[Issues found by Astator] Ami Rosebush

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Ami Rosebush

Postby Ami Rosebush on October 15th, 2015, 8:35 pm

Character Name
Ami Rosebush

Appearance

Race: Mixed Race
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: 80, Summer, 499 AV
Birthplace: Skyglow, Avanthal

Appearance: Image

Character Concept

A traveling merchant of various treasures and wares acquired or made, Ami has only recently left her birth home of Avanthal and has just begun learning of the harsh world she lives in. She makes a shrewd bargainer and makes quite a few decorative wares on her offtime, usually intending to sell them. She comes off as awkward and bashful, but is quick to make friends and help them. She is poor with weapons and combat, but carries her fathers dagger with her for basic protection should the need arise.

Character History

Born of a Drykas father of the Amethyst clan and a Vantha mother in the Skyglow district of Avanthal as an artist, Ami's father was immediately swooned over her mother. Growing up, she would always hear romantic tales from her mother about how her father unrestingly pursued after his love till the day she agreed to marry him. Gaining the crafting skill of her mother and traveling basics of her father, Ami has spent the past month stopping place to place and selling wares, but takes a moment in Zeltiva to join a caravan.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Vani
Poor Language: Pavi

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Skill 1 Negotiation 25 Novice
Skill 2 Socialization 13 Novice
Skill 3 Carving 44 Competent



Lores

Lore of Zeltiva Streetplan
Lore of Religion: Akvin

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Double bladed dagger

Housing

Location: World's End Grotto


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


Thread List

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Ami Rosebush

Postby Astator on November 18th, 2015, 6:07 am

I have found a few errors with your character sheet. Unfortunately this means you are unable to continue roleplaying until they are corrected.

  • Please resize the image of your character used in your thread. It is far too large.
  • Your skills do not fit within the starting range allowed for a starting character. You are given 50 Skill Points at start + your racial bonus. Please amend this before continuing.
  • You can not have both the cloak and the coat, please choice only one.
  • Please attach your Character sheet to your profile. Use this URL:
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    http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic61609.html
    and go to this link and paste it into the proper location: Profile Links

When you are finished, please PM me by hitting the envelope underneath my name.

Thank you,

Astator
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