[Note by Astator] Disregard

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Disregard

Postby Nureddin on March 11th, 2016, 10:53 pm

Apologies, this character concept is not going to work out. Disregard.
Last edited by Nureddin on April 14th, 2016, 9:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Astator on March 19th, 2016, 7:38 pm

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Hello there! Welcome to Mizahar, however there are a few issues we need to address before you can continue to roleplay.
  • You have misspelled Yahebah and Syliras throughout your CS, please fix these.
  • Martial in not a skill, can you please switch this to the word Weapon.
  • As I am gathering you are starting as a squire. You cannot turn in your housing as a starting squire as your housing and provided by the order. Lore: *
    When playing a Knight, your Seasonal expenses are considered Poor (45gm per season) even though your living conditions are considered Good. This is because the Knights are provided with basic meals. However, you cannot trade in your Housing for 500gm. When playing a Squire, your Seasonal expense is handled by the Knights, though your living conditions are considered Common; Squires live in communal barracks, and the food provided is more than enough to keep you healthy but it's nothing at all fancy.
  • Please list the actual price of all your equipment purchases in your ledger. Even pre-creation
Once finished, please hit the little envelope to the left and left me know.

Thank you,
Astator

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