[Note by Luminescence] Aniteaus Mesanetti

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Aniteaus Mesanetti

Postby Aniteaus Mesanetti on November 10th, 2018, 1:23 am



Aniteaus Mesanetti



Demographic Information


Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birthday: 28th of Summer, 504 AV
Birthplace: Syliras, Sylira
Language(s): Common (Fluent)
Profession: None


Physical Appearance

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Height: 5'3
Weight: 109lb
Skin Tone: Pale
Iris Color: Sky Blue
Hair Color: Platinum Blonde
Unique Physical Characteristics: None


General Appearance: Aniteaus is a young adolescent of delicate features and frame. He is a nudge taller than his peers, and slightly below average weight for his age. He generally wouldn’t be considered lanky, as his body parts a relatively proportionate to each other in length, but is slightly taller and skinnier than others in the same circumstances. However, due to his nature, he is rather unbothered by his physical characteristics, and care little for how others perceive him. He walks with a resolution and maturity that is uncharacteristic for his age. His eyes are of average shape and size, albeit with a subtle and elegant sharpness to them. The irises are of a captivatingly blue pigment that immediately draws attention and grant his gaze an undue magnetism for one so young. Aniteaus has a pale, rose-kissed, sarcosine skin tone. He takes heavily after his mother after his mother’s beauty. His facial features are elegantly sharp and quietly feminine. His lips are of a particularly feminine nature, beautiful bowed and naturally blush. His Jawline is well defined, and his teeth are in good alignment and health. Aniteaus has been blessed with a smooth, almost flawless complexion, much to the admiration and chagrin of passing housewives. However, upon closer inspection scars and marks of past misadventures can be found. He has a particularly ethereal shade of platinum blonde hair, which he generally parts neatly to the right. He has a very slight widow's peak, but his hairline would normally be considered straight. Aniteaus generally maintains a well-trimmed and groomed disposition, regularly trimming his nails, and making sure his appearance is free of excessive dirt or mess.

Character Concept

Personality: As a result of his upbringing, and his innate nature, Aniteaus is an atypically mature adolescent. He is considered to prefer the company of adults rather than youth of his age. Aniteaus appears to be woefully uninterested in the antics and preferences of his peers. Observant and reserved, he would seemingly rather spend his time immersed in his education, constantly trying to deepen his understanding of math and physics, studying philosophy and rhetoric, or meditating, than engaging with those around him. Enjoying games of strategy so much he regularly plays against himself. However, these are mostly glancing and unenlightened observations of Aniteaus’s character. At some level those observations are true, but the reasoning behind them is much deeper than preference. Aniteaus does have talent and predisposition towards those traits. Nevertheless, it is his inability to truly connect with others, especially those of his own age, that is predominantly responsible for this persona. Aniteaus has a psychological and emotional deficiency when it comes to building intimate relationships. Although in his heart he wants to develop meaningful connections with those around him, he has great difficulty doing so. This characteristic flaw stems from his experiences with loss and detachment as a child. The loss of his mother and best friend, coupled with the emotional neglect from his father, had a defining role in developing this emotional distance. Unconsciously he shuttered his heart to stifle the pain, at his core he truly feels alone. It is a problem that only feeds into itself. His peers notice this distance and perceive it to be a sign of arrogance, naturally, they further themselves from him, which he, in turn, uses as a reason to further himself from them. Emotional shortcomings aside Aniteaus is a well manner adolescent. Thoughtful and empathetic to the suffering of others. He is intelligent and curious, always eager to unravel the mysteries of the world around him. Aniteaus is hardworking and studious, dedicated to his progression as a student of Logic and Order.
Likes: Reading, Games of Strategy, Meditating, Mathmatics
Dislikes: Winter, Sweets


Character History

Aniteaus is the son Marclnius and Jastria Mesanetti, members of the Ano Cult. He was conceived in Zeltiva in the blessing of a particularly lush spring and born in Sylira during an exceedingly harsh winter. After his birth, his mother, Jastria, never returned to full health. Although she could perform daily tasks, she was constantly getting sick and seemingly in ailing condition. Despite her health issues Jastria was a wonderful mother, Aniteaus developed an exceedingly close relationship with her. She passed from illness in the winter of Aniteaus eight year, it was a loss neither Marclnius nor Aniteaus ever seemed to recover from.

Her death drove and emotional wedge between Maclnius and his son. Despite his best efforts, at some level, Marclnius blamed Aniteaus for the loss of his wide. This resentment festered into a deep emotional chasm between the two. Aniteaus became deeply reserved, and immersed himself in texts and study, a field he was naturally gifted in. He seldom left the boundaries of his home, and never played with other children.

On an off day, as a matter of chance, he met a young girl while skulking around the perimeter of his home. She was strange, quirky, and seemingly fascinated by Aniteaus. At first Aniteaus wanted nothing to do with her, unsettled by her nature. However, after many a chance encounter, and what seemed like a nudge from fate, Aniteaus began to associate more frequently with the girl. Eventually, they developed a close friendship, she introduced him to other children, and for the first time, Aniteaus seemed to break out of his reclusion.

The girl’s father was a merchant, and during the winter of Aniteaus eleventh year, she accompanied her father for a short trip to another city and never returned. Aniteaus would eventually come to learn that their caravan had been attacked by bandits, all were slaughtered. The news fractured something deep within Aniteaus, wounding his very soul.

In the fall of his twelfth year, Aniteaus was officially initiated into the Ano Cult and began to study at the local Librum. From the beginning, he showed himself to be an intelligent and highly capable Weight. Eventually, he caught the eye of a Librum headmaster in Ravok, who wished to bring him under the tutelage of his own Librum. Aniteaus and Marclnius, emotionally detached from each other, and caring not for distance, consented without protest. As such Aniteaus was sent to Ravok to continue his studies.


Skills


 
Novice
Skill Total EXP
Mathematics 10/100 10SP
Physics 10/100 10SP
Philosophy 10/100 10SP
Rhetoric 10/100 10SP
Meditation 10/100 10SP
Observation 15/100 15RB

 
Competent
None
 
Expert
None

 
Master
None


Lores


List of Lores :
  • Lore-Layout of Ravok
  • Lore- Basic Teachings of The Ano Cult


Possessions


List of Possessions :
  • 1 Set of Clothing
  • Simple Shirt
  • Simple Pants
  • Simple Undergarments
  • Simple Cloak or Coat/w Hood
  • Simple Boots
  • 1 Waterskin
  • 1 Backpack which contains:
  • Comb (Wood)
  • Brush (Wood)
  • Soap
  • Razor
  • Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
  • 1 eating knife
  • Flint & Steel
  • 100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: A small journal of bedtime stories his mother wrote herself, and used to read to him when he was a child.

Housing


Location: Ravok Librum

House: 1 basic 20x20 single room with a single bed, a trunk, a table, a chair, a chamber pot, and 4 wall mounted candles


Ledger


Active Ledger :
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Aniteaus Mesanetti

Postby Luminescence on November 10th, 2018, 7:43 pm

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Welcome to Miz, Aniteaus; I'm Luminescence, and I'm here to help. Before you can continue, there are a few things you need to fix with your CS.

*Your history: Unfortunately, the Ano Cult is being rewritten; as such, I strongly recommend removing mention of it from your history. Initiation also implies receiving a gnosis mark from Gnora, which you would have to apply for, and they are not being granted at the moment due to the rewrite in any case.

As well as this, there is no Ano Cult in Ravok, and even if there was it is highly unlikely someone from Ravok would become aware of someone in Syliras unless they were highly talented and renowned in some regard.

*Your skills: Please list your skills in alphabetical order. I also highly recommend removing SP points from Observation and distributing them elsewhere, as it (along with Socialization) is by far the easiest skill to gain through writing, and is a bit of a waste of SP points.

*Your lores: Due to what I mentioned about the Ano Cult, your lore about them is unfortunately not appropriate. Might I suggest a lore to do with one of the skills you have?

*Your possessions: Please pick a cloak OR coat.

*Your housing: As there is no Ano Cult in Ravok, there isn't a librum for Aniteaus to stay at. Please take a look at Ravok's codex in the city forum to see what sort of housing they offer, which differs based on whether one is a citizen or not.

Let me know once you have made the above corrections so that I can remove this intervention. Otherwise, if you have any questions, don't hesitate to PM me or find me in chat!
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