secret Thread to your profile.
  • Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
  • The skill "Archery" is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name”.
  • Please list all your starting clothing items. This consists of; a simple shirt, simple pants, simple boots, simple undergarments and a simple cloak or coat.
  • Be sure to add the new total to your ledger once you have made your subtractions.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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