[Note by Luminescence] Giradain

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Giradain

Postby Giradain on June 19th, 2018, 6:24 pm

Giradain


Appearance

Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthplace: Syliras

Appearance: Giradain is a tall, broad shouldered man who nearly reaches 6 feet.He has big arms and a flat belly, though his strong frame isn't the first thing you notice about him, it's his smile. Upon his strong jawed face lays a resting, wide, toothy smile that oozes confidence and happiness. Above his smile is a small nose and two sapphire blue eyes. His whole face itself is scattered with freckles to and fro. Above his eyes are two dirty blond eyebrows that seem to match his age perfectly, his short wavy hair seems to match it as well as it looks youthful and pretty to most. Most of the time he's wearing a white tunic with brown gloves, leather pants and tall, sturdy boots that raise to right below his knees.

Character Concept

The concept of Giradain is an idealistic, zealous and adventurous squire who will always fight for the good and just things in the world. He may not be the brightest of knights, but he's strong and perceptive enough to not die in the harsh kill or be killed world of Mizahar. His dream is to become a knight and hold enough power and influence to make a difference in the world instead of just being a pawn in a game of chess. He's one to accept blows to his honor rather then to strike up duels and defend it, understanding that such things only inspire more vile and evil, but none the less if provoked enough he will snap.

To boil down his pros and cons:
Pros: Giradain is brave, optimistic, idealistic, and zealous.
Cons: Giradain has black and white thinking, (I.E someone is evil or they are not), is judgmental, and holds a bias towards people who even look of criminal or corrupt nature.

Character History

Giradain's grew up an orphan boy in Syliras. He was adopted by a blacksmith, who abused him and constantly tormented him, the blacksmith only adopted him for his strong arms anyways. Constantly suffering due to his position, he looked up to the knights and government doing everything they could to make Syliras and the world around them a better place. Inspired by this he vowed to himself one day he would become a knight and make the world a better place. Through hard work and determination.

He spent most of his time training with sword masters and mercenaries, using what coin he had earned to train himself in studies, swordsmanship and riding, the three major factors for becoming a knight. When his father died, he inheretited the smithy by right, he sold it and spent everything he possibly could on knightly supplies, when he turns 18 years old, he joined the squire hood.

With the preparations he had took he advance through the squirehood pretty fast in the span of a year. Soon enough he was sent off to Sunberth, to take out the leader of a large crime gang, none in particular, but just to prove his worth.

With a smile, a sword, and zeal he made his way to Sunberth to prove himself to the order.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: N/A
Poor Language: N/A


Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Tower Shield 10 SP 10 Novice
Riding 10 SP 10 Novice
Swordsmanship +15 RB, 30 SP 45 Competent


(HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - Common Skills: Knight Based Combat Skills, Various Trade and Production Skills, Farming)

Lores

Helpful Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Syliran Geography
Lore of Syliran Culture
Lore of History of Syliran Knights
Lore of Religion: Tyveth

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Chain shirt

Heirloom: Thundersmith Greatsword. (Regular Greatsword)

Housing

Location: Sunberth

House:

Sunberth Tavern Room

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM

Purchase Cost Total
Chain Shirt -100 GM 0 GM


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Giradain

Postby Luminescence on June 19th, 2018, 9:01 pm

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Let me shed some light on the situation

Welcome to Miz, Giradain; I'm Luminescence, and I'm here to help! Your CS looks good, but there are a few things you need to fix before you can start playing.

*Your birthdate: You need to include your PC's birthday. This includes the year, season, and day. It is currently summer 518 AV.

*Your history: Giradain would not have been able to advance so quickly through the ranks of the knighthood; he may, however, have a patron knight in Sunberth.

*Your skills: Skills need to be ordered alphabetically and by competency. There isn't a swordsmanship skill; you're looking for Weapon: X, 'X' being the specific type of weapon. You must be more specific than 'sword'; so in your case, Weapon: Greatsword.

Shields also count as a weapon skill, so your Tower Shield skill would just be Weapon: Shield. You also cannot start with more than 30 XP in a skill. You need to specify what type of animal you know how to ride, so Riding: Horse would be the appropriate skill.

*Your lores: Please pick 2 lores.

*Your equipment: Please pick a cloak OR coat.

*Your housing & ledger: If you are not living in a permanent residence, and are instead renting, you can cash in your housing package (and the items that come with it) for 500 GM, and instead buy whatever you may want or need. This would also leave you with more money after starting purchases.

Let me know when you've made the appropriate changes so that I can remove this intervention. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to get in touch with me via PM or in chat!
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