Finn Lempo

[Finn Lempo]

Finn Lempo Appearance Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 33 Birthday: 46, Spring, 482. Birthplace: Sunberth Appearance: Average height, and build. Fin has long, shaggy black hair usually kept slicked back. He has dark brown eyes, a crooked smile and usually keeps a week's worth of beard growth. He has sharp facial features with high cheekbones, and a square jaw. He wears a plain tan tunic, brown trousers and a pair of black leather boots. Character Concept Finn is generally happy and almost always has a positive attitude, he has a hunger for knowledge, and a thirst for gold. Finn’s been known to be a social butterfly from time to time, when between jobs. He can often be found in taverns, or reading. Finn hasn't been known to help people out of the kindness of his heart. Nor does he have very much kindness left in him. Character History Finn was raised in Nyka, brother to Samus Lempo, Son to Gregor and Catherine Lempo. At some point after his brother's birth Catherine took Samus and left sunberth with her new lover, leaving a young Finn with a distraught father. The first year or two he took heavily too drinking. Gregor had a tendency to be violent towards his son, though it only came in small spurts they usually would leave Finn with several bruises or scrapes. Afterwards his father left the drink and found himself in scripture and worship again. These were the toughest years for Finn, the beatings came more frequent and rougher. At the age of fifteen Finn, dreamed of freedom and the open road, he held several odd jobs, from cutting wood to Cleaning out horse stalls, his father a raging drunk, and religious zealot could only see loss in his son, and as such had stopped talking to him altogether. Later after Fin’s Sixteenth birthday and his coming of adulthood, his father was shot and, later that night he succumbed to his wounds, while sitting on his home’s floor. Finn left that night and set out for new horizons finally free from his father. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Vani Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Wilderness Survival 15 RB 15 Novice Weapon: Crossbow 10 SP 10 Novice Weapon: Knife 10 SP 10 Novice Tracking 10 SP 10 Hunting 10 SP 10 Riding 10 SP 10 Lores Helpful Lores: Lore: Surviving Nyka Lore: Skinning Small Game Possessions Clothes - Tan Tunic - Brown Trousers - Simple Undergarments - Black leather boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week ) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Gold Mizas Saddle Bags -100ft Rope -Lantern -Fishing Tackle, Line and hook -Compass -Snow Shoes -Snow Guards -Lantern Oil -Hand Axe -Large Tent Horse Name: Rorch Breed: Zavian Age 8 Heirloom: Father’s Crossbow Housing [b]Location: Syliras House: Ledger [b]Purchase Cost Total Starting +100GM 100GM Kurki -8GM 92GM Knife - 5SM 91GM 95SM Crossbow Bolts x 20 -2GM 89GM 95GM Snow Guards -7GM 82GM 95SM Rucksack -2GM 80GM 95SM Leather Cloak Fur Lined © - 1GM 79GM 95SM Snow Shoes -8sm 78GM 97SM Crossbow Quiver -20GM 59GM 95SM Lantern Oil (5pints) -5SM 59GM 90SM Hand Axe -8GM 51GM 90SM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Astator]

I have found a few errors with your character sheet. Unfortunately this means you are unable to continue roleplaying until they are corrected. You mention that Finn was raised in Nyka but born in Sunberth? No idea how he got to Nyka. Please explain. How did Finn come to learn Vani? Vani is a secluded language only known to the Inarta. Please list the rest of your skills as Novice as well. Can you please state what sort of animal you are proficient in riding? I am assuming Horse due to your starting package. As a Novice in Wilderness Survival you get one Biome to start off with, please check out the Wilderness Survival Lore Page in the Novice Skill Progression portion of the chart to see what biomes are available: Wilderness Surivival: Skill Progressions Weapon: Knife is not entirely correct. There are a dozen different types of knives. Please look at the link below to find out which kind specifically. Weapon: Crossbow is the same fashion. Please the next bullet point for information. What kind of Crossbow is the Heirloom? There are several crossbows and they range in price from 35GM to 395GM. Remember that an Heirloom can only have a maximum of 50GM and cannot be magical in any way. Check the Price List on that page hit ctrl+F (Find hotkey setting) and type in 'Crossbow' You mention you have purchased a Knife in your ledger, yet your possessions only state the eating knife (which you do not have to pay for). What kind of knife and also please list it under your possessions. Where in Syliras do you call home? Syliras does not condone homelessness and does not allow squatters to sleep in their tents around the gates, walls, or within. Please look into the local inns or take up housing in one of the standard suites. You have appeared to have broken a few of your tags. Please go through and make sure you are closing your tags in the proper places in the proper mirrored order. Example of mirrored order: Code: Select all [b][i][u] The above are open tags. The below are closed tags. Take note as to how they are lined up in the reverse order that they are opened. [/u][/i][/b] When you are finished, please PM me by hitting the envelope underneath my name. Thank you, Astator