Kendyll

[Kendyll]

Kendyll Appearance Race: Inarta Caste: Yasi Gender: Female Age: 13 Birthday: Fall 19, 502 Birthplace: Wind Reach Appearance: What do you look like? Height: 5' 2" Weight: 125 pounds Hair: Strawberry Blonde w/ wavy curls. Goes down to middle of the back. Eye Color: Dark Brown Skin Color: Light Tan Frame: Medium Character Concept Personality Traits(good): Honest, brave while protecting what's right, has honor, has respect for those who deserve it, and is loyal. Personality Traits(bad): Sometimes is a little too honest, not very good at making friends, can be hard to understand, hides certain traits(which are not listed), and she thinks that anyone that doesn't show a decent personality shouldn't be respected. Overall Personality: Kendyll has a strong tie to her family and will defend them with her life. This also applies to all of her allies and friends. She believes that there is a right way and a wrong way, and tries to follow the right path. Often times she forgets who she really is, and argues with herself quite often(not out loud no need to worry.) She has a strong belief that her friends and allies are for life, and will not harm those who have earned her loyalty, even if they are evil. Hopes And Dreams: Kendyll hopes to become an Endal and she would like to travel to cities that need help and help them there. Character History Kendyll was raised by her mother and father until she was 11 and they went off to aid other cities in need. Her grandmother was a main part of raising her and taught her how to play the flute. She has always had a passion in Falconry and since a young age has been raising birds of all shapes and sizes. She currently has no idea where her parents are. Her grandmother is too busy with work (making weapons) and does not have any time to visit Kendyll. Her mother knew a little bit about Morphing, and taught her all she knew. Kendyll rarely practices this, however, and few people even know she learned it. Her father and mother are Endal. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Nari Poor Language: n/a Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Talon Swords # 10 10 Novice Bow Skills # 10 10 Novice Falconry # 10, # 20 30 Competent Morphing #10 10 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of Wind Reach Geography Lore of History of Wind Eagles Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Vinati -Simple Bryda -Simple Undergarments -Simple Katinu -Low slung sandals or leather ankle boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Glass or Bone or Metal) -Brush (Glass or Bone or Metal) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Pinions Heirloom:Metal flute handed down from her grandmother Housing Location: Where in Mizahar are you living? Wind Reach House: What does your home look like? She lives in the Youth Sector. Ledger [table2=#FFFFFF,#800000]Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Pinions 100 Pinions Thread List Link your current & past threads here! I hope I did this right... Please correct me if any errors.

[Astator]

I have found a few errors with your character sheet. Unfortunately this means you are unable to continue roleplaying until they are corrected. You stated that both parents are Endal. Now I am not saying that isn't possible, but please verify this with the current Storyteller of Wind Reach as doable as the Endal are rather high in the caste system and require special permission to even play one. All Weapon skills must be denoted with a Weapon: [weapon name] or Weapon(weapon name) Bow Skills is not a skill, please decide if this is Bowing/Fletching (making bows) or a Bow Weapon (if a Bow Weapon, please state which kind of Bow). It is required that all Starting Skill Points (SP) and your Racial Bonus (RB) are marked on your skills. As well as any and all earned experience points via grades are marked as (XP) Your history is not very detailed, please try to flesh this out some as it doesn't really explain why a family member would train a child in the art of Morphing. Please read what Morphing entails for Initiation and how it works [lore]. Please choice either the low slung sandals or the ankle boots. You cannot have both. Same with the material of the Comb and Brush. It has to be either Glass, Bone, or Metal. Please choice one for both. It appears you have broken your tables somewhere. Please be sure you have closed and opened all your tables in the proper locations. Your opening tag for your tables is: Code: Select all [table2=#FFFFFF,#800000] . Make sure you are also using the closing tag: Code: Select all [/table2] Please remove this line: I hope I did this right... Please correct me if any errors. Please attach your Character Sheet to your Profile. It is as easy as copying this URL: Code: Select all http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic61479.html and pasting it into the Character Sheet slot found on this page: Profile Links When you are finished, please PM me by hitting the envelope underneath my name. Thank you, Astator