Trace Legacy

[Trace Legacy]

Trace Legacy Appearance Race: Akalak Gender: Male Age: About 40 years old Birthday: 475 AV (Exact date unknown) Birthplace: Unknown, Riverfall most likely Appearance: His height is 6"6". His weight is 210 pounds. His body is somewhat muscular, more used to agility than strength. He usually wears his long black hair tied up in a pony tail. Clean shaved usually, though stubbles have been known to show from time to time. His eyes are light olive. His battles have earned him a scar under his left eye. His eyebrows are thin, almost plucked some would say. His skin is dark blue, akin to the night sky. A tattoo marks his right arm. Character Concept Trace is an amnesiac uncovering his past. He is most likely involved in the slave trade of Cyprhus(if any). He is a clean-slate character that will be built as he grows in the world. Character History Unknown as of yet. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Tukant Poor Language: Kontinese Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Unarmed Combat # RB 10 10 Novice Acrobatics # SP 20 20 Novice Negotiation # SP 10 10 Novice Tactics # SP 5 5 Novice Weapon: Lakan # SP 15 15 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of Riverfall Layout (subconsiously) Lore of Rite of Manhood (blade knowledge) Possessions 1 Set of Clothing (Colorful) -Leather Shirt -Leather Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple black Cloak -Leather Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Custom Lakan Housing Location: Nyka House: Room in Safe Haven Hostel Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM No house +500 GM 600 GM Cost of Hostel -12 GM 588 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

Hint: Fair warning to all: I have never RP-ed, but am excited to give it a try.

[Astator]

Birthdate, Birthplace, and Age cannot be unknown. Just because you do not know in character does not give you enough reason to not know it on a character sheet. As stated in the Starting Guide, This is a mandatory requirement. Please fix this. Akalaks have two souls within one body, you make zero mention of this other half. Please re-read the Akalak Lore and include your other half. A subconscious lore is invalid. A lore is a specific bit of information a character knows. The Rite of Manhood is not about blade knowledge. Also it is called the ' Rite of Trial ' Please re-read the Akalak lore and make this change. Note: Although amnesia is not a violation of the Mizaharian world and it's surrounding story arcs, we highly suggest steering away from it as a character starting flaw due to the lack of originality found within the make up. Once you have fixed that error, please PM me by using the envelope on the side below my name and let me know. Thank you, Astator