[Note by Crosspatch] Eros BlackRose

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Eros BlackRose

Postby Eros BlackRose on August 7th, 2015, 5:16 am

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Eros BlackRose
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Race: Drykas
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: 15, Winter, 499
Birthplace: Endrykas, within the Opal Clans


Appearance: Eros is female, standing roughly at around five feet, three inches, not very small, but not rather tall. Her hair is almost black in color, but it is a dark shade of brown, her skin pale, but not overtly so. Her eyes are a bright shade of yellow, often mistaken for gold. She dresses in a leather tunic, colored deep brown. She does not come from an overly rich Pavilion, but does wear a small, opal bracelet, carved with delicate knots. Much like her mother, she wears a pair of leather gloves, often black or brown. Like her father, she wears boots that would be considered for combat. Much like her last name, she is well known for wearing a rose in her hair, often white moreso than black, which she wears during times of mourning.

Character Concept
Personality - Eros is known for being optimistic, impulsive, and heterodox, and open for any conversation. Despite being quick to anger, she is loyal and will die to protect those she cares about.

Character History
She grew up in a small pavilion, having only her father, mother, and few grandparents there. When she was able to properly hold objects given to her, she was taught to weild a bow, dagger, and hidden blades. When she was eight, she was taught the medicinal ways of her clan. When she had turned ten, she had joined her father in hunting. Unfortunately, her father was injured, and despite her best attempts, she could not get him back to their pavilion, or to another clan in time. As he lay, breathing his last breaths, he had asked her to use his horse, and, hopefully, carry his corpse back to the pavilion. When his final breaths stilled, she attempted to place him on his horse's back, but he was far too heavy for her to carry.

She ran back to their pavilion, getting the others to help carry him back, as she guided his horse.

Days would pass, and the only time she would leave the pavilion was to hunt.

She had been out hunting weeks after with her father's black strider, when she looked up to spot a GlassBeak.

Several thoughts passed through her head, but her father's strider had other ideas. He gently began leading her away, to a small cave.

There they stayed until the threat passed. When they returned home, Eros had found that her father's strider continued to follow her.

Months later, she found out that he was trying to her to follow him, which she did.

Shortly after, she had found and met what would eventually become her bonded strider.


Weeks before she left, she had finally bonded with her, rather, excitable strider.

Weeks passed after the event, and, with her strider, she is off to find new lands, new quests, new friends, and maybe love as well.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Pavi
Poor Language: None

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Riding 25 + 10 RB | 35 | Competent
Bow Mastery 10 | 10 | Novice
Music Mastery 15 | 15 | Novice
Lores

Lore of Music: Simple rhythm

Lore of The importance of a strider

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Dagger
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: A fiddle, worth 50 gm
Housing

Location: Wandering/ Used to live within her Pavilion.

House:1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a compass, a bonded strider,
1 Yvas, 1 large set of Yvas bags
Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Dagger -2 GM 98GM

Thread List

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(Also, thanks to Naiya Dawnwhisper for telling me what I did wrong! I have a feeling there might be more though.)
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Eros BlackRose

Postby Crosspatch on August 15th, 2015, 1:24 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Skills are required to have between 5 and 30 skill points in them including the racial bonus. Please remove 5 Starter Package points from your skills.
  • Because Winter 515 AV has yet to come round, your character would still only be 15 years old.
  • The skill "Bow Mastery" is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name”. For example, to use a short bow it would be "Weapon: Shortbow".
  • "Music Mastery" is also not a valid skill. Much like the weapon skill it is specific to the instrument being played and should be labelled as "Play Musical Instrument: Instrument Name". For example, to play a fiddle would be "Play Musical Instrument: Fiddle".
  • Wandering and travelling the land without any points in Wilderness Survival is strongly discouraged. Please take this into consideration.
  • It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
  • Your character's history states that she was taught to weild a bow, dagger and hidden blades, as well as being taught the medical ways of the pavilion and went hunting - however none of her starter package skills match up with the history. Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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