[Note by Kraken] Kalicsea

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Kalicsea

Postby BATTS on October 3rd, 2012, 10:19 pm




Physical Description
Name: Kalicsea
Race: Ethaefa
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Birthday: summer of 489

Cast from the life she knew her faith shattered like the waves beneath her freezing her fall colors forever.
Her long ringlet curled hair once the pale blond of the sun now a deep dark luster of its formal glory dark auburn, the gold streams that once ran rampant through the fields of wheat faded to nothing. Her curled ram horns lost their glow of vibrant yellow and gold now falling to the moon side became deep red with gold at its base. Her eyes once cobalt blue of the sun now fluttered to the darkness of green. Slender and taunt her 5'7 frame was solid, her skin once had a golden hue now only a shimmer warmer then marble.
With the glow of the moon her skin become etched with her corrupted soul barbs and snags lining her arms and twisting around her hips and midsection. While she watches the sky with anger her hearts longs to return to what she had once been in a time that been far better then her time now.

Character Concept
Smooth would be her last name if she carried one. She is wise with her words only saying enough to entice or get what she wants. Over time she learned with her body she could lure men into doing just about anything she needed them to do for her, steal, start a war with another group sacrifice themselves for her. She didn't even realize it was a talent till she noticed that it hardly took effort to make them do it! The sun allows her to attempt to heal and make her new life a stepping stone to returning to her former glory. While she isn't a woman that carries her heart on her sleeve she does have one. When she isn't thieving, conning and running a muck with a pirate crew she is seeking a true companion instead of a mark...or someone she has to pay. With the night turning her heart freezes and she curses the skies alone, seeking solitude in her moments of weakness makes comfort difficult unless you are a good tracker.

Character History
"The only sensation you have is...falling. The heat of the wind, the whistle's shrill cry in my ears like a scream trying to wake me. I was in a dream, so I thought, till I crashed the water icy wall then all I thought was... I'm not dreaming...
I smashed the white capped waves of the Suvan sea. The dark blue waters were chilled from the coming of fall, the chill grasped my heart like a hand clutching for a grip. My eyes watched the waves above me noting the bubbles that surrounded my like a blanket. Betrayed. As I sank the sky became farther and farther away and with it my will to swim to the surface. My long hair danced around me. It's pale wheat colors faded before my very eyes with each doubt that entered my brain, its strange appearance turned on me before my eyes as it no longer flowed harmlessly around me. Its thick bands of hair like arm wrapped around my throat constricting my own arms the more I pretended to struggle. Then everything was still I stared at the dimming sky it's light dimming...wait... it was me I knew I was dying.
When I woke up I wasn't dead... I only knew this from the pain that my body was in. With every rock and sway my body twinged with pain, with ever footstep I could feel heat returning. The door opened and my eyes protested to open, with much will power I opened them to see my savor. The man who had dove into the chilling waters to save someone he didn't even know.

"you look like you be seenin better days huh?" He smiled his handsome face dimpling at the cheeks. "I take it you don't speak our tongue so I didn't expect a response. I have heard your kind though a fishing boat not five days ago saw a similar thing though... they didn't dive in to save it. It tried with all its might but...nothing glad you weren't a monster that's all I am saying." I didn't have a clue as to what he was saying but his jesters told me he was talking about me...I understood other and monster. Though he didn't seem like he was repulsed I knew I should tread carefully till I got my baring...all I knew is I was still on the sea that tried to take what was left of my soul.
I stayed on the boat for a week not leaving the room till my strength had returned, but one thing was for sure, my savor came back every night to check on me and give me a short lesson in common tongue before sitting in his old chair that smelled of sea salt and his scent. He would sit for a couple minutes talking about this new world then would drift off to sleep.

Another week passed my skills improving and I found my courage to leave the room outside. He showed me the ways of the fish, how to clean them, how to cook them. After that he stopped bringing me meals saying, "Give a man a fish you feed him for a day, teach a man to fish you feed him for life." I don't know why that saying stuck with me but it did I warped it eventually into my own twisted saying giving me resolve for my crimes on "innocent" people.
Another week I was proficient enough at common and a fairly good fisher enough to feed myself. It was that night we made port and he took me to his favorite bar, bought my drinks of strange fluid and soon I became lost in a world of dance, laughter and bliss. He led me to the beach staggering along side till we couldn't walk any further.
"This is the life my friend." He would always say, "Never think anything is out of reach."

I woke up the next morning with a headache and nothing to my name, my savor had taken what little things I had including most of my clothes. I found a note beside me saying :
First lesson of the world love, have a goal if you seek revenge then you will be determined enough to find me again, nothing is out of reach.
-A


From there I stole clothing, supplies and lived off the land from there on out only seeking human interaction when something was needed. That was till I discovered I was good with words and misleading people from the truth, I soon was known as the Silver tongue. I still look for my mystery man who showed me how to live on my own, and one day I would find him. He was wrong of course I already had a goal and it was to bring the very godly place where I was pushed from to the ground so that all would feel the falling pain.

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak/coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Heirloom: Flametongue 40 gm




Housing:
No housing currently living along the cost line, base of cliffs in large boulders digging a small inlay for cover using discovered drift wood from the beach. With Falls arrival and the chill of water relocation to a forested area might be in the picture. ( Riverfalls base)


Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +600 GM 600 GM



Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages


Skills: 50 sp - 10 RB

Flametongue SP- 5
Subterfuge SP- 26 (competent)
Wilderness survival SP- 10 (Novice)
Fishing-5 SP (Novice)
Persuasiveness -5 SP (novice)
Astronomy- 10 RB


Practiced Languages:
Tukant
Common

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Tukant
Poor Language: NA

Lore:
Lore of Subterfuge liveing off others slower wits.
Lore of Seeing betrayal as a gift

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Last edited by BATTS on October 5th, 2012, 3:01 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Batts and Kalicsea

Postby Kraken on October 4th, 2012, 2:47 am

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Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

It's always lovely to see another Ethaefel join Mizahar! They're such an interesting race. I really enjoyed your story of her fall. That being said, there are some notes I'd love for you to take a look at before you move forward.

  • Name & Thread Title: Your account name must match your character's name. If her name is "Kalicsea," please change your account name to be "Kalicsea" and make your thread title for your character sheet the same name. If you have any questions about how to do this, feel free to PM me!
  • Age & Birthday: Even if your character does not know her own birthday and age, you must still include it in your character sheet.
  • Gender: Although it may seem obvious, we do ask that you include your character's gender on your CS.
  • Housing: Even though you've chosen to take the 500GM rather than a housing package, you must still specify where your character is living.
  • Skills: It looks like you're missing your racial bonus! For Ethaefal, the racial bonus is either +10 XP in Astronomy or +10 XP in Astrology.
    • As well, please specify whether a skill is from the starting package (SP) or a racial bonus (RB).
    Proper Skill Setup :
    After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.

    Examples

    Skills Exp Total Proficiency
    Auristics 15 SP, 72 XP 87 Master
    Seduction 18 SP, 3 XP 21 Novice
    Glassworking 10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP 57 Expert
    Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice
    Sewing 13 XP 13 Novice
    Weapon: Javelin 1 XP 1 Novice
    Acrobatics 85 XP 85 Master


    SP = Starting Points
    RB = Racial Bonus Points
    XP = Earned Experience Points


    Example 2:

    Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
    Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
    Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
    Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
    Sewing: 13/100
    Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
    Acrobatics: 85/100


    Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
  • Heirloom: There is no price for a "Twisted Dagger" on the Price List. If you could adjust your heirloom, and the corresponding skill, to one of the daggers included on the price list, that would be great.
  • Lores: Both of your lores are a bit too vague and sound more like skills. Please specify your PC's exact knowledge. What does she know, specifically, about seduction? What piece of knowledge does she have about survival?
Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!


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