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Not found on any map, Endrykas is a large migrating tent city wherein the horseclans of Cyphrus gather to trade and exchange information. [Lore]

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My Way Of Shopping

Postby Merevaika on May 31st, 2016, 8:32 pm

Merevaika brushed back her hair, pulling it out of her face as she rested against Eryunt, back pressed against his own. Beast sat a little way off, staring firmly into the distance. She could see in this darkness, but what she could see, Merevaika couldn’t know. What she did know was that the celebrations had almost all finished. Of course, there were still the small groups that gathered at their own pavilions, but most were drunk and tired, keeping to themselves.

She had been watching them, of course. Now that she had arrived, she had her eyes trained at the city at all times, waiting for the right moment to strike. She needed supplies: clothes, survival gear, food. Some she could get using the wild. For most, stealing seemed like a much better option.

Rising, the Drykas reached out for the knife that lay beside her, fingers brushing the hilt before getting a firm grip. It sat in her hand well, but quickly, she slipped it into the scabbard that hung at her belt. For lack of something better, Merevaika pulled her cloak around her shoulders, feeling almost uncomfortable in such a fancy piece. But it was warm and had served her well as a blanket. Now, in the cold wind of the night, it would shield her in her original purpose. One day, she would get the wolf skins she had fashioned into a more fitting cloak for a warrior, but for now, the fancy cloak and expensive necklace would serve her.

First, she signed to Eryunt in the light of Leth, whispering the words lightly. [i]Stay[i/] she asked, knowing that on horseback, stealth and theft wouldn’t happen. It was strange, sometimes, walking without a horse, but it was necessary, too. Then she repeated the sign and word to Beast, who simply growled in response. As Merevaika walked away, none made a move to follow her. Good. She wanted to break the law alone.

She had a list, in her mind. She needed yvas bags, a tent, tarp, a lantern, a bedroll, blanket, a backpack, an eating knife, flint and steel, clothes, supplies for hunting, her bow, arrows, food. So much that she doubted she would find it all. But Merevaika knew that she needed to try. She stalked forward, slinking into the streets lined with tents. Eyes watched her, but none suspected anything – she was just another returning home from the celebrations.

Before her eyes manage to adjust to the darkness, she stumbled across the rope of a tent, flailing her arms. The rope made a sharp twang and she caught her breath as she landed on the dirt. But no one came out, and Merevaika rose, brushing the dirt from her knees. It was a close one, and she hadn’t even been doing wrong. Just walking. She had to be more careful.
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My Way Of Shopping

Postby Merevaika on June 4th, 2016, 9:05 pm

Moving more steadily, she continued, eyes open for easy targets. The first was a lone tent, Amethyst, from the looks of it. Merevaika moved towards it stealthily, slouching as she walked on tiptoes towards the entrance. She could hear breathing from inside – heavy breathing, breathing from someone asleep. Smiling, she entered the tent, letting the flap drop against her as she settled into darkness.

Closing her eyes, she held her breath briefly as she tried to focus her mind on the task at hand. She had never attempted to use her magic like this, but she didn’t doubt that it wouldn’t work. It took heavy concentration, a steadying of her mind. Merevaika counted her breaths, feeling them rise through her body as Amunet had once guided her. Slowly, the djed in her eyes seemed to slot into place, and her eyes shot open, scanning the darkness with a new sight. There were weak trails everywhere, a mess, but as she focused in on them, she could sort them through with her mind. The heaviest, a golden purple rope, spiralled around here and there, but eventually led through the tent to where she could sense a sleeping body lay. Ignoring this one, she tried to see the trails of possessions that might lead her to the rest.

They seemed to group together, leading to the opposite side of the tent as the sleeping body. Merevaika followed the trails, using this as a moment to build up her practice, just a little. She only had to take a few silenced steps, however, and she reached her target. Merevaika let the magic go and moved her hand down to the supplies, first to the clothing. The first item was a pair of trousers, but they seemed too short, Merevaika not wanting to risk it. The shirt under them was better: a little grubby, but loose at the same time. Snatching it up, the thief bound it into a rope and tied it around her waist, keeping it steady. Then, she turned her attention to the food. Not too much from any tent, she decided. Not that it would make much of a difference.

Her hands landed on something smooth and cold, taking it firmly in her fist. An egg. Taking another, she stuffed them in her pockets, careful not to break them. There was dried meat there too, waiting to be taken. That joined the eggs, and Merevaika made a decision. She had to take a backpack next, or she wouldn’t be able to carry anything else.
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Postby Merevaika on June 4th, 2016, 9:06 pm

Almost running out the tent, Merevaika moved onto the next one, or rather, the next area. Here, the occupants had obviously not had time to set up properly – there was one larger pavilion tent, but the rest was still in carts outside. A single goat sat outside, joined by a handful of striders. Not a very rich pavilion then, nor a large one. None of the animals looked at her as she made her way to the cart, leaning over the edge. A backpack sat empty at the very top, Merevaika not believing her luck. Filling it up with her current plunder, she rifled through the rest of the items, snatching up one of the bedrolls. A blanket was attached around it, and she slipped both onto the backpack, adding a length of rope to the lot. Her hand hesitated by the rolled up tent, wondering whether she should take that as well. Of course she should! These people were stupid, leaving it all out unguarded.

Merevaika added that to her backpack too, slinging it around her back. Only a few more things to go, she smiled, enjoying the weight. Something moved, and she turned quickly, knife already out. “Who’s there?” a voice called, a shadowy figure moving in from the distance. Merevaika glared at it, then realised she had almost been caught. Ducking down, she rolled under the cart, knife still ready. There was wood right above her -if she made a slight move, she would hit it, alerting them of her hiding place. There wasn’t much space to move left or right and she couldn’t come out again, not yet. She would be seen too easily.

Boots marched up towards the cart, right by Merevaika’s face. She held her breath, trying to settle her heart that seemed to be thundering away. “Hello?” the voice repeated, then she heard shuffling as the contents of the cart were searched through. “Marjorie! Come quick! There’s a thief!” Merevaika debated jumping out that moment and attacking the man, but that really wouldn’t do anything good. He had already alerted someone else. Another pair of boots joined him, a higher voice speaking.

“He can’t have gotten far. I’ll go north, you take the south.” Merevaika smiled. And she would head west, as soon as these two had gone. She waited moments, then crept out again, almost crawling as she moved away. A close one, but it didn’t stop her. Nothing ever would.

The next stop was another small tent, perhaps two or three people inside. She left them to their sleep, moving over to the horse that stood so bored at the side. She wore her yvas bags, and her yvas, snorting a little at the stranger. Poor horse – her rider clearly didn’t care for her. Merevaika extended her hand, letting the horse smell her, before coming in closer, slowly. The horse snorted, but let Merevaika scratch her neck. Slowly, the dryas moved her scratching up to behind her ear, before blowing gently onto the horse’s nostrils. Thankfully, the mare was friendly and let her, not even making a noise. Grinning, Merevaika moved over to the yvas, removing the bags slowly and slinging them over her shoulder. Then, she reached to her belly and carefully removed the yvas itself, glad the horse didn’t protest. This she settled down near the horse’s feet, giving her a final scratch. She didn’t need another. “Good girl,” she whispered, glad the horse had been so calm in letting her remove the yvas. Some horses were so friendly – Eryunt would never let a stranger near him.
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Postby Merevaika on June 4th, 2016, 9:07 pm

Moving away, she rifled through the bags, wondering what else she had plundered. A grooming kit – for herself and one for the horse – flint and steel, eating knife, hunting knife, snares. Almost everything she wanted. Continuing through the night, Merevaika kept her eyes open for the last thing she desired – weapons. She needed them both for protection and for hunting – the latter most important.

A familiar tent stared out from the darkness. It was one very much like the ones she avoided, large, with a fair amount of people and most likely web defences. Except it drew her, instead of repelled her. She had camped near this tent, only last season. This was the home of Ywana. She knew that. Merevaika had seen Ywana move in and out of it only the day before, leaving to hunt and then returning, Denviel at her heel and strider under her. Tenderly, she approached, deciding this was her last stop. Her last stop, for tonight.

As she approached, there was scuffling as the dogs came to find her, but none were strangers. They stared at her, confused at her approach at the time of night, but let her be, recognising her as a friend. Of course they would. Merevaika had fed them and trained them and played with them. They knew she wasn’t an enemy.

A certain dog came forward, approaching slowly. He sniffed at her hand, Denviel finding his mistress once again after all that time. His wet tongue met her skin, and Merevaika pulled her hand back, before placing it on his muzzle to keep him quiet. Mika scampered closer, yipping lightly, and she had to shush him quickly, the dog looking at her with a confused expression. Of course. With his wagging tail firmly beating against the grass, he stared at her, waiting for an order, waiting for her to come play with him.

But she did nothing, staring at him, hand still on Denviel. She couldn’t leave him. She just couldn’t. But at the same time, she didn’t know whether to take him. Ywana needed him to. She had seen it, the way her sister had said goodbye to the dog as she took the food she had caught – they had caught – inside. Her hand lingered, then she wrapped it around him, sinking to press her face against his fur. The smell filled her lungs, of all those years they had spent together. “Ywana needs you more,” she whispered, voice muffled by the fur.

Then she rose, walking past the dog towards the tent, night covering her. She pushed into the entrance, the familiar scents coming to her. There were shapes through the sections, there were noises as they slept, peacefully. How were they coping? Merevaika couldn’t tell. Trying to ignore her family, she looked down, sinking nearer to the floor and moving forward. In the darkness, she could make something out, something bow shaped. Her bow. Merevaika snatched it up, grabbing the quiver beside it, surprised they would be so near the entrance. It felt right in her hand, moulded to her with years of use. It was old, but she didn’t have the money to replace it. She didn’t have the heart, either.
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Postby Merevaika on June 4th, 2016, 9:08 pm

As she pulled it back, it caught on something sharp. As Merevaika reached out, she realised it was her other weapon, the scimitar. It was wedged in the ground, and she pulled out it firmly, the weapon a nice weight in her hand. It had come with a promise, a promise she knew she hadn’t kept. Despite that, she didn’t put it back, deciding to keep it.

She had what she had come for, but Merevaika still wasn’t happy leaving it like that. She moving further into the tent, eyes peeled for anything lying loose to snatch. Her foot met something, the noise of a pot tumbling making her jump. For a second, Merevaika froze, holding her breath as she waited for someone to burst out, to catch her red-handed.

After chimes past, and no one came, she relaxed, swooping down to grab what she had knocked over. A pot, half empty. The rest of the food had spilled over onto the ground, she could feel it, just about. But it was full enough and Merevaika didn’t think twice to pour the stew down her throat, picking the pieces of meat out and chewing them hard. It was so good – her mother’s recipe, passed down to Ywana at one point. It filled her up to, the other food she had stolen ignored at the bottom of her bag.

Wiping her mouth, she decided she was satisfied. She couldn’t take anything else from her sister. She couldn’t. Turning, she took one last look towards where Ywana would have slept, then snuck out of the tent, feet padding lightly against the ground. Denviel ran up again, brushing his face against her. “Goodbye,” she whispered, stroking his fur as she pulled out the scimitar.

Without knowing why she did it, Merevaika placed the tip against the ground, moving it down to make a line in the dust. She brought it round, lifting it up and moving to another place before starting to draw again. Her windmarks, of the horse and dog, of Eryunt and Denviel. With one last stroke, she left Denviel to guard to the drawing, disappearing into the night.

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Her sister pulled back the cloth that divided the sleeping compartment from the entrance. They were missing. She smiled, pushing forward into the new light of day. Denviel trodded over to her, pressing his muzzle against her leg. She moved to step forward, then stopped. There was something there. A drawing, in the dust. The symbol wasn’t the clearest, but she knew what it was. Merevaika had been here.

With a quick movement, she passed over it, knocking the dust loose and destroying the image. With the evidence gone, she called her Strider. Maybe this hunt, she would find her.
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My Way Of Shopping

Postby Khida on July 7th, 2016, 1:42 am


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Horsemanship +1
Larceny +2
Meditation +1
Pathfinding +1
Planning +1
Subterfuge +1
Stealth +1
Tactics +2
  • Horsemanship: introducing oneself slowly to a strange horse
  • Larceny: appropriating items left unattended
  • Larceny: stealing from one's own family
  • Meditation: the steadiness of even breathing
  • Observation: judging wealth in tents and animals
  • Pathfinding: trails visible in darkness
  • Planning: anticipating one's own need for supplies
  • Stealth: the importance of watching one's step
  • Subterfuge: being just one of the crowd
  • Survival: shielding oneself from a cold wind
  • Tactics: the opportunity in another's separation
  • Tactics: sometimes the best action is to take none


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This was a fun little sequence of events to read. I was (pleasantly!) surprised to find that what started as a simple exercise in larceny took on real personal significance for Merevaika. I look forward to finding out what happens next!

I have one small comment -- I was surprised that "none of the animals looked at her as she made her way to the cart" in your second post; the implication is that they didn't notice her, but with Merevaika being novice in Stealth, I'd expect at least some did. If they just dismissed her presence, that's one thing; it just wasn't clear that was the case. Small quibble.

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