[Note by Astator] Alamak

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Alamak

Postby Alamak on October 19th, 2015, 6:49 pm

Alamak

Appearance

Race: Ethaefal
Gender: Male
Age: 0
Day of the Fall: 19, Autumn, 515

By Day: This follower of Syna stands at six feet, seven inches in hight. His physic is comprised of lean muscles, with a tattoo of a sun and tree covering the majority of his back, the tree is depicted as it is reaching up to hold the sun, while the sun in turn gives life to the tree. His hair and the elegant curve of his horns shift in colors with the seasons.
By Night:His skin becomes as blue as the midday sky, his hair turns black as midnight, he feels as the sun rises so does his soul, but as the moon begins to make its march towards the night sky, his soul falls into the darkness of despair.

Character Concept

When he was alive as an Akalak his two souls were balanced with one another, which made them impossible to separate from one another when they died to be with Syna. They spent their days worshiping their deity and celebrating when more came to be in fellowship with them. But then one day he woke up, falling from the sky, losing not only the family he loves, but half of himself as well. He is only half of what he used to be, he is no longer a healer, a gentle man, a loving husband; all that is left of him is the warrior, the slayer of the wicked and unjust. And most of all, he feels the sadness of being half, less than what he was, insignificant, a fraction, small.

Character History

When alive as an Alakah his soul had a twin who cared for the world and those around him showing kindness to those who didn't even deserve forgivness, while he soul was full of anger and wrath for those who committed evil. When war broke out between the two great powers at the time, he used his magic to change himself into a great beast and slaughter many. He died on the battlefield, Overgiving while using Flux and Morphing, his body literally ripping itself apart; Luckily both of his souls moved on to be with Syna. Once there he experienced joy of being able to worship his goddess endlessly, he and his twin were always locked in arms as they went about their days. That is until he fell, ripping him away from his home.
Language

Fluent Language: Tukant
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Kontinese

Skills

Skill EXP Proficiency
Morphing SP 8 Novice
Flux SP 7 Novice
Unarmed Combat SP 7 Novice
Swimming SP 5 Novice
Singing SP 10 Novice
Astronomy RB 10 Novice
Acrobatics SP 8 Novice
Running SP 5 Novice




Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Syliran Geography
Lore of Religion: Syna

Possessions

Nothing.


Heirloom: The tattoo on his back is the only thing he has to remind him of where he came from.

Housing

Location: Syliras

House: None.

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Alamak

Postby Astator on November 17th, 2015, 3:02 am

  • The language is Tukant. Please fix the minor error.
  • Please correct your skills. You can not start with a skill below 5SP and above 30SP. As it stands you have 3SP in one skill, this must change. As the math in your skills is correct, please make the change by either annexing that 3SP to another skill and dropping Hypnotism.
  • On the subject of skills, please note that you mentioned Morphing and Flux in your history and as to how he died… However, it must be noted that those two polar opposites in the lore are highly incompatible and even the masters of those two skills are afraid to mix and match with those. Also you have hypnotism in your skills (again at 3SP) please make mention as to how you learned that in your History.
  • Also on skills, can you please make a change in the color scheme, it is impossibly hard to see the text without highlighting.
  • Syliras does not condone homelessness, please state where you are residing. And you do realize that without any mizas and therefore able to pay for expenses as season end you will die, please keep that in mind.

Once you have fixed that error, please PM me by using the envelope on the side below my name and let me know.

Thank you, Astator
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