Alyvina Theldin

[Alyvina Theldin]

Name: Alyvina Theldin
Race: Human
Birthday and Age: 493 AV, 17 Spring (19 years old)
Gender: Female

Physical Description: 5'5", 150 lbs. Alyvina has long, dark brown hair that she keeps loosely pulled into a braid. She has fair but dirty skin, with a kind smile and soft, innocent features. A piece of cloth is always tied around her eyes, for she has no eyes. She dresses in a dark green tattered robe and simple sandals. She carries a staff made from an oak branch and it has a normal green rock secured into the top of it.

Personality: Alyvina is kind and wise beyond her years and she is always willing to help those in need. She is a deep thinker and she has a deep respect for nature.

Likes: Traveling, especially in natural places. She likes thinking, helping and preserving nature.

Dislikes: Loud noises, death, destruction, hate, and violence.

Pre-Creation:

Equipment (Starting Package):
-Green, tattered robe
-Simple sandals
-Small satchel
-water skin

Heirloom: Staff (Explorer's Staff)

Money: 25 gold rimmed mizas

Housing: The Great Outdoors
(Note: This is all she will start out with. The idea is that she is a poor vagabond.)

Skills:
Skill SP Total Proficiency
Wilderness Survival 30SP 30 Novice
Blind Fighting 15RB 15 Novice
Herbalism 20SP 20 Novice


Lore:
Lore of
Lore of

Languages:
Language Fluency
Common Fluent
Kontinese Basic

[Kraken]

Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

You've got a very interesting character here, Alyvina! Caiyha is a fascinating goddess, and I'm am looking forward to see how your PC's devotion to her works to further your roleplaying. Now, I just have some notes for you to take a look at before beginning the game.

• Thread Title: It would be great if you could adjust your character sheet thread title to match your account name ("Alyvina Theldin").
• Gnosis: In order for your PC to start with Caiyha's gnosis, you will need to apply for permission from the Help Desk by writing your character's gnosis story (even if the mark won't come into play until later, as you've written). You can find examples of gnosis stories on the Q&A thread.
• Heirloom: A staff is fine to have as an heirloom, but I would appreciate it if you could specify exactly what type of staff it is, as there are many varieties listed on the price list. Remember, your staff must be less than 50GM. The Explorer's Staff or the Kestrel Stand staff might be good options.
  
  • As well, you mentioned in your concept that your staff has a "green stone set into the top of it." Is this a gemstone, or simply a glass stone? If it is a gemstone, that will unfortunately take the price of your heirloom over 50GM.
  • You also mention that your staff is blessed by Caiyha ("with a small ammount of her power and wisdom"). You will need permission for this as well, and I would recommend mentioning it when you apply for your gnosis at the Help Desk.
• Possessions: Will you be including any of the other starting possessions in your items? Ex. Comb (Wood), Brush (Wood), Soap, Razor, Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth), 1 eating knife, Flint & Steel. If not, please make a note of this.
• Money: Please note that every character starts with 100GM. Have you decided to start with only 25 instead? Please make a clear note of this if this is the case.
• Housing: While your character may have a novice level of Wilderness Survival skill, Mizahar is a very dangerous place and you may want to consider taking the Tent Package to aid your character. If you decide not to take a housing package, you're free to add the extra 500GM into your ledger.
• Skills: As a human, your character gets to start with 15 points for their racial bonus to put towards any one skill (as long as the total points in that skill do not exceed 30). Feel free to add this in, and note where the points have come from.
  
  • When you set up your skills, we do ask that you specify whether your points come from the starting package (SP) or your racial bonus (RB). Please adjust your skills to reflect this.
  Proper Skill Setup :

  After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.
  
  Examples
  
  

  Skills	Exp	Total	Proficiency
  Auristics	15 SP, 72 XP	87	Master
  Seduction	18 SP, 3 XP	21	Novice
  Glassworking	10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP	57	Expert
  Intelligence	5 SP	5	Novice
  Sewing	13 XP	13	Novice
  Weapon: Javelin	1 XP	1	Novice
  Acrobatics	85 XP	85	Master

  
  
  SP = Starting Points
  RB = Racial Bonus Points
  XP = Earned Experience Points
  
  
  Example 2:
  
  Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
  Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
  Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
  Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
  Sewing: 13/100
  Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
  Acrobatics: 85/100
  
  
  Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
• Lore: Your lore of "Blind Survival" is a bit too broad and seems to be more of a skill than a piece of knowledge. Please be more specific - what exact piece of knowledge does your character have of blind survival?
  
  • As well, each character can start with 2 lores. Feel free to add a second one in. You can find some great examples on the CS Templates.

Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!

Kraken